STORY - Aakhri Chunauti Last Part - by Visrom - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
Wotta story,Visrom!!Its jst too good!👏Again,I feel as though m viewing an episode.Da logic,d emotions,d nervousness of da new officers,evrythin is jst so perfect!Hw I wish AC finale was lyk wot u wrote!Isse screen pe dekhkar toh maza hi aa jata!I had tears in my eyes n a BIG smile on my face wen I read "Boyish Grin".😃Waitin for da complete story.....Good luck for writing!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
Hi Visrom, I just read your version. I am speechless, it can't be compared to actual AC series because yours is thousand times better. Please continue soon, I would love to, infact I'm dying to read more!! :)
I think FW need to re-hire the Creative Team and I think new Creative Team should be taken from this forum only. Then we'll surely have CID golden days back. :)
All the best,
With best Wishes,
Ika :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
aww.. this is so sweet 🤗 I cant stop smiling .. do continue
Edited by priya_sparsha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
the 'Boyish grin'😍 😍
Do continue vis di !! great going!!⭐️ 👍🏼


Edited by dstarz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
visrom di, this is better than the real AT...👏👏👏
This is how we expected it to be...😃😃
"Boyish grin" - am sure its ==== 😉 thanks for bringing him back😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww..thats sooo sweet of you Visrom....🤗... You know i truly felt like dancing at the moment when i read- " HE IS ALIVE...Boyish grin...."😍... This moment couldnt have been better.... this is all i was expecting from SUNDAY!😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
He needs to be goven step by step instructions..!! seriously How badly ACP must be missing him..!!!

ahaaaa Whoopiee.... Hahah Love you to The Core VIsrom..!!! ALIVE.... Boyish grin...(shagnika di mentioned it.. still cant help but mention again... [:p] ) whoopiieee.... I cried again..!!! Is baar Khushi k aasoon the ree....!!! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48

Hi All, I am unable to take the story to Paris. I cannot focus on the plot if I go to Paris. I'll be able to finish my finale in India only. Do you have a problem with that?

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Posted: 14 years ago
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No problem. I know this story has so much potential that it can be best completed anywhere on the earth. So no problem at all. 😃 Rather India will provide opportunity to HD also.

as far as Paris is concerned leave it to 😉
Edited by sunnyp1414 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
Not at all. Finish it in Mumbai, India. In you finale you have not projected him as International Don, so its perfectly fine. I want no Paris, I want good story.

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