kriyansh ts-at the fire exit updated.

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@lohananivedita

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: aYASHIKA
Nice concept.,,
Who is this mystery man ???rey???
Update soon

Woh mystery guy will be revealed in next part and hey thanks for the review.

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GARIMA

@grungta11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

nyc concept..:)

update soon n do pm me..:)

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@lohananivedita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: grungta11
nyc concept..
update soon n do pm me...)

I will surely going to send pms to you guys and I have requested you to add me In your buddy list, please accept it.

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Sneha

@Arsha_Arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Nice concept.

Update soon amd pm me.

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moumita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

superb concept...

carry on...

update it soon

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

nicee start👏

continue soon😊

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darshita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

nice and good prologue... do continue soon and pm me

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@lohananivedita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Wow, yippee I am so happy . I can't believe mujhe 13 likes milli.
Thanks for your tremendous support. Actually I am new on the forum.
Main aap sabh ke post padha karti thi but I never thought of coming on forum, I use to write ffs etc.in notebooks only par thodi himmat kar iss forum par aayi.socha 2-3 likes mil jaayenge and atlast I am here.
Love you all,
A tight bear hug from me. 🤗

Soch rahe hoge - kya bore kar rahi hun, so guys here comes the update In some time till..

You can do can do one thing.

WAIT 🤣
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NOTE

sorry, I had written Chapter 2 but it was deleted . hope you will understand.

Edited by lohananivedita - 11 years ago

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Angel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Hey i like the concept ...waiting 😆

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@lohananivedita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Kriyansh ts-at the fire exit.

Chapter one.

She looked him with so much pain and sorrow asking why always she have to suffer, she immediately hugged him, she badly needed someone who can console her.And as if god granted her wish, and sent her bff.

Yes, he is our sweet Swayam.

He hugged her and consoled her as an elder brother and took her to the fire exit. ( I personally admire the bonding of kriyam )...

On the other hand, a totally devastated, lifeless rey,With his broken heart walked to fire exit, with a thought that, the fire Which burnt his heart will cool down. He still couldn't accept that his baatcutter can do this to him, he cannot come over the shock he got. He cried silently as tears were rolling on his cheek. After a moment, he heard some loud sobs and other voice along that. So he decided to hide and hear. Curiosity dawn upon him and he forgot his pains.

Here, Swayam took her to the fire exit .her mind stopped thinking about where she was heading.

Seeing both like this, rey's blood boiled up. He felt that his world came to an end. But seeing his love in this state made him silent. He decided to listen further.

k : I...loved...loved him...swa...Swayam...i...loved rey. (between her sobs)

Precap-kya kria batayegi apni mom ke promise ke baare mein. Kya hoga rey ka reaction.

Here goes the crap.

I know, bahaut bekaar likha hai.

Tomatoes and chappals are most welcome.

Eggs nahi kyunki I am pure vegetarian.

Nikki.

Edited by lohananivedita - 11 years ago