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mahrukh

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Posted: 13 years ago

Great story like always GD... tarka of comedy emotions naugtiness is superb.. especially that line "main aur kisi ko nae kho sakhta ABHI" awsum... enjoyed ur story alot...

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Shruti Chatterjee

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Posted: 13 years ago

Perfect story!👍🏼 chalo, tonight I'll sleep well.😃

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sherdilali

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow new story 🥳 will read soon

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Benzaiten

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome story GD. You kept the suspense right till the end. And the comedy was awesome as well. 👏

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Mehak

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Posted: 13 years ago

Perfect as usual... Grt combo of emotions n comedy...
Thanx dada

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aditi

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Posted: 13 years ago

huge one...

but best one...😆

loved all of it...

abhi and daya sir's dialogues are awesome...

its perfect...⭐️

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Haleemah

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Posted: 13 years ago

Dafs was a realli gud story x keep it up x

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Homaira

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Posted: 13 years ago

Amazing story xx made me laugh xx 😆

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Homaira

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Posted: 13 years ago

Good story like the way daya pulls abhijeets leg xx

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Posted: 13 years ago

thanku dada for MAST doze😛😳🤗
dil bag bag ho gya story pdh kr😃
some line dialouges r sooo sweeettt

DAYA: Main Chand ki Aatma hun aur Tum say Milnay aayii hun'

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KID: Uncle Mian aap ko paker leta hun.. bilkul Pain nahi hoga'
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DAYA hugged Him so Tightly and just Whisper in Teary tone'

DAYA (teary tone): main aur kisi ko nahi Kho sakta ABHI'

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ABHIJEET: wo Sir' (pause)(in embarrass) wo Main So gaya tha'

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tumare jaise dusra koi nhi likh skta🤗

ye tumare liye😃

ab next story khate khate likhna ya likhte likhte khana😆

Edited by AmanDeep24 - 13 years ago

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