Will you cross the skies? KriYaansh OS

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madreader

@madreader

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

wat exactly was dis???

u made me cry 😭

very bad of u

and rey's behaviour is like OMG😲

how could he stoop so low?😒

kriya's condition was miserable

and sharon gave a big surprise🥱

her behavoiur and concern was something very unexpected

but anyways great concept

loved the ending

but i did'nt wanted dem 2 die

i practically don't agree wid the heaven concept

but an really awesome piece of work😃

three claps for u and even more👏

thanxx for pm

do keep writing⭐️

luv u alots

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Aishwarya

@Rictusempra

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Ohh God Arya dii... Inne time baad... Inna lamba OS..
Missed you.. 😊
res

unres
Uff... Ye lya likh dala Aruu dii... 😭
I really wept while reading this...

Goshh...
First half me to I was like wow, he finally accepted her back. And I was even excited as in what had he come to know that he just went all mild with her...

And then, their confession and that night of bliss... I was totally dying of anticipation of what he'd come to know... And how...

And then... He revealed it... It was a revenge...? A plain... Flat... REVENGE...??
I had teary eyes on this already, and then u gave the epic end of Kria... 😭

I was weeping badly, when he commited suicide...
And the last part... Ohh Gawwdd... I literaly shook trembled while crying...
And the dialogue, "Coward fool"...
I thought I'd be having nervous breakdowns after this... But luckily, I'm okay till now... 😊

*sigh*
Soo damn soulful it was dii... I love u tonnes n tonnes morethan what I already did... ❤️ :*
And u know I already loved u in tonnes... :')

I'll keep loving u n ur works... An u keep giving more of such soul-piercing write-ups dii... 😊

PS - Thanks for PM. And sorry for late unres, I'd saved this page n forgotten... Read it just now... :)

Edited by Ash_KriYaansh - 11 years ago

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AimanAsim

@AimanAsim

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

amazing os

in end made me crying

n do plz pm me

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

arya ki bacchhiii ... 😵

how dare you... aise kyun likha... 😡

pata h kitna torture tha... aisa scenerio imagine karna... 😔

rey faked love n fooled her emotionally as a revenge... then kriya suiciding n then rey too... 😭

my eyes were burning with tears ... its so painful... 😒

kriya came back after so long... but rey ne fir bhi nhi suni uski ek bhi baar...

swayam sharon ko bata sakta tha... rey ko kyun nhi ... 😳

the damage was actually done... how could he be so pathetic n emotionally retarded... 🥺

thankgod real rey aisa nhi h... varna humara kya hota... 😛

2-4 punch aur padne chahiye they isko... 🤬

when rey confessed his love to her... i had a doubt even then that he's not being real... 🤔

but I also had a belief that kriya will survive... but aisa hua nhi...

agar mujhe cold ho gya na... toh main tujhe chodungi nhi... 😡

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Aanchal singh

@Artistic_Stroke

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

aru u seriously are dead

what the hell u wrote

I m literally crying

i mean from the starting had been expecting a happy ending and what u gave in return aah no

you wrote it beautifully but still i never wanted this kr

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Sad n painful

but loved it! !!!!!!!

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Aishwarya

@Rictusempra

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Finally unresd on previous page. Sorry again for late comment... :(

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tina tartari

@tinatartari

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

The os ws beautiful, phenomenal bt my eyes were wet nd teary by the end...
why did they die?bt for a change it reminds me of irony of life..
not all love stories hv a prrfect ending so its better they died nd met...