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ABHIJEET, DAYA and FREDDIE working at Bureau lately… FREDDIE moved Outside as His Wife Call Him and the Signal were not Good… here the Night was much Bright and Shiny… DAYA moved at the Window Pan side of Bureau and looking to that Shinny and Bright thing… ABHIJEET initially moved up his head from a File and after Seeing DAYA Deeply involved with something just came and see what DAYA looking and when He comes to know… obviously Shocked…

ABHIJEET (amaze tone): DAYA… Tum Chand dekh rahay ho…!!!

DAYA (excited voice): Haan Boss… dekho kitna Bara aur Shiny hay na…

ABHIJEET (confuse tone): aby Tu Theek hay na???

DAYA (irritative tone): kyun jo log CHAND dekhtay hain… Pagal hotay hain kya???

ABHIJEET (smile): nahi suna hay Aashiq hotay hain…

DAYA (shy): kya Boss… (after a second) pata hay aaj Super Moon hay…

ABHIJEET questioned so He briefed ABHIJEET about the Super Moon… Suddenly Light goes Off and they heard FREDDIE Irritated voice who come inside… DAYA Clutched ABHIJEET Wrist… ABHIJEET look at His Eyes as He saw Him Clearly in Moon Light and found the Specific Naughty flair… DAYA pulled His Wrist and both sat on floor… FREDDIE calls…

FREDDIE: ABHIJEET Sir… DAYA Sir... kahan hain aap dono??

Both did not respond… FREDDIE again calls and now this time a Husky Voice Shiver Him… DAYA smiled on ABHIJEET Que for starting the Joke… FREDDIE again Call them in Scare voice and this time DAYA Cell Torch Light make a Fine line with Voice…

DAYA: Main Chand ki Aatma hun aur Tum say Milnay aayii hun…

FREDDIE cell Slipped from His hand and He is trying to Run away as fast as can and at Main Entrance Collided with someone with Force and Fear…

ACP: kiya hua FREDRICS… Kahan bhaagay ja rahay ho…

DUO exhale and look at each other… Meanwhile light comes… ACP at Main Entrance Grabbed FREDDIE arm with Tight Grip and FREDDIE was with Close Eyes, Pale face repeating something… after a forceful Jerk… He came back and shocked to see ACP… He told Him all and after hearing that He and DUO worked together few minutes back…. Yelled…

ACP: ABHIJEET aur DAYA… bahar aao…

Both standup from the Interrogation Room side… FREDDIE stunned to see Chand ki Aaatma… ACP Sir really scolds them a lot and they also felt bit Shame after seeing FREDDIE condition and say Sorry to Him as well… ABHIJEET asked ACP…

ABHIJEET: Sir aap yahan kesay??

ACP: ek File lenay aaya tha… DCP sahib nay kaha tha… us per baat karni hay… abhi ghar ja ker yaad aaya kay File tou Cabin mein hee reh gayii… wesay acha hua aa gaya… warna shayed (look at FREDDIE) Hospital mein Mulaqat hoti…

DUO Quiet and all moved to Residence as their Work was almost finished… all settled down and awake at Next Morning… DAYA felt a Pain in His Fist… he checked it saw a Swelling with Pain there… ABHIJEET see it on Dinning Table and asked…

ABHIJEET (anger): Tu raat ko nahi bata sakta tha??

DAYA (irritate): arry Mujhy kiya malum tha… kay ye itna Swell ker jayey ga… FREDDIE ko daratay huay Table say Chout lug gayii… us waqt tou Dard bhi itna nahi tha aur Swelling bhi…

ABHIJEET: chalo dikha lo DR ko kahein koi Lakri ka Tukra na ander chala gaya ho…!!!

DAYA: nahi mera khayal hay Spray maar leta hun… Theek ho jayey ga…

ABHIJEET (imitate): Spray maar leeta hun… chalo bus… bak bak nahi karo…

DAYA Irritate but obviously surrendered… both moved to DR… He checked it and tell that because of Swelling and Pain… He gave Him a TETNIS Injection for protecting it from further Infection… when he moved towards DAYA and tried to give Him an Injection… suddenly a 4 year old Kid came and grabbed DAYA arm and tell Him…

KID: Uncle Mian aap ko paker leta hun.. bilkul Pain nahi hoga…

DUO literally smiles… DR look at DAYA who saw the KID with Complete Interest so did not removed His Small Palms as DUO see that when the Injection Needle pushed inside DAYA arm… the KID closes his Cute small eyes like He pinched… DAYA felt some different after having small Fingers, Thumb and palm Impressions on His Arm whereas ABHIJEET Quickly Capturing KID from His Cell Camera… DR said…

DR (to Kid): AYUSH… Injection lug gaya hay…

KID opened His Small eyes and trying to Look Brave and asked DAYA as…

KID (to DAYA): dekha Pain nahi hua na…

DAYA moved his Head in NO with Smile…. A Nurse appeared and Complained DR that AYUSH did not take His Meal and irritates her a lot… DR asked…

DR: kyun AYUSH… kya keh rahi hain Aunty…???

