Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147)

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neeme

@neeme

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#471

hey GD What a sweet story.. Really Sweet Story..ur CID Story Is Diffrent than CID..bcz FW forgets abt DUO...

All the time u shows in that Daya demands for Gifts and Dinner and Lunch only..But this Time u showed where he spend his own Salary... thats quite new Touch..Let's see how u excute this in ur Future Stories..

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#472

@ GD :

first, the vm.. kya kamal ka gaana select kiye ho yaar Adi sir ke liye , okay, jokes apart, it was nice !!😊

second, the story. i read it and had just one word " WOW !! 👏" i mean, it's so sweet😳 .. really heartwarming yaar😳 !! keep writing more and keep pming !!😊

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VismiDanraj

@VismiDanraj

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#473

hello I am new hr

ur story was just awesone

speechless about vm

keep up the gud work

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#474

Originally posted by: ..MissBindaas..
Dada amazing story 👏 hehe hume bhi special sa Daya ka gift chahiye😳😆

Great choice of Song and Caps superb 👏

Thank You BHAI_FAN kum PANKHA...🤣

abt GIFT, buht zyada Special logun ko milta hay Wo Gift like Baray Bhai n ME..😳.😉😆

Thank You for liking the VM too.... 😳

Originally posted by: adgadgadg
lovely dada!
u can post it on the bday thread!

Thank You MINI Gurya...😳

yaar I post a Different VM there...😊

Originally posted by: padma_ss
lovely VM GD👏..

Thank You PADMA😳

Originally posted by: sherdilali
nice story dada👍🏼

Thank You SD for UR THENGA...😳😆

Originally posted by: sherdilali
Awesome vm and nice song

Thank You again SD for UR Not THENGA😆😆

Originally posted by: rukhsar.crazy
lovely VM GD...😊
will read the story shortly

Thank You RUKHSAR😳

sure, jub Time mily...😊

Originally posted by: Tami_
vm and story is so nice and fantastic👏

Originally posted by: Tami_
👏

Thank You TAMI for Ur Feedback, Praise and Claps...😳

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#475

Originally posted by: -Shruti
Lovely VM and fabulous story Dada 👍🏼
Enjoyed a lot while watching VM and reading story.

Thank You Baccha, the Story is much Better than VM...😳😳

Baray Bhai kay liyey Song select karna...😉

so Tough Work...

Thank You again... 🤗

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#476

Originally posted by: mahrukh
Wooow great story as usuall... GD tmhara toh koi jawab he nae aur tmhary bhai's ka bi...
aur woh secret awsum tha... main itny days say wait kar rahe the tmhari story ka aur aj itna maza aya yeh story parh k... really u made my morning superb... :D

hain na Main aur Meray BHAI's SPECIAL hain na...😉😆

Thank You Boss that UR morning turned Superb just because of My Both BHAI's... 😳😳

Originally posted by: fairy1
GD your stories and VM are just AWESOME 😃
KEEP WRITING AND MAKING VM's

Thank You PARI...😳

its just because of That Stick which I stole from U😈... that Magical Stick...😉

Originally posted by: Gabriella
gd- wow dada luvly VM 👏👍🏼
luvd it🤗🤗🤗

Thank You YASHI...😳

so much Tight Hugs haan...😉

matlab U also put some Xtra Weight like BHAI...😆😆

Originally posted by: vermamegha
really nice story u r a great writter this for u...🤗🥳

Thank You VERMA...😳

UR Whistling still Blowing in My Head...😆

Originally posted by: VismiDanraj
hello I am new hr
ur story was just awesone
speechless about vm
keep up the gud work

VISMI its really My Pleasure that U Post on my Thread...😳

Thank You for liking My Work...😳

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#477

Originally posted by: vevah
yipee is baar may jaldi tapak padee 😃😉

DAR gayii na...😉🤣

me bhagum bhaag here after receiving notification 😛😆

matlab warna RESTICATE ker deta...😈

hey DADA 👍🏼
wonder ful Story 🥳

Shukriya...🤗

btw mje bhi yehi hr baar khataktaa tha k aakhir IS ki Salary jati kaha hay 😛 ???
it wz amazing DADA😳

yes I'll give a New Aspect of This...😉

offcourse ths type of Buddies r not called Brotherz ,they r no doud LORD PRECIOUS GIFT 😳

Yes, khas ker meri LUGHAT mein...😳

luvly Surprice 😉

thanks😳

even Dr. "T" forgot to wish 😲🤪😆

jub BHAI n ACP Sir Missed, TAREEKA ko tou aisa karna tha na...😉😆

wese in Mohtarma ka Zikr nhi hota Story may tuo bhi chalta 😛😈

Bako Mut and accept ker lo Usay ab...😉

hehehe wait 😕
naa naa WEIGHT 😛 , already HE is abv 100 kg 😈😆

and yahan Meri WAAT lagi hay😡, Shirts Un ki Choti hoti ja rahi hain😆, Baatein Mujhy Sunni par rahi hain..

