STORY - Aakhri Chunauti Last Part - by Visrom

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Aparaajita Mehra

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Like I told u last time Visrom,ur story has the perfect blend of logic,emotions and suspense.Too good,as always!Smart move by Abhi Sir.👏The story has taken an interesting turn,cant wait for the next part,do post soon!

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@aparakshitij Apara when you get time take a read here

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Aparaajita Mehra

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: prabha.
@aparakshitij Apara when you get time take a read here

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I have read some of the stories,btu feels great to see the entire chest of stories!Will surely read them soon.Thanks for informing!😊

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dr.fahmi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

thanx visrom. i m trying to drain AC-IX out of my mind these days, feeling much much better now after reading this😆 good start of aakhari takar. waiting for the end of HD.

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visrom

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: dr.fahmi
thanx visrom. i m trying to drain AC-IX out of my mind these days, feeling much much better now after reading this😆 good start of aakhari takar. waiting for the end of HD.

For me that episode doesn't exist. It is not part of AC series at all. it is a Europe Darshan film. Anyway...I added one more scene...it might hurt. Sorry.....but such a dangerous mission cannot happen without some mishaps.

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prabha.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

Interesting ji. Waiting for more. This time I am enjoying this part by part reading. its adding to the mystery, usually I like it one go.

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Bhavanab

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Poor Abhi sir got hurt !! Anyways good going Visrom !!!
and yeah even I like reading in Parts !!! The suspense is maintaining !!!

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sunny

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Posted: 14 years ago

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twinklesmiles

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Posted: 14 years ago

#79

👏👏👏👏👏

just can't wait to read the climax of your story...

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latha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#80

hey
visrom ur part is good n intersting n more eager to know more
thnz visrom for such a wonderful part us ac ke last part se thoda depresssed thi toh ab kuch fresh ho
thanx to you

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