AYUSH: Mujhy Apple khana hay na…

DR: acha baad mein… pehlay ye kha lo…

AYUSH: magar Apple acha hota hay… Mujhy tou…

DAYA (interrupts): acha abhi Tum ye kha lo… Main Tum ko kal Apple la ker dunga tou wo kal kha lena… Tum achay bacchy ho na…

AYUSH (after thinking): acha theek hay… per Apple waly Uncle… Red Apple laana… ok… Promise

DAYA moved forward His hand… AYUSH Shake hand with Him after reminding His Apple again and moved out with the Nurse… ABHIJEEET asked about the Kid and DR briefed…

DR: pata nahi Sir… kya kahein… Hum ek Charity Foundation chalatay hain… Orphanages say bhi Bacchay aatay hain… AYUSH bhi un mein Aik hay…ye THALISEMIA kay Last Stage per hay… (DUO stunned)(DR again) bus Koshish hay kuch Din barh jayein aur Khushyaan bhi… (to DAYA) wesay aap ye Spray use kijyey ga… do chaar din mein Swelling Theek ho jayey gi…

DAYA was completely Quiet… ABHIJEET got the Prescription and ask the DR that could AYUSH take Apple and DR moved His Head in YES… DUO moved out… both really feel SAD as its quite shocking as well Painful for them… it's the First Meeting of AYUSH with DUO…!!!

DAYA mostly Disappear during 3 to 4 Pm from Two months… sometimes ABHIJEET also… both have a Good and Strong Relationship with AYUSH… DAYA took Him to Bureau as well after getting Permission from the Hospital with Complete Surety… so Team also knew about AYUSH… at that day… ABHIJEET and ACP at Jeep… ABHIJEET call DAYA and trying to tell Him to be at Malad…

ABHIJEET: DAYA… Malad kay Bindra Nayak Mall..

DAYA (interrupts in tense tone): Boss… AYUSH ki Tabiyet buht Kharab hay wo ICU mein hay…

ABHIJEET look at ACP and tell DAYA that He will be there and after that on ACP advice call SACHIN and tell Him to be the Specific Spot and they will join him after 20 minutes… they reached there… Found DAYA Strolling outside the O.T… ABHIJEET Relaxed Him by placing His hand on His Shoulder… TRIO really in Tension… after half an Hour DR came out… Pat on DAYA Shoulder and with Tears moved ahead… ACP and ABHIJEET Shocked and with Tears whereas DAYA fell on His Knees and Burst out… ABHIJEET moved to Him… He tried but DAYA really crying so loudly… He can't believe on that News… after seeing His Bad condition on ACP Sir Advice DR gave Him some Seductive through Injection and ABHIJEET take Him to Residence after Dropping ACP to His Home… DAYA was in Tears in Sleeping Phase as Well… ABHIJEET also came in Painful state as all knew the Output when meet the KID first but obviously its Painful..!!

ABHIJEET trying Hard to Relax DAYA by Consoling, giving Time, Counseling as well but DAYA really Hurt very Hard Internally… He tried to be Firm and come back but it's really Difficult… He became so Quiet… after a week ACP Sir and ABHIJEET discussed about Him on ACP Sir Cabin… ABHIJEET said…

ABHIJEET: Sir koshish tou hay… per DAYA ko buht zyada Dukh hay… us kay liyey AYUSH ka itni Choti Umer mein chalay jana buht Takleefdeh hay…

ACP: haan Main samjhta hun… mujhy bhi byhad Takleef hy aur Tum ko bhi… magar ABHIJEET… DAYA ko khud ko Sanbhalna tou paray ga na…

ABHIJEET: Sir kiya Hum log… (bit hesitate) mera matlab ek Choti sii Get-to-Gether nahi arrange ker saktay… (ACP look Him in Confusion) mera matlab Sir… ek Picnic… bhalay 24 ghantun kay liyey nahi… tou 12 ghantay… kuch Relief mil jayey ga… MUMBAI mein hee kisi Farm House per chal saktay hain ta kay agar koi Problem bhi ho tou foran wapis aa jayein… DAYA ka Zehn thora bat jayey ga…

ACP Sir did not Respond… ABHIJEET knew the result but just for DAYA sake… He raises… He applogize ACP as…

