Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147) - Page 95

Originally posted by: maggi.masala

Ossam as alwayz Dada...really liked the suspence...n aftr readng tagline of lv story i thot it wud related to obsessed lvr... Unfortunately i too hav presentation phobia..pta nhi kb jayega... Anyways thanx dada fr sweet drmz

Originally posted by: Forfriend

Uppss DADA 😆 Bari aankhun wali 🤣

First when I started reading I was Like arre yeh Dada thik toh hai

I am not expecting a love story from You

You you of course know why 😆

But yaar Its really nice showing really a new shed of Daya to tackle this things its lovely

gr8 Job BH 👏

Originally posted by: -De.De-

Mera detail review toh pehle hi jaanti ho... once again, awesome work!!👏👏👏

Originally posted by: visrom

I read this one...one point...

Daya's weight Weight: 120 lbs'??? 😲'.this is too less'.

ohhh... 😆

The other thing...frankly I don't get the hang of this Rahul who pops into every story of yours. It's one thing to have a new character in one story, but if he turns into a regular CID character it becomes difficult to accept.

ohhh...😆😆

I am not for any romantic angles in CID, still...I don't mind if there's a girl in any of our cop's lives. This one too ended in another mini-disappointment for Daya...after Sonali and Purvi...I really feel bad if he likes a girl and it ends in a break up. 😆

ohhh...😆😆😆

Originally posted by: AmanDeep24

Dadu ki ist love story oops dadu ke bhai ki luv story...wink
so swt n cute..simply awesome dada
story pdhte pdhte swt si smile face pr aa gyi
thank u dada for giving dis cute doze
rahul ka aman ke lie jo pyar aur care show kia hai that s very heart touching
n in last stanza u describe abt sum swt moments r very very touching
sbki life main aise moments hote hai jo chehre pr muskraht la skte hai
thank u 4 rembering that
bs ab month main 1 -2 var aisa doze de dia kro..wink
luv u dada
n dher sari hugs for u

Originally posted by: .YaJuShI.

its really a sweet story DADA luvd it 👏

n luvd these lines ❤️

da smallest gestures dat go RIGHT to da heart!!!!!!!!

a SMILE from a STRANGER wen U are LOST in a CROWD;

an OLD FRND calling from a DISTANT land jus to say 'I MISS U';

da touch of MOTHER'S hand in ur FOREHEAD wen u r UNABLE to SLEEP;

a HAND in ur SHOULDER wen it feel dat the world AGAINST u;

an UNXPECTED but badly needed HUG from da one U luv da MOST;

I pray, U get all these wen u need them a lot;

stay blessed, always...

it means alot 🤗

Originally posted by: Maxxx

Sweet and lovely story 😊

great work DADA👏👏

Originally posted by: Tami_

Wow this story is awesome luv the songs of rahul sung to tease daya yaa I also ljuv the title and last words thats awesome overall fantastic story this is a diff story

when I read the title I am shocked luv story or GD

Originally posted by: shreela

such a cute story after so many days! 😃 thanks GD!🤗

Originally posted by: Crystalx

Sorry GD i couldn't comment earlier as i was reading by phone and i wanted to say something more then ' what a wonderful story' so i came home and first thing i did was comment on your fabulous story.

Wow what an awesome story GD. Hats off to you for making this type of story. You added a mixture of comedy,a bit romance and a bit friendship. The way you described each and every aspect of story was fabulous. I enjoyed myself a lot while i was reading this one and smiling at every sentence. The song singing parts by Rahul was two funny. It was a total unique story. The last lines that you wrote were truly inspiring i am a bigg bigg fan of you.