STORY - Aakhri Chunauti Last Part - by Visrom

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: somu_05
I cant See ACP like that.... how realistically emotinal VIz..... you wont believe i had almost tears in my eyes when i read the part where the new team ar😭rives...!! DO give it a happy ending....!!!! Get Back the TEAM.. with a "reasonable story" unlike our dear FW team...!

Even I was

when I imagined the picture....added a few more lines.

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prabha.

@prabha.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

I was actually seeing it happen. After that cry of ACP he is walking on the streets........O God and Ajay, Anil. I am already missing my duo too much 😭.

Continue Viz.

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somu_05

@somu_05

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

goshh the blast site.....!!!! Dead body parts found..??? OUCH.. i wonder how ACP ll react to themm

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Priya_aks

@priya_sparsha

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Its very realistic.. It must have been very hard for ACP to continue and work with a new team and every time, he is feeling the emptiness inside 😒 this is terrible😭 finding the pieces of the dead bodies😭

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somu_05

@somu_05

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Anil ....Ajay....spoon feeding from ACP .... it ll take years to get even 10% of Abhijit Daya..!! HOW ULTIMATELY TRUE..!

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prettywomen22

@prettywomen22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

c'mon visrom. We need this story to be completed. I would love to send this to FW. After such a let down Sunday episode, We want something to rely upon which is this story. so go ahead and complete it 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

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prabha.

@prabha.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: priya_sparsha
Its very realistic.. It must have been very hard for ACP to continue and work with a new team and every time, he is feeling the emptiness inside 😒 this is terrible😭 finding the pieces of the dead bodies😭

😭 😭 😭 😭

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somu_05

@somu_05

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

the second para...... one had blacmailed him by placing a gun on his head....other forced him out disobeyed him for the first time.............!!! this toh really happened in front 0f our eyes..!! beautifully written Viz...!

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Aditi_97

@Aditi_97

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

pls pls pls continue the story as soon as possible !!
i agree with all of u, Ajay and Anil!!ewwwww....missing our beloved duo😭😭😭
@prettywoman22- even i would like if this story is sent to FW!!infact all the stories written on this forum are always a hundred times better 😊than wat FW is giving us these days!!😭