ABHIJEET: Sir Main samjhta hun ye Possible nahi… chalein Main dekhta hun kay kya ker saktay hain…

He stand up and trying to move out from ACP cabin… suddenly heard as…

ACP: Main nay Tumhein jaany kay liyey tou nahi kaha… (ABHIJEET look Him) (He added) Betho…

After Five days… CID plus Forensic Team was ready in a Big HIACE to move to a Farm House for spending a Whole day Not Far from MUMBAI… ABHIJEET prepared DAYA for that just with a Hug so DAYA without any further Lame Excuses joined them… before entering ABHIJEET really Angry after seeing SALUNKHY Sir Forensic Kit in HIACE… but DAYA relaxed Him as All knew that SALUNKHY Forensic Kit is His 2nd Girl Friend… all settled… ABHIJEET sat with TAREEKA… DAYA look at that while adjusting View Mirror and when ABHIJEET felt that Someone Look at Him.. He moved his Head up and sees His face on View Mirror… DAYA Wink on his Glance with a Naughty smile… ABHIJEET Embarrass whether Internally He felt a Big Sooth after seeing DAYA's Naughtiness… SALUNKHY Sir entered and shocked to see the Scenario… He Ordered ABHIJEET…

SALUNKHY (teasing tone): ABHIJEET Shahab… Meharbani ker kay aagay aa jayein… aap ki seat aagay hay…

ABHIJEET Portraying to felt a Shock after seeing Himself sat beside TAREEKA… He really Embarrassed and moved ahead… ACP entered on Passenger seat and asked DAYA about waiting… He said..

DAYA: Sir wo ABHIJEET Seat change ker raha hay..

ACP (turned back n ask): ABHIJEET tumhari Siting arrangement ho gayii ho tou chalein…

Everyone Giggles… DAYA smile Sweetly whereas ABHIJEET giving a Tough Look to Him and then all moved on… they started ANTAKSHIRI to spent Travelling Hours as ABHIJEET and SALUNKHY knew that ACP Sir have a Treasure of Good Songs while DAYA have some parts of it too so both warned all others that ACP and DAYA will be the Winners for Sure… the Singing Aroma stopped after a Complete Stop of vehicle with a Jerk… ABHIJEET asked DAYA…

ABHIJEET: kiya hua DAYA???

ACP and DAYA focus on same Point whereas DAYA voice comes as…

DAYA: koi Sarak kay beech para hua hay…!!!

Trio look each one eyes and moved outside of HIACE with the Signal to their Team to be at HIACE… They have their Guns on their hands…. ABHIJEET after hit on person Shoe who was laying in middle of the Road as Backward position seeing Blood came out inside... He immediately Sat and trying to Turn the body and doing that got a Fire on His Shoulder... ABHIJEET moved back with a Jerk and a Guy suddenly appeared and Grabbed Him after pointing His Gun on ABHIJEET head.. the lying Person standup now and everyone was Shocked that She is a Girl… she signaled ACP and DAYA to lay down their Guns after pointing their Focuses on ABHIJEET… ACP Sir and DAYA look at each other and ABHIJEET and placed their Guns on Road which was brought by another person appeared and now they saw a Gang of 4 Guys headed by a Girl… DAYA feeling really Helpless after seeing the Blood running out from ABHIJEET wound… here ACP asked in Rash tone…

ACP: Kaun ho Tum log aur Kya chahyey…???

GIRL: bata dein gay… itni jaldi kis baat ki hay…

DAYA (in tense tone): dekho Humaray pass DR hain… Tum un ko kum az kum ABHIJEET kay Zakham ka ilaj tou karnay do… dekho kitna Khoon nikal raha hay…

GIRL: itni Hamdardi… (she look at ABHIJEET and asked again) kahan hay DR… (DAYA signaled on HIACE) (She told one of Her Man) sub ko us mein say yahan lay aao…

The Guy moved there and on Gun Point took all here… the Team did not do anything as they see all the Scene from Inside… She looked all and then pointing to TAREEKA to come Forward…

DAYA (interrupts): ye (signaled to SALUNKHY) DR hain…

GIRL: zyada bolay ga na tou (placed Gun on ABHIJEET head and say in Rash) yahan daal dein gay Goli… ek dum Khamosh..!!

DAYA became really Angry but ACP Sir and ABHIJEET trying to Relax Him through Eyes… she again Call TAREEKA who was in Shock and tell Her to get the Bandage Stuff and came here again… She brought DR.SALUNKHY Forensic Kit under Supervision of a GUY from HIACE and then get out some Bandage Stuff from it and after rechecking Herself and all Stuff by the GIRL moved towards ABHIJEET side…!!!

