SwaRon TS: Wish You Were Here *PART2:Pg6* Replies added on pg4-5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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"You know what Swayam Shekawat? Let's break up!"

The words hit Swayam like a huge tsunami wave. Did Sharon say what he heard? Did she just break up with him? His heart beat increased in pace and he felt light headed as a sense of deja vu swept over him.

"Every relationship has compromises. But if only one person compromises every time then he has no other choice but to break the relationship."

"Break it then! Break everything!"

"I want to move on. Without looking back. I am breaking up with you Sharon."

Recovering from those memories Swayam turned his gaze back to Sharon whose face was contorted with frustration and hurt, her eyes teary.

"Sharon...?" he asked, his voice hollow with disbelief.

Sharon looked a Swayam and her heart cringed looking at the hurt in Swayam's eyes. She could see him breaking and it stung her bad, to put both of them in misery. She loved him, no denying that. But the fact that he had remained silent when his family insulted her left her with no other choice. She needed the space from his family...from him.

"You heard me right Swayam." Sharon spoke in the sternest voice she could manage. "I can't handle your family anymore. I cannot try so hard to impress your aunt when she insults me every chance she gets. I cannot take in the fact that you would never really defend me no matter what your family says. And I cannot keep hurting myself anymore Swayam. I need a break from this. Time and space to sort myself out." She said, hot tears flowing down her cheeks.

Swayam stared at Sharon helplessly as a searing pain rose up in his chest. He didn't know what to do. He could see how hurt Sharon was and it killed him to see her like that. At the same time he didn't know how he could live after letting her go. He couldn't lose Sharon. She...she was his life. Tears filled up his eyes as he stared at Sharon. They looked deep into each other's eyes and all they could see was pain. Swayam slowly walked towards Sharon and took her into his embrace. He buried his head in her hair as tears fell from his eyes onto Sharon's dress. Sharon was confused on what Swayam was doing but she gave into the moment. It was blissfully painful.

"I love you Sharon and I am sorry I let you down. And...if you need a break" he gulped "...you can have the break. After all your wish is my command."

Sharon pulled back immediately as he said this because a heavy feeling of guilt had started forming inside her and she couldn't handle it. It would drive her crazy and she knew it.

Swayam's eyes fell on the ring as Sharon pulled away. He felt nauseous as he thought about it. They were engaged. Their hearts had been tied together. And now, could they be torn apart? Only time could answer that question. As of now Swayam had to be selfless, for Sharon's happiness. If a break up was what she wanted then a break up was what she would get. Anything and everything for her.

"Sharon..." Swayam croaked "what about..." his voice was extinguished by the heartache as he pointed to the silver metal on her finger.

Without thinking for a second Sharon replied curtly "it's mine. I am keeping it."

Swayam didn't know how to react to her answer. Was he supposed to smile because she still loved him and exercised her right on him or was he supposed to cry because in spite of everything they were drifting apart today, without thinking twice.

Sharon and Swayam stared at each other sometime and it hurt Sharon, a lot.

"You should leave now Swayam." Sharon turned her back to Swayam, tears still streaming down her face.

"I love you Sharon" he said in a broken whisper and rushed out of her house without a backward glance, his vision blurry.

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Swayam walked down the empty road, his arms folded around himself as the cold breeze blew past him. The night was darker than usual reminding just like his life. Swayam walked into the garden near his house and sat on the bench, trying to keep himself together. He had no idea of going home and face his family. He was angry with them for treating Sharon like this, make her cry. He held his face in his palms and broke down as memories flooded his brain.

"I'll say it in front of everyone...I love you too. I love you"

"Please stay with me"

"You call me and I don't come, is it possible?"

"I want to be much more than your boyfriend, I want to hold your hand and tell the whole world that you are mine...just mine. I want to share the dances of life with you, the biggest dance is life itself. Will you share the dances of life with me? Will you be something more than my girlfriend? Will you marry me Sharon?"

"Yes! Yes!"

Sharon hugged her pillow tight as the ring on her hand peered at her as if asking, Now what?' She didn't know how to deal with this breakup. Did she even want to deal with this?

"I love you Sharon"

Sharon closed her eyes as the pain in his voice pierced her heart. Tears seeped through her closed eyelids and she started sobbing. Soon she drifted off due to exhaustion.


How I wish, how I wish you were here.
We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl, year after year,
Running over the same old ground.
What have we found?The same old fears.
Wish you were here.


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Edited by Nishi.Kss - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello people. :)
Look who's back with a TS.
A current track work was requested by @Snehaswaron77 and Farheen..
Hope you guys like it.
Next part will be posted on next weekend.

Cheers
Nishi.
Edited by Nishi.Kss - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nishi...thanx a lot fr dis🤗
the first part was really emotional and heart touching..
swayam and sharon who are physically separated from each other bt their hearts always belong to each other nly...dey both are so hurt😭
loved it when swayam hugged sharon and sharon said that the ring is her's and she will keep it...
loved the first part...😳
update soon😊
Edited by Farheen_vrushan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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First of all a Big Wala Sorry dear...for replying late cuz I was not active on forum...
But as they say its better late than never...
And second of all...usse bhi big wala thank u for this TS for considering & writing on our request...

Ok so coming back to the update..
It was highly emotional, intense & heart wrenching...specially to see swayam like this was really painful...
The way he hugs her...his ever green dialouges "your wish is my command"...
My heart just went out for him...I really felt bad & sad for him the way he asked, pointing towards the ring,
& the way sharon replies, its mine...I'll keep it...that was my fav part...I simply loved it to the core...
Both loves eachother, craves for eachother & can't live without eachother still seperated...
Want to see how things & situations unfold between them...
Loved the update to the core...it was simply beautiful, emotional intense & most importantly painful
Waiting for the next chap...
Plz update soon...
Thanx for the pm...
A big wala thank u once again...for this TS...
Edited by snehaswaron77 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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*sigh don't know how to start
Its beautiful. Their heart never want to break up just the words came out of frustration from her mouth
You showed both characters as their original ones even in such situation
Him hugging and her curtly saying I'll keep the ring its mine :'( express their never ending love
I wanna read further :'( And read it again and again

Thanks :))
Update soon
Edited by sanchiswaron - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow lovely one ...wish Aisa hi kuch ho ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Reserved.

^Unreserve^

This is just so great :)

Sharon and Swayam's pain so well delivered!!!

It actually ached me to read what they are going through

The whole situation is so painful

I am happy that she kept the ring

It signifies that they are still engaged even after a break up!

Nishi beautiful writing :)

Update the next part soon :)
Edited by ..MiStLeToE.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was mind blowing .
I wish something like this happens in d3 too.
Awesome start plz update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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why is every one on a mission to make the readers emotional
but this is also amazing
all of u r such amazing writers plzz plzz become creatives of d3😳
i so wish show mai bhi kuch aisa hi ho but our we r not that much lucky



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Brilliant work do write more.

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