Will you cross the skies? KriYaansh OS

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Madhu ko rulane waali..
Janta maaf nahi karegi :'(

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Meghna

@meghzzzz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

it was such a heart touching os... It made me cry... Gr8 work dear... Nd thanx for pm...

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Gis...shakti

@Gis...shakti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Aapne mujhe bahut bahut bahut rulaya... 😭
Mera kriyaansh... 😭
Tooo much emotionall 😭
Great work dear... 👏

Edited by Gis...Arsha - 11 years ago

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aanya

@aanya_arsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Dis was so heart wrenching 😔

I hate u for making me cry 😒

D beginning was really nice- kria n swayam's bond was portrayed very well 👏

N den kria trying to make it up to her frnds

It was really gud to see sharon's care n concern towards kria after coming to knw abt d truth 😊

But rey I hate him for doing that to kria 😡😡

Firstly he didn't even give her a chance to explain

N den just to satisfy his big male ego, avenged kria by playing with her feelings 🤢

N kria committed suicide by eating sleeping pills 😭

The hospital part was very emotional 🥺

Finally rey realized his mistake but it was too late

Kria was gone

N den even rey killed himself

N dey finally met to never part again ❤️

But I wished kria wud have survived

It was really gud 😊

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@Black_Stone

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Arya, Amazing is not the word for this.

It was just Splendid.

Your OS. It had everything. The Pain, The Love, Emotions, The friendship, Revenge, The Guilt, Regrets. Sadness/ Everything. I felt every emotion reading this.

Giving shivers down my spine. The concept enhancing every aspect of Kriya's life.

Beautifully Written.

Kriya she always lived for Reyansh's happiness. At her last breathe all she did was try to make him laugh. Reading that part was Heart-wrenching.

I never expected her to die. I thought you would do Some kind of Love magic as they show in movies.

The time Rey realized what he had done, It was Late, too late. I expected him to commit a suicide. I have always had this thing of Killing him (You know ) 😉

But Finally their Love did not fade after death too. And Their Souls met.

Loved the OS.

Gimme you Playlist Yaar. You have Such an awesome choice of song.

Edited by Cookielicious - 11 years ago

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@Black_Stone

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Madhu_ArSha
Madhu ko rulane waali..
Janta maaf nahi karegi :'(

Maine Maaf kardiya Partner. 😃

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Srishti Prakash

@___SAD___

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

u made me cry by this os

anyways it was trully heart warming

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shreya

@luvuKR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Res...

Unress..

it ws jus just awsum..just awsumit ws really emotional bt vry beautifully written..really it is woww

thnx a lot fr d pm

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Aarushi Gupta

@cool_star14

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

This was such an emotional os...
Beautifully written...
Every emotion, pain , regret was very well portrayed...
I loved it...
D way u showed through what kriya n rey went without each other was too good..
Thanx for d pm..

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Rishita Singh

@..Rish..

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Oh God, what was this? This was WOW!! Everything seemed so relevant, maybe cause we have seen it and then revenge part, oh my!! My poor girl Kriya and the wicked Reyaansh! Both were correct at their own places yet wrong! And then her silent and painful death because of him, dying still wanted him to stay happy and then him ending his life for her! That was indeed the most beautiful part ever :') 2 lovers meeting away from earth, never to apart from each other ^_^
Awesome work! Really loved it ^________^ <3