STORY - Aakhri Chunauti Last Part - by Visrom

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Add more to it..i will be waitin for it..love d emotional and rockin chemistry between trio
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YES Viz come on do it, waiting 👍🏼
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c'mon Visrom.👍🏼 .
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oh this is going to be emotional story. Keep going
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I have no idea how I am going to solve the loopholes in the main story itself. It has gone way beyond repair. I'll try to write a finish to which I might have given a 2.5 or 3.

And I don't know what I am going to write...I may change whatever is already written, so please excuse me.

@priya, it has to be emotional isn't it? All this while they have been behaving like robots. Let's see them as humans for once.
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Originally posted by: visrom

@priya, it has to be emotional isn't it? All this while they have been behaving like robots. Let's see them as humans for once.

I have no problem for showing these officers emotional side. I'm just preparing myself that's all
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Originally posted by: priya_sparsha

I have no problem for showing these officers emotional side. I'm just preparing myself that's all

😊 Don't worry....I will make it a happy ending.
And yeah...some more details added to the first post.
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ok. will be waiting for your rest of the story😊
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I cant See ACP like that.... how realistically emotinal VIz..... you wont believe i had almost tears in my eyes when i read the part where the new team ar😭rives...!! DO give it a happy ending....!!!! Get Back the TEAM.. with a "reasonable story" unlike our dear FW team...!

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