GIRL look around… tell His Man to search everyone and she did it with PURVI… found nothing except their Cells because No one took their Guns and they also did not know that TRIO have their Guns… the Searching GUY take their Cells, Valets and all Jewelry including DAYA's lucky Bracelet and Chain and then signaled another Man to search the HIACE where He did not get anything except some Beverages, Juices and Snacks for their Journey so Left it as it was… He did something with windows and then opened the Bonnet and did something Wrong with Engine and Signaled His Boss about that and then on Gun point signaled all to be moved there and after entering all inside the HIACE… He Shuts the Door and Broke all Locks and all Vanished within a minute to Left side with Rest of their Gang members including ABHIJEET and TAREEKA…!!!

Its really a Big Trouble for Team… for initial minutes they all Quiet… its bit Dense day… DAYA tried to start the HIACE but after some Ghuurrr Ghuuurrr nothing Happened… He tried to Open the Windows but Failed as the windows were Jammed by applying some Solutions on it here all trying to raise their Voice but How and What was the Question… at Last FREDDIE in Teary voice…

FREDDIE: pata nahi wo log ABHIJEET Sir aur DR.TAREEKA kay sath kya karein gay??

ACP (firm): ABHIJEET itna Kamzoor nahi FREDDIE..

DAYA: magar Sir is tarah hath per hath rakh ker bhi tou nahi betha ja sakta na…

VIVEK: Sir humein is Gadi say bahar nikal ker hee kuch karna hoga…

DAYA comes behind and trying to Unlock the Door after moving out His hand from Half Window of Middle seat but Failed… SACHIN and NIKHIL trying to Break the Window but again Nothing happened… DAYA initiated..…

DAYA: rehnay do SACHIN… NIKHIL chor do… Bari Gariyun kay Seeshay zara zyada Moty MM kay use hotay hain… koi Faida nahi hay… (mermer) apni Gadi hoti tou Main kuch na kuch ker leta… Hanger say hee Darwaza khool leta (to PURVI) Tumharay pass Blow Dryer hoga???

She moved Her head in NO with Shock… SALUNKHY asked…

SALUNKHY: DAYA Blow Dryer ka kya karo gay??

DAYA: Sir us say bhi Darwaza khul jata per ab tou…(to VEVIK) VIVEK ek Kaam karo… aagay ki Khirkiyun per tou un Logun nay Solutions daal ker usay Jam ker diya hay… Tum is Half window say nikl ker zara as pass dekho… Main Darwaza Tournay ki Koshish karta hun… (VIVEK sqeeze His Body and moved out) (DAYA added) dekho Sanbhal ker… haan..!!!

VIVEK after moving out completely checked the Surroundings and then gives Green signal...

DAYA (to ACP): Sir aap log zara Hut kay rahyey… Main Darwaza Tourny ki Koshish karta hun… Aaawz tou ho gi per Chance tou lena paray ga…

DAYA tried Twice and HIACE Door flew away… all Came out instantly as HIACE really turning to Hell after No AC and all Main Window and Backup Closed… after completely moved out… they did not find anyone… DAYA suggested as they don't know the Actual direction of their Culprits to move Separately in Different Directions but ACP denied…

ACP: nahi DAYA sath chalna chahyey… Humein bus unhi logun ka malum hay jo humaray saamnay aayey thay… shayed aur bhi Log hun aur Humaray pass kuch bhi nahi hay…

VIVEK: haan Sir na Cell kay Hum ek dusray say Interconnected rahein aur na he Guns…

DAYA: haan… un kay pass Hathyaar bhi hain aur Goliyaan bhi… agar Hum ye maan ker chaltay hain kay wo 5 log hain tou 5 un ki Guns aur 3 humari jo kay Fully Loaded hain… un ki Gun say sirf ek Fire hua hay… Spare mein kitna kuch un kay pass hay… malum nahi…

ACP: haan isi liyey sath mil ker her qadam sawdhani say uthana paray ga…

They moved ahead as the Left side was Swampy and Bushy and the Dense Clouds make Vision Minimum and also No humidity creates much Problem…Suddenly SACHIN raised Voice and focused their attention to a Small Wooden Cabin… all reached there… DAYA tried to Hit but ACP Sir Clutched His Arm and tell..

ACP: nahi DAYA… agar koi ander hua tou kahein ABHIJEET ya TAREEKA ko Nuqsaan Na pohancha day..

