Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147) - Page 49

Originally posted by: polly_03

@ GD :

first, the vm.. kya kamal ka gaana select kiye ho yaar Adi sir ke liye , okay, jokes apart, it was nice !!😊

First the VM, Thank You POlly😳, either its really Difficult to choose Song for Baray Bhai, ab lagta hay Mujhy Khud hee apni Madhur aawaaz ka Jaadoo jagana paray ga...🤣

second, the story. i read it and had just one word " WOW !! 👏" i mean, it's so sweet😳 .. really heartwarming yaar😳 !! keep writing more and keep pming !!😊

Thank You Yaar😳, yup its Hearttouching😳, even while writing it touched my Jigar, Kidney, Neck, Bheja n all...🤣

Originally posted by: neeme

hey GD What a sweet story.. Really Sweet Story..ur CID Story Is Diffrent than CID..bcz FW forgets abt DUO...

Thank You DII😳, darsal Main nay 2010 kay Start per CID ko Freeze ker liya hay Apni Stories mein... us say aagay kay Characters tou Mian nay lay liyey, per ERA wohi hay😳... wesay I wrote this SWEET story with Xtra Sugar na...😆😆

All the time u shows in that Daya demands for Gifts and Dinner and Lunch only..But this Time u showed where he spend his own Salary... thats quite new Touch..Let's see how u excute this in ur Future Stories..

hmmm U really raise a New Point to Execute and will take this aspect in my future projects😆, khair abhi tou Busy hun tou baad mein dekhun ga😊... wesay Buht SHUKRIYA...🤗

Originally posted by: gwentlend

sorry dada for the late reply

ur story was superb

out of the world,excellent no words to say

vm was just fantastic

mann khush kar di aapne

gana bhi bhut acha tha

keep up the gud work

and may god bless u

here is somethinf for ur out standing creation

Originally posted by: cargopants

@GADHADADA

hey buddy..

the VM is awesome ⭐️ 😃

you have nicely worked with one of my favorite songs (specially the lyrics without BG music) and wonderful caps of ABHIJEET SIR.. ⭐️👏

the excellent execution of idea with the usage of caps focusing EYES.. a beautiful match with the song 👏 ⭐️

sorry for being late in commenting

overall a great effort and good luck for future projects 👍🏼

Originally posted by: cargopants

@GADHADADA

wonderful BIRTHDAY TREAT for your BARAY BHAI 😃

though i am late to comment.. but..

whole story is awesome but following dialogues are classy ⭐️😃



ABHIJEET: is ki Salary aakhir jati kahan hay??

DAYA: itna Kum tou kiya hay...

ABHIJEET: MAA ki'

DAYA: pata hay kitnay log Wish karty hain Is Gift ki'

ABHIJEET: haan zara Bara ho gaya hay ye Boy'

ABHIJEET: DAYA' Tu bhi na'!!!

DAYA: Bechara Pehchan nahi pa raha'

ABHIJEET: aur kub say Ye Checks ABHIJEET kay Account mein jama ho rahay hain???

DAYA: ye Jal gaya hay Boss'!!! Wesay Tha kya'!!!

ABHIJEET: Jala Nahi hay' bus Thora Kaala ho gaya hay'

DAYA: thora Kaala' !!!

DAYA: Boss Tum kuch bhi ker lo' Mian ye Jala hua Pizza tou kisi qeemut per Nahi khaon ga'

overall.. a great effort 👏
do come up with more as i have become an active user over IF because of your stories..😊
good luck👍🏼

Originally posted by: CID_KHUSHI

hey wow GDD

story ek dum mast 🥳

vm mast mulply by 2 😳

my favurite SRK song