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Posted: 15 years ago

Sneha, Chintu is a criminal. The lady was not his wife but just a maid told to act as an innocent wife. Sunil was another fictitious guy.

Chintu was not 'officially' staying there. To an outsider, it would be just Sunil and his wife. There would be no trace of a guy called Chintu staying there at all.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Okay thanx for that clarification.... I think my mind is out now hhehehheehehe itna bhi nai soch payi. Yet you showed FW how a plot is to be handled.

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Aditi_97

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey!! this story the best!! and just like drilabh said all the elements of cid are there in this story!!!
this story is just what we had all expected!!
keep it up!!👏 👏
and Sorry for the late reply!! I was busy with exams.

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Rifah

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Posted: 10 years ago

Love it.

In the episode, it was not shown how did the Cid team escape,

And moreover the team was roaming & roaming.

But here got everything explained and well investigated.

The way Abhijeet went with Chintu and tried to be a part of the gang was

well portrayed. 👏

Anil shot Abhijeet...so usko mar diya..ann😉

But i liked it...becoz whenever it comes on Cid officer, usually Cid team reaches on time.

But why always? That's why liked it⭐️

Overall very nice👏

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Debasree

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Posted: 10 years ago

opps! wrong thread!

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