DAYA moved His Head.. they all in Thinking process as nothing in their Pockets and also using Stones was a Critical Idea… Might be create problem for ABHIJEET and TAREEKA… PURVI came Forward after thinking and spreading Her hand on Her hairs… She found Hair Pin… She Entered it in a Cabin old Lock… after a Minute all Entered after a Click Voice… found an Unconcious Guy, some Blood Stains and pieces of Glass… SALUNKHY got it from Floor and Said…

SALUNKHY: Ye Blood kay Nishaan hain is kay ya (after pause) ABHIJEET ya TAREEKA mein say kisi kay aur Choriyun kay tukray… shayed ABHIJEET aur TAREEKA ko yahan Band ker kay rakha ho…

ACP (interrupts): aur Wo Bhaag gayey hun??

FREDDIE: Sir Daku bhi tou un ko apnay sath lay ja saktay hain na…

ACP moved his head in Yes too… DAYA brought those Pieces suddenly got a Broken Watch… Its ABHIJEET watch… He picked it and all moved out from Here… they discussed…

DAYA: Sir agar ABHIJEET aur TAREEKA bhagay bhi hongay tou Gadi ki taraf jayein gay…

ACP: haan… aisa karty hain… (to FREDDIE, PURVI and SALUNKHY) Tum log is AADMI (point to that Guy) ko lay ker wahan jao aur Nazar rakkho magar sawdhani say…

DAYA: aur haan koi bhi Problem ho jayey tou Gadi ko Pather say Maarna start ker dena… hum pohanch jayein gay… Gadi kay Ander rehna aur Thoray Pather sath rakh lena… Gadi kay ander bhi aur apnay Pockets mein bhi…

All Three moved their Heads in Yes and turned back to their Original Position with the First Culprit came in their hands… whereas Rest moved Forwards without any specific direction… They take the Left Lane as they saw them ran away from the left side… after Few Steps… VIVEK saw a Light… He focuses all attention there as all understand it's a Cell Light assuming any Culprit using his/her Cell… DAYA after relaxing them here… moved Forward… Grabbed the Guy and tried to get His Neck… suddenly heard VIVEK voice… he Slapped Him and moved to that Position… ACP Sir foot tangled in something… all Four bring out it with difficulty… suddenly SACHIN run towards His Left after someone… VIVEK also behind Him and after a Long Run… SACHIN grabbed Him… Slapped Him and take Him towards to His Team… DAYA asked by grabbing His Neck but the Guy tried to Swell up something… SACHIN tried hard and by force snatched that thing from the Guy Hand… the guy automatically Unconscious… ACP Sir ordered SACHIN to drag that Guy to the HIACE too… SACHIN moved with the 2nd one and the Rest again moved towards their Left direction… VIVEK and NIKHIL tried to look around… suddenly NIKHIL hit with a Leg comes in front of Him from the Tree… He Pulled it and hit a Slap… VIVEK said its turning to be unconscious… so NIKHIL took Him again towards HIACE… now Three of them moved ahead… they heard some voices and smoke… suddenly a Voice beats … DAYA instantly pressed ABHIJEET watch which had Alarm voice… the Running voice they all heard so moving to That Direction… in way they found TAREEKA fell on Ground… bit Hurt, Her Hands tied and Her Eyes and Mouth had a Cloths… DAYA in Running mode Ordered VIVEK to Bring TAREEKA with Him at the HIACE side… VIVEK engaged with that… DAYA ran Fast… ACP Sir much behind Him and suddenly DAYA Foot hit with a Pebble… He slipped and just to Protect Himself he tried to safe by placing His Hand on Ground and He got a gun in His Hand… His Eyes flashed and Now He Fired on Air and Growled…

DAYA: Bhaagnay ka koi Faida nahi hay…. Apny hathyaar Zameen per Phaink do aur Ruk jao…

The Three People running ahead Stopped… they all now Turning… they are at the Same spot where their Journey had a Brake in their Vehicle and their Day… the Guy grabbed ABIJEET by Pointing His Gun on His Head whose Wrists have Rope…. The Girl have a Smirk Smile… DAYA bit Relax and Suddenly the Guy Hit with a Stone which was thrown by ACP Sir who came behind the Right side… He shaked and ABHIJEET grabbed Him and the area shiver with a Bang… the Bullet exit from DAYA's Gun which was on His hand and Entered on Girl Chest…!!!

