SwaRon TS: Wish You Were Here *PART2:Pg6* Replies added on pg4-5 - Page 2

Omg...this was soo awsmm..just wish smthing like this happens in d3..beautifully written 👏

this is damn emotional yr. loved it update soon

I DONT KNOW HOW TO REAT ON THIS...
IT WAS WRITTEN BEAUTIFULLY
PLZZ DO CONTINUE

its just awsm... made me cry...

This is so emotional & touching...
loved it when Shar said that the ring is her's & she will keep it. . .their heart never want to break up but...
great work!!. . .loved it

this was such a nice os

Beautifully written Nishi.

Originally posted by: Farheen_vrushan

nishi...thanx a lot fr dis🤗

the first part was really emotional and heart touching..

swayam and sharon who are physically separated from each other bt their hearts always belong to each other nly...dey both are so hurt😭

loved it when swayam hugged sharon and sharon said that the ring is her's and she will keep it...

loved the first part...😳

update soon😊

More than welcome Farheen. 🤗
Thank you for the appreciation. Glad you liked it. :)
Will update today.

Originally posted by: snehaswaron77

First of all a Big Wala Sorry dear...for replying late cuz I was not active on forum...
But as they say its better late than never...
And second of all...usse bhi big wala thank u for this TS for considering & writing on our request...

Ok so coming back to the update..
It was highly emotional, intense & heart wrenching...specially to see swayam like this was really painful...
The way he hugs her...his ever green dialouges "your wish is my command"...
My heart just went out for him...I really felt bad & sad for him the way he asked, pointing towards the ring,
& the way sharon replies, its mine...I'll keep it...that was my fav part...I simply loved it to the core...
Both loves eachother, craves for eachother & can't live without eachother still seperated...
Want to see how things & situations unfold between them...
Loved the update to the core...it was simply beautiful, emotional intense & most importantly painful
Waiting for the next chap...
Plz update soon...
Thanx for the pm...
A big wala thank u once again...for this TS...

Its alright.. :)
Am very glad you liked it..You really dont need to thank me so much.

Originally posted by: sanchiswaron

*sigh don't know how to start

Its beautiful. Their heart never want to break up just the words came out of frustration from her mouth

You showed both characters as their original ones even in such situation

Him hugging and her curtly saying I'll keep the ring its mine :'( express their never ending love

I wanna read further :'( And read it again and again

Thanks :))

Update soon

Thank you so much for the appreciation Sanchi. :)

Originally posted by: -DreamzGirl-

Wow lovely one ...wish Aisa hi kuch ho ...

Thank you. :D

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..

Reserved.

^Unreserve^

This is just so great :)

Sharon and Swayam's pain so well delivered!!!

It actually ached me to read what they are going through

The whole situation is so painful

I am happy that she kept the ring

It signifies that they are still engaged even after a break up!

Nishi beautiful writing :)

Update the next part soon :)

Thank you so much for the lovely comment Chitra. :)
Am glad i could portray the emotions properly.