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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#111

A Small treat from my side.😃

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: gadhadada
STORY TWO: as SUNNY also told earlier... detailed JAANKAARI of RAILWAYS😊...
as i did not travel once in TRAIN😭... so enjoyed alot😃!!! JULIE caught so easily
BHAI sirf SOTAY rahay🥱😆😉... so!!! all and all a windy breez cz mostly STORY moved around RAILWAY and JOURNEY...😊 wesay saheh mein i did not think once in sec thats its VIS DII STORY... so SHORT but NICE...very GOOD work!!!👏

Well, in all the story contests conducted till now, you have never guessed my story correctly. So, i am still waiting for that day.

About length, I wrote 19 pages in word, and I felt it's too long. I hope everyone uses Arial font 11 only...please let me know...so that next time I need not feel my story is too long and wind up in a hurry.

Yeah...in my story everyone had to get caught fast because I had only 2 hours to wind up my story and I had lost the big picture when i went to Mumbai.😆 I had something else in mind...but I had no time to add more confusion, and I also made some changes in the last minute, so everything turned into a khichdi. 😆

Jaane do...I always love story contests...gives some mental exercise and some good diversion from the usual routine. Looking forward to the next one.😉😛

Edited by visrom - 13 years ago

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Debasree

@debasree04

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

@Visrom i also cant guess ur story correctly...always confused with Sunny...this time i thought the story4 is either written by u or Sunny

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

@ Vis I use Times New Roman 12 font and length of my story was of 14 pages. If same story is written in Arial 11 font it will be of 13 pages.

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

😆 I didn't know Sunny and I had a similar style at all.

I can find out Sunny's story even among 50 stories. I'll not reveal how, because then Sunny might try concealing it...😉 I think that way even Sunny can recognise my story.

Deba - Even you have a distinct style...as someone mentioned in the reviews...using 'v' in place of 'b'.

Demonstar has a style too - a very flawless English grammar. But if Deep decides to participate it might become tough to find out who wrote which...but I think I can still manage to distinguish.

Then NOM to any South Indians...I am one too. 😛 Many South Indians say 'Abhijeeth'...so I could find out Dreamy Deep's story too. And Chinnu - I know she doesn't write in Hindi...I can find out her story too.

Bhav has stopped writing Viivek, so now it becomes confusing. I found out her story just by the 'feel' of the story...not by the writing style. I can't explain how.

Astonish - I knew hers when I read that line - "yeh aadmi marne ke baad bhi handsome lagna chahta tha".

I could guess GD's story...she has stopped USIng THIS kind OF LEtters in THE STory now, but on reading Abhijeet's injury I knew it was hers.

And Shreya has a style too...her disclaimer etc...I can find it out.

I couldn't guess the rest. How many are remaining? 😛 No 5 and 12.

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#116

@ Vis I know I had one pattern which I follow with bold names followed bu dialogues and rest other in italics and leaving space after 2-3 dialogues or dialogues which is written in more than 1 line.

Italics is use is part where one can easily guess my story, I think.

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Hmmm...maybe...but there's something else too. Which I will not tell you. 😉

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#118

hmm. I have to now find out that something.

Edited by sunnyp1414 - 13 years ago

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Debasree

@debasree04

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: visrom
😆 I didn't know Sunny and I had a similar style at all.
Actually not the style i am confused becoz of intelligent writing though i dnt know about certain style of both of u 😆

Deba - Even you have a distinct style...as someone mentioned in the reviews...using 'v' in place of 'b'.
Yeah thats a big problem still i dnt understand what is difference between "v" or "bhi" 😆

Demonstar has a style too - a very flawless English grammar. But if Deep decides to participate it might become tough to find out who wrote which...but I think I can still manage to distinguish.
Xactly i always 100% sure of it...last time i also able to distinguish between Ravi & Deepika😃

I could guess GD's story...she has stopped USIng THIS kind OF LEtters in THE STory now, but on reading Abhijeet's injury I knew it was hers.

This time i really cant guess GD's story 😆

And Shreya has a style too...her disclaimer etc...I can find it out.
Same in case of Sri 😆

Actually this time i read all the stories so fast that there is no time to guess the writer 😆

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Ravi

@Jurassic_Shark

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#120

I recognized vis' story pretty quickly after reading the comment about how railways should consider the inconvenience tall passengers face in small berths. 😉😆

I also managed to guess sunny's, Bhavana's, debasree's, GD's and Shreya's stories, but got astonish's and shreela's entries mixed up.