kriyansh ts-at the fire exit updated.

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At the fire exit.
On pre valentines day, she was drained after breaking ones heart who rules on her soul.Her life have became mess.From inside, she was died in guilt.She ran and tears were continously flowing.His pain striken face flashed in her mind asking 1000 questions. She couldn't hold herself more and cried on topof her voice. She didn't notice a pair of eyes observing her.In shock by her state.He went to her and put his hand on her shoulder from back. She turned and her eyes went wide...

This is just a new idea which came in my little mind.
Please let me know how is it and till guess who was the mystery man?

Till then bye.
Take care.
Nikki

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Note : page no.3
Chapter one: page no.4
Chapter two: page no.6(last part)
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pia.raha thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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heyy veryy nice conceptt,would really like to read more😊😊 and i hope its reyy!!
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Originally posted by: pia.raha

heyy veryy nice conceptt,would really like to read more😊😊and i hope its reyy!!



thanks for your comment.
Mystery man kaun hai uske liye wait kar na, it will reveal soon.
And pls add me in your buddy list.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great concept...
would love to read further...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Well nice concept..
Wl be waitng to reas wat wl happen further.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

great concept...
would love to read further...



Thank god, you guys liked it. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: PunjabiKudi_17

Well nice concept..
Wl be waitng to reas wat wl happen further.


Thanks for commenting.
But dear can you guess who is the mystery man?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concept.,,
Who is this mystery man ???rey???
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks dear, arsha and kriyansh rockz.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramya.reddy

nice concept
continueee soon


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I will soon continue it sweetie. But I want to know, what do you think about Mystery man.
And please add me in your buddy list.

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