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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: prabha.
Not at all. Finish it in Mumbai, India. In you finale you have not projected him as International Don, so its perfectly fine. I want no Paris, I want good story.

My HD is just what he was shown in CID - an ex-colleague of ACP who has turned into a Don. I dont know about the 'good' story. I'll try to make it get at least 2.5 on Zerry's rating scale. Can't promise more.

And yeah....there maybe some injuries and drama here. Sorry about that too.

Edited by visrom - 14 years ago

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prabha.

@prabha.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: visrom
I dont know about the 'good' story. I'll try to make it get at least 2.5 on Zerry's rating scale. Can't promise more.

Ok I will rephrase it. I want no Paris, I want a story. 😃

Edited by prabha. - 14 years ago

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: visrom
I dont know about the 'good' story. I'll try to make it get at least 2.5 on Zerry's rating scale. Can't promise more.

actual AC last part got 2 or 2.5 just because of performance by trio 0 by story or plot. That means by that scale your epsiode will turn out to be 5😃. Don't worry about expectations just give your best shot.

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Aparaajita Mehra

@aparakshitij

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: visrom

Hi All, I am unable to take the story to Paris. I cannot focus on the plot if I go to Paris. I'll be able to finish my finale in India only. Do you have a problem with that?

No problems at all! The execution of the plot shapes the story,not the location.

Edited by aparakshitij - 14 years ago

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Aparaajita Mehra

@aparakshitij

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: visrom

And yeah....there maybe some injuries and drama here. Sorry about that too.

No need to b sorry.😊

A don is after CID,so there r bound to b near-death situations/injuries.

Besides,like I said in my first post here,I like the emotional quotient of ur story.

CID officers have been depicted quite emotionless in this AC series,I dont like them that way at all.

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prettywomen22

@prettywomen22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

@visrom.... It is very interesting... this is story telling... go ahead pls..... BTW we don't need Paris,,, apna desh mahan... finish it here only... for some reason if you need a place outside Mumbai, then think of Bangalore 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆

I loved boyish grin... couldn't be anyone else apart from my hero 😉 😉 😉

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prabha.

@prabha.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Interesting very interesting. Can't wait for more. Please check you PM

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somu_05

@somu_05

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Haha... I simply hate them for showing the Timer striking 0 : 00 whne the duo had done nothing... i mean it seems so unrealistic naa...!!!! Though if you keep that sceen eout of mind... Visrom - Brilliantly turned..!! 😉

Gosh.. you like read my mind... Abhi in Danger... thats the next i could expect... ACP and Abhijit ki bhi thodi dramatic and emotional meeting honi chaiyee..! 😛 Great Minds viz..!

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: somu_05
Haha... I simply hate them for showing the Timer striking 0 : 00 whne the duo had done nothing... i mean it seems so unrealistic naa...!!!! Though if you keep that sceen eout of mind... Visrom - Brilliantly turned..!! 😉

Gosh.. you like read my mind... Abhi in Danger... thats the next i could expect... ACP and Abhijit ki bhi thodi dramatic and emotional meeting honi chaiyee..! 😛 Great Minds viz..!

No, Abhijeet didn't get a chance to explain anything to ACP. There was no time. 😉