Us ki Frnd ko bhi aaj hee Accident karwana tha' 🤣
aah ! HE wished his Mom 😒 !

yup, a New Angle as well...😳
hug ! pata hay kitnay log Wish karty hain Is Gift ki'😍 ,
Universal Truth...🤗😉😆
the Wardrobe is filled wth so many bright color shirts,t-Shirts,jersey,formal trousers and jeanz😲
kya dada apne Badey Bhai ko new cloths k sapney dikha rahey ho 😛
kya karun, SAPNY DEkhny chahyey, 😍
wht a luvly Secret 😳
Yes, so Lovely🤗
GOD BLESS U Dada , 🤗
Tum bhi Jeeti raho aur Khush raho Hameesha...🤗🤗

uff ! zabardust ! wht a Luvly VM 😳👏
sach may ajb se he ADAAIEN hain 😍
luvly Song 😳

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#478

Originally posted by: Forfriends
WOW

Precious GIFT

Kya bat hai

chalo aaj se aap bhi aapni income ka ek part mere account me trasfer kiya karna

HHEHEEHEHE

Itss too good

DADA U are gemstone

meri Income...😲

aby Mian tou Khud BHAIYUN ki di hui Pocket Money aur AID per Jee raha hun...😆😛

Tum apny Income ka Poora ka Poora Hissa Mujhy diya karo...😉

wo bhi Hard Cash...😳

Account kub Band ho jayey kya malum...😈

Main aisa Risk Nhai lay sakta...😆

Thank You BH...🤗

Originally posted by: Forfriends

Arre Daya sir aap bhi itana acha VM banana janate ho Kya bat hai Lagata hai GD ki sangat ka asar hai...

Very nice job DADA some scenes are so different Loved it... 🤗

ohh yaar BHAI nay Garbar ker di na, itna Sikhaya tha, per, dekho Song bhi thora aagay peechay hay, Last Scene bhi...

Ye bhi na... bus Mian Khud banaon ga kay chakker mein VM thora ...😉

chalo khair hay... First Atempt wise Buht Acha hay...👏

THANK You FF... 😳

Originally posted by: Forfriends

Oye hoye Tuse cha gaye DADA

bade bhai ki itani tarif wah wah... or kue na ho hai hi tarife kabil...

Very nice DADA song editing is too good...👏

for CAPS😳 🤗

Thank You BH...😳

yup I got the Song without Music...😳

so Use it...😊

and Baray Bhai hain he Tareef kay Qabil... hain na...😃

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#479

Originally posted by: shreela
Thanks a lot GD for the lovely story and wonderful vm!👏👏🤗

Thank You KD for the Lovely Feedback and Wonderful Emocations!...👏👏🤗

uff Cheating karna kitna Mushkil kaam hay... hain na... 😆😉

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#480

Originally posted by: AmanDeep24
@dada
sorry for late FB as i watched VM n read STORY earlies
bt u knw mujhe LATE LATEEFI ki aadat hai😳
very nice vm n all caps r awesome...
dil loot liya apke vm ne😳
n story as usual mindblowing
kash hme v ABHI SIR ka brday cake khane ka mauka mil jata😛
very heart touching that daya sir saved his salary for abhi sir😊
chlo ab tum v apni pocket money se mujhe GOLGAPPE khilvaya kro😉
thanx dada for writing such lovely scenes🤗

its OK DEEP...😊

der aayed durust aayed...👍🏼

arry her koi Mery Paisun per kyun Nazar laga raha hay...😡

ek tou Mian Free mein Tum ko itni Achi Story parhnay ka Mauqa day raha hun.😳.. ye nahi kay Mujhy Kuch Khilao, Pilao, Paisay do... Mujh say lay rahy ho...😲

kesa Anyayey hay ye...🤢

Thank You DEEP... 😳

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