STORY - Aakhri Chunauti Last Part

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visrom

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Posted: 14 years ago

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nisha2515

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Posted: 14 years ago

Add more to it..i will be waitin for it..love d emotional and rockin chemistry between trio

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prabha.

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Posted: 14 years ago

YES Viz come on do it, waiting 👍🏼

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sunny

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Posted: 14 years ago

c'mon Visrom.👍🏼 .

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Priya_aks

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Posted: 14 years ago

oh this is going to be emotional story. Keep going

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visrom

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Posted: 14 years ago

I have no idea how I am going to solve the loopholes in the main story itself. It has gone way beyond repair. I'll try to write a finish to which I might have given a 2.5 or 3.

And I don't know what I am going to write...I may change whatever is already written, so please excuse me.

@priya, it has to be emotional isn't it? All this while they have been behaving like robots. Let's see them as humans for once.

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Priya_aks

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: visrom
@priya, it has to be emotional isn't it? All this while they have been behaving like robots. Let's see them as humans for once.

I have no problem for showing these officers emotional side. I'm just preparing myself that's all

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visrom

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_sparsha

I have no problem for showing these officers emotional side. I'm just preparing myself that's all

😊 Don't worry....I will make it a happy ending.

And yeah...some more details added to the first post.

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Priya_aks

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Posted: 14 years ago

ok. will be waiting for your rest of the story😊

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somu_05

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Posted: 14 years ago

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I cant See ACP like that.... how realistically emotinal VIz..... you wont believe i had almost tears in my eyes when i read the part where the new team ar😭rives...!! DO give it a happy ending....!!!! Get Back the TEAM.. with a "reasonable story" unlike our dear FW team...!