ABHIJEET after hitting the Guy bit Shocked… here PURVI came out from HIACE and Forward to check the Girl like TAREEKA does now… who was now looking Good with VIVEK without Ropes in her hands and Cloth inside her mouth… ABHIJEET moved towards DAYA after looking at ACP first and then His Team… here TAREEKA tell ACP that the Girl was Alive… so ABHIJEET ordered as…

ABHIJEET (to VIVEK): VIVEK Ambulance ko Call karo aur Hospital mein Emergency ka keh do (grab Stunned DAYA) DAYA sub Theek hay…

DAYA hugged Him so Tightly and just Whisper in Teary tone…

DAYA (teary tone): main aur kisi ko nahi Kho sakta ABHI…

ACP and ABHIJEET exchange glances… ABHIJEET signaled SACHIN and NIKHIL to take out their Personnel's after taking out those from Culprit's Pockets and gave back all to their Owners… they waited till the AMBULANCE comes so trying to settle down and having Some Snakes on ABHIJEET suggestion… now trying to Start their Vehicle… DAYA and ABHIJEET after so many Discussions, using so much options just conclude a Point… they opened the Chewing Gum pack and take out all its Foil Wrapper after having some to refresh their Taste buds… they tried to Join the fuse and after using Foil around the wire and after two/three Jerks… HIACE started… ABHIJEET tried to take the Credit whereas DAYA understands all that its Originally His Idea… meanwhile Ambulance came and took all Culprits… HIACE also moving on… here ACP Sir advised DAYA to move Back and take a Rest with ABHIJEET and ordered SACHIN to replace in Driving Wheel… when DAYA crossing TAREEKA seat just tease ABHIJEET as…

DAYA: wesay Boss… Tum chaho tou TAREEKA kay sath beth saktay ho??

ABHIJEET: abhi pitay ga ya ghar chal kay…

DAYA smiles… Both sat on Back seat as still its Difficult for DAYA so He placed His legs on Cross mode… totally Sleepy and Easy mode…

ABHIJEET (rash): kya WAAT lagi hay Picnic ki… aur RAVAN ko dekho… kitna Khush hay…

DAYA smiles and tell VIVEK to ask SACHIN to give His Air Plugs from the Dash Board… after getting it… He tried to put it on His ears… ABHIJEET added…

ABHIJEET: aby DAYA Main Tujh say baat ker raha hun aur Tu kya ye Gany laga ker beth gaya hay…

DAYA: haan ACP Sir ki Shaan mein Qaseeday parh rahy ho.. sun raha hun Boss… aur haan aaram say betho… abhi Khoon niklna shroo ho jayey ga…

ABHIJEET: Nahi… TAREEKA Jee nay buht achi Bandage ki hay…

DAYA starts laughing… ABHIJEET saw him… Snatch the Air Plugs from His Ears and ask in Confusion…

ABHIJEET: hanse kyun raha hay… haan..!!!

DAYA: Main bhool gaya tha kay Tumhari Sewa TAREEKA Jee nay ki hay… ab tou aandhi aayey ya Tofaan ye Bandage tou Tum utaro gay nahi….

ABHIJEET: shuker ker Main Zakhmi hun… warna batata abhi Tujhy..

DAYA bursts into Laugh… ACP saw His Laugh… easy mode of Both at View Mirror so continue His catting with SALUNKHY… Here ABHIJEET puts DAYA's Ear Plugs and trying to search something for Eating but found Nothing so asked…

ABHIJEET: aby DAYA Tum logun nay Sub kuch Kha bhi liya…

DAYA: kya Boss… itni Bhuk lagi hui thi… Kitni Bhaag Dour karni pari…

ABHIJEET: haan 280 kay Whoppers, 150 kay Chips, 100 rs ki Toffees aur Chew gums, 370 kay Juice Carton…

DAYA (in laugh): arry dekho kuch Juices kay Cans parein hongay aur Mujhy ab Sonay do… aur haan yaad rakkho ab Bandage khul gayii na tou TAREEKA Jee nahi balkay SALUNKHY shahab Bandage karein gay…

ABHIJEET: Shub Shub Bol…!!!

DAYA smiles and closed His Eyes… ABHIJEET got the Can so enjoying it with Music while DAYA's head placed on His Arm so He tried not to change His Position by any means… HIACE stopped with Jerk… DAYA's eyes opened… all moved out… ABHIJEET and ACP moved inside DR cabin… Both came out after some time and ACP Ordered everyone to move to their Houses as the Situation comes under control…

DAYA (to ACP): wo larki kesi hay Sir???

ACP: haan Goli Shoulder mein phanse gayii hay… baaqi sub bhi Theek hain.. chalo yahan Local Police sanbhal lay gi…

ACP moved with SALUNKHY whereas DUO also followed them… ABHIJEET Whisper at Passage…

ABHIJEET (in whisper): RAAVAN tou Buht Khush hay… ho ga hee… pehlay hee Jaany ka irada nahi tha… dekha kesa Sharaap diya DAYA… Tehas Nehas ho gayii Picnic… aur Sub Kha bhi liya… itni Bhook lagi hay… Dakuon nay bhi kuch Khany ko Nahi diya…!!!

DAYA: hahahha… kya Boss… Daku kya khany ko detay… (tease with naughty smile) wesay kuch hay Khany ko???

