STORY - Aakhri Chunauti Last Part - by Visrom - Page 4

Really Sorry Visrom for the late response !! My net was causing a problem !!


What should I say Visrom ?? Its going on so well !! I'm already in 😭 !!! I can never see my ACP sir like that !! Never ever !! When I saw him broken down in the promo itself I felt like crying !!! He leaving the place after blast and going to the qualis and then sitting on left side only to find Daya missing !! Uff !! I was in tears when I read that !! The empty lab scene is already killing me !!!

Anil & Ajay ??? No no !! I want my Abhi-Daya back soon !!! I'm missing them already !!!
Waiting for the continuation Visrom !!!

and yeah The introduction or I should rather say the recap that you gave was so beautifully written !! and thanks for justifying HD's reason and DCP's absence !!!

visrom di believe me pad ke shanti mili

Ok...added some more...maybe it should have been better. But I (and you all) were in a hurry, so........😉

yippee.........🥳

I'm going to control myself !! Will read once the whole thing is over !!! All together !!

and yes Visrom Take your time yaar !! No need to hurry !!! FW rushed to finish of and gave us a stupid ending !!

I can wait for a long time to get a proper AC ending and that too by Visrom !!!

Bhavana - one part is sort of over....please read it. 😊 The rest of it may take time.

O My GOD @Viz do you know what you have done. When I read boyish grin, I had a huge smile on my face. Thank you sweetie 🤗 you gave me immense joy.

Had decided not to read but human nature and when Visrom said happiness I couldn't control !!

Boyish grin yaani........... He's back !!!! Daya sir is back !!

🥳 oye balle balle !!! I'm having a huge smile on my face !!


🤗 is for you Visrom for that !!


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😭Visrom yar Boyish grin ...Daya back what story..tahke yor time yar...thaks tthanks a lot🤗