Will you cross the skies? KriYaansh OS

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moumita

@sumimita

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

awsome aru... just loved it...

you know you made me cry..

it was so touching...

thanks a lot for the pm..

with lots of love

moumita

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alex754

@alex754

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Tragic story
But then very nice
The last part when rey jumps off the bridge i was almost in tears
Very beautiful

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star_2012

@star_2012

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Awesome!!!!

It was really gud

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

res for now... run to read after so long u gave a os it had every element in this story...
it was for me a wrench but beautiful and brilliant u literally made me all to emotional
that i no words to express it... loved it

Edited by sweetydiyafrien - 11 years ago

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don girls

@don girls

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

wow what an emotional OS

simply beautiful

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Sanchita Naha

@Sanchita_14

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

😭 😭 goshhh Wht was that rula diya yar rula diya 😭
Well writen seriously Ro padi me aj

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

fantastic and emotional os👏

lovedd ittt😊

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Sridipta

@sri_crazlacious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

I am in absolute loss of words.. i just dnt havewords to define ur story..

i just know that i got a complete peace reading it..

It was emotionally touching,heart wrenching,emotionally attrating and lots more..

It shook me in pain totally..

just felt my tears rolling down my cheeks..and i guess many other's as well..

and there u win..being a writer u r able to reflect the same kind of expression tht u wanted in the reader's..

as i said i am in a complete loss of words..so here iwill end..

bt the ending u gave to ur story was more thn commndble..

Great work...

thnk u so much for the PM..

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lovekrisha

@lovekrisha

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

by god
seriously arya di u have grown so much as a writer
and the song it suited so well

itz the best work of yours

i felt each and every word of yours
love you girl like anything for writing this <3

great job :D
hats off to you :D