ABHIJEET (anger): haan Mera BHEJA…

DAYA (laugh): wo tou ACP Sir kay liyey hay na…

ABHIJEET Punched on His Tummy… all Completely moved out from Hospital… when they all reached at their Homes… DAYA Hugged ABHIJEET and whisper something… ABHIJEET pat on His Shoulder and Relaxes Him as He knew DAYA really Suffered a lot with that Picnic... Next Night DAYA engaged with RAHUL… ABHIJEET got a call so He moved to CAF BETSO where a Surprise is waiting for Him… He reached and sees His all Team except DAYA waiting for Him at a Dinner… He joins them with a smile… here ACP and ABHIJEET initiate and briefed all and specially SALUNKHY who looking Anxious to know Everything in Detail.…

ABHIJEET (to SALUNKHY): nahi Sir Plan tou ACP Sir aur Mera hee tha… ACP Sir ka kehna tha is tarah DAYA jaldi wapis aa payey ga… Main nay aur VIVEK nay Artist ka bandobast kiya… TAREEKA ko is liyey shamil karna para kay wo Larki kay Zakhmi honay ko Confirm karay aur PURVI ko TAREEKA kay kehnay per…

TAREEKA (explain): haan kyunkay mujhy malum tha jub PURVI Body ko Meray sath Paltay gi tou aaram say Bullet Proof Jacket aur Blood Stains pehchan jayey gi…

SALUNKHY: tou DAYA ki Gun Asli thi aur Bullets bhi???

ABHIJEET: haan Sir… agar Fake ya Dummy Bullets detay tou DAYA pehchan jata… (smile) ab itna Dimagh tou us ka chalta hee hay…

ACP (to ABHIJEET in confusion): wesay ABHIJEET Tum nay itna Late Signal kyun diya???

TAREEKA started Laughing and ABHIJEET gets Embarrassed as all Eyes Focused Him… He initiates..

ABHIJEET: wo Sir… (pause)(in embarrass) wo Main So gaya tha…

ALL (shock): kiya…!!!

SALUNKHY (with laugh): lo Hum yahan Tension mein bethay thay aur ye Mahashay wahan So bhi gayey…

ABHIJEET (again in Embarrass tone): wo Sir TAREEKA Jee aur wo Larki… kiya naam tha.. haan MONA… ye dono Baatein karnay lagay… aur wo chaarun Larkay Carrom kheelnay lagay… main Thori der tou Ketchup khata raha…

PURVI (in shock): Ketchup??!!!

ABHIJEET (smile): haan jo Khoon Goli lagnay say Nikla tha… wo Ketchup tha thora Mild ker kay Pack kiya tha… ta kay Thickness and Viscousity Kum ho jayey… (to ACP again) pata nahi Sir… Kub Aankh lug gayii… (point to TAREEKA) na in logun nay uthaya na un Larkun nay… wo tou jub Main Chair say Girnay laga tou Aankh khul gayii achanak…!!!

VIVEK: jabhi aap ka Signal itna Late mila aur yahan SACHIN Sir baar baar Mujh say Pooch Rahy thay…

SACHIN (smils): tou Mujhy kiya Malum tha kay Tum bhi is Plan ka Hissa ho… aur isi liyey Tumharay pass Cell tha… warna un logun nay Humaray Cell tou lay liyey thay…

VIVEK: jee Sir aur ABHIJEET Sir kay Signal kay aatay hee Main nay usay Powered Off ker diya tha…

All shares Laugh… ABHIJEET added more as…

ABHIJEET (to SALUNKHY): TAREEKA ko bhi isi liyey liya ta kay wo Bandage ker day aur baad mein kisi ko Pata nahi chalay… aur poori Koshish ki kay koi DAYA kay samnay na aa jayey…

ACP (in laugh): warna DAYA yaqeenun sub ka Bhurta bana deta…

Everyone remembers that when DAYA comes to Contact with any Person… ACP Sir or VIVEK tried to Shuffle His Focus and Protect those People from His Irony Hands….

ABHIJEET (again): haan Sir is liyey Ek ko tou Mian nay Khud sula diya tha… ta kay ek tou Shak ka Margin Kum ho aur dusra Aap logun ko bhi zyada Mehnut na karni paray kyunkay SACHIN aur NIKHIL ka bhi Dihaan batana tha…(SACHIN n NIKHIL embarrassed) (ABHIJEET added) aur sub ko samjha diya tha kay jo bhi specially DAYA ki girft mein aa jayey tou foran Behosh honay ki Acting karay warna tou… (all smiles) (ABHIJEET again to VIVEK) wesay VIVEK wo Artist really Buht achay thay… kahan say layey thay Tum??

VIVEK: Sir ye saaray Street Theatres karty hain… buht originality hoti hay in ki Acting mein…

ACP: haan wo tou pata hee chal raha tha… us Larki nay 2 minute tak Sans bhi nahi li… keh rahi thi kay Character kay liyey Practice ki hay…

ABHIJEET: Sir Ye Larki MONA buht achi Theatre Artist hay… Meray Dost MOHIT nay isay Suggest kiya tha jub main nay us say contact kiya tha... unhun nay Pooray Do din is Plan ki Reharsal ki thi… Mujh say Plan ki Theme, Treatment sub kuch poocha aur kuch jagah Ammendments bhi ki apni taraf say… ek ek cheez kis Jagah Rakhni hay… sub kuch… tabhi DAYA ko apni Gun hee mili thi… Meri ya Aap ki nahi…!!!

SALUNKHY: aur yaqeenun Hospital ka koi DR bhi is Plan mein Shamil hoga (ABHIJEET moved his head in Yes) (SALUNKHY added) yani Picnic tou Planned thi hee… Kidnapping bhi Planned hee thi… (all shares a Laugh) (SALUNKHY again to ABHIJEET) wesay ABHIJEET DAYA ko tou malum nahi hua hoga…???

ABHIJEET (exhale): shayed Sir… us nay Mujhy THANK U kaha tha… Mian nay isi liyey baat nahi barhai kay pakra na jaon…

ACP (interuupts): magar kesay ABHIJEET…???

ABHIJEET: ab ye tou malum nahi Sir… (after a second in smile) khair Main tou Bhaag aaya…

SALUNKHY (to ABHIJEET): acha kiya…. (proud tone) wesay ABHIJEET Tumharay jesa Dost her ek ki Zindagi mein zarur hona chahyey…

ABHIJEET really embarrassed but feel a Proud and Concern Look from His Team for Him… Here SALUNKHY again Argueing…

SALUNKHY (to ACP) magar Boss Mujhy tou batana tha…

FREDDIE (sad): aur Mujhy bhi…

ACP: haan zarur bataty… agar Poora Plan pata hota… ABHIJEET nay Mujhy bus yehi bataya kay Luterun ka Gang hoga aur Mujhy kisi bhi Haal mein DAYA ko un mein say kisi ko Maarnay nahi dena…

VIVEK: aur Mujhy bus Yehi bataya tha kay main Signal dunga tou Gadi say bahar Nikalna aur DAYA ka dihaan batana…

ABHIJEET (after seeing His Team): haan Sir kyunkay kum az kum itna tou malum tha kay Sub Log kuch na kuch ker he lein gay…

ACP (again to SALUNKHY): darasal DAYA Tum dono say Buht Close hay… humein laga kahein humdardi mein… wesay Tera tou pata nahi magar ye FREDRICS zarur kuch na kuch Ugal deta…

All shared relaxing laugh… Bill comes in whenever ABHIJEET tried to Pay it… Suddenly SALUNKHY stopped him and say to ACP…

SALUNKH (to ACP): chalo Boss… Bill do… yehi Tumhari Mujhy aur FREDDIE ko Nahi batanay ki Saza hay... (to FREDDIE) kyun FREDDIE..??

FREDDIE (happy): Bilkul SALUNKHY shahib….

All shares a Laugh… finished their Food and then moved to their Respective Houses after ACP Advise that no one open their Mouth against DAYA about that till DAYA did not ask Himself… ABHIJEET opened Residence Door with His Key… Found DAYA in Deep Sleep in His Room clutched His Cell which has the Same Picture of AYUSH which ABHIJEET captured on Their First Meeting with AYUSH taken to His Cell via Bluetooth from ABHIJEET Cell… He placed His Cell on Bed side Table and Cover Him with Blanket and moved out from His Room with a Thought…

DUO did not forget AYUSH at any Phase of Their Life but ABHIJEET tried to minimize the pain and Reminisce of That Painful Mishap from DAYA's Heart and Mind through a Fool Proof Perfect Plan although the Plan was YSPT but sometimes Action speaks louder than Words…!!!

NOTE: I wrote this much earlier, its My Viewpoint to make the Episode named HOLIDAY MURDER...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
Frankly yeh when i am reading story i am so surprise that why every culprit was falling unconscious when he is coming next to Daya sir...

but a YSPT na i never guess so...

but jab pata chala that time I am just pressing Abhijeet sir... nad of course You... 👏

But yaar Abhijeet sir chair pe sote sote gir yahi... tomato souse kha rahai the time pass ke liye...

OMG can't stop 😆

good one Daya...

Full does of emotions and comedy 👏 ⭐️ 🤗

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