KriYansh OS : Highway No. 51 - Page 3

Originally posted by: -shenz-

Well, if it was Vaish to make you complete this.. Then I know her enough.. to know what all exactly she can do.. :P

Anyways.. I somewhere knew what it could be.. ever since I read the title in my inbox..

this was so well executed..

Right from the torture part.. to the love making scene.. well if this is your second attempt.. I must say you do it really good.. I would have never been able to put it that way..

The words were apt.. perfectly describing the happenings..


But I love the way the mystery was revealed.. Lovely..


And thanks.. naah.. I dont ever thank for PMs..

But Thanks for making my brains work.. Finally, I guess I can work out on my impending works.. I really hope I will be able to..



PS: Vaishu.. you know how much I love you na.. But as of now I wanna thank you to make her complete this..

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Kreya

Amazing update...!! 👏👏

oh god...i was just blown wid ur update ...😳😳☺️

so hot...

plzzz update soon n thankss for da pm 😊

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

maahi it was super awesome...loved it very much

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

that was fabulous and superb os... loved it

Last tym i said i love u..bt i wud lyk to change it..i hate u Mahi..i hate u so so much...how d hell can u doubt urself...?? U kept us in dark abt dis work of urs...damn..it was breathtaking.., generally, its unrealistic to believe abt having sex wid sm1 u saw jst once, bt d way u presented it, i was lyk..'rey ne ab kuch kia kese nai'..nd lo nd behold !!..it was absolute magic...each nd evry word, mind it each nd evry word was pouring their desires...hell !...i felt as if it was happening umm..mm..ok infront of me..(wo nai kahungi jo tu samaj gai) ...how u described her as a seductress...jst wow...i wont go in depth..jst dat ki m a fan of ur writing...U R SIMPLY MINDBLOWING YAR...abt dat warning in pm..jb tu likh sikhti h to mai to definitely padh skti hun..u know same same age...though i dnt want to put it down here bt end was rocking girl..i got d hints at d start bt still i was amazed..it truly was highway no 51...anyways love u darling..(arghh..bt i hate u)..m confused wid myself

Originally posted by: -Khwahish-

MEDHA I love you

You have no idea how amazingly you decipher my write ups ... I myself am not able to do that you know

I am super glad to know I was able to create the necessary ambience for the story ..I wasn't sure if I will be able to pen this properly ..But your amazing review makes me squeal in delight and relived

You liked it ? Thank Goodness you like her description

I wanted to show her unearthly and at the same time didn't want to give any hint to the readers about the suspense ..Gladit worked😃

You liked the love making part ? God I wanted to hit myself hard after writing that ... I was damn exhausted ...after reading it

Thank you so much darling🤗

I always look forward to you reviews ...They leave a fulfilling smile on my face :*

Well I'm glad I can bring that smile to your face cuz you had me grinning throughout it. It is by far one of the best love making scenes in the forum cause it wasn't in your face but was subtle. It was well balanced instead of all sex no emotion and all emotion no sex and above all it was central to the plot and gave direction to the story rather than something just thrown in for the heck of it

Awesome os well writen
Amazing concep thrill and hwt combo pack
Like it

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

Last tym i said i love u..bt i wud lyk to change it..i hate u Mahi..i hate u so so much...how d hell can u doubt urself...?? U kept us in dark abt dis work of urs...damn..it was breathtaking.., generally, its unrealistic to believe abt having sex wid sm1 u saw jst once, bt d way u presented it, i was lyk..'rey ne ab kuch kia kese nai'..nd lo nd behold !!..it was absolute magic...each nd evry word, mind it each nd evry word was pouring their desires...hell !...i felt as if it was happening umm..mm..ok infront of me..(wo nai kahungi jo tu samaj gai) ...how u described her as a seductress...jst wow...i wont go in depth..jst dat ki m a fan of ur writing...U R SIMPLY MINDBLOWING YAR...abt dat warning in pm..jb tu likh sikhti h to mai to definitely padh skti hun..u know same same age...though i dnt want to put it down here bt end was rocking girl..i got d hints at d start bt still i was amazed..it truly was highway no 51...anyways love u darling..(arghh..bt i hate u)..m confused wid myself

Pehle when I read Ihate u I was like kyun 😆
Omg that was a huge compliment akanksha ...Iam delighted and pleased to know that u loved it this lot ^_^
You could feel desires pouring in ^_^...hayyee zindagi safal ho gayi meri lol
It took my every cent of energy to complete it pheww
Shukriya buddy ...i am smiling like an idiot after reading ur comment
Hahahha.we are 18 and its very much legit to read and write stuff on such genre
Tysm dear 🤗

@medha - Iam on cloud nine after reading ur comment srsly ^_^
Really ? I am elated to know that u felt that ... Imean thank u so very much ^_^
And no formal behavior needed lol ...we are already frnds and Iremember talking with u in old kr days ^_^
I can't handle formalities lol

No thanx needed yar..it was all genuine..m surprised y r u so nervous ??.. read this work again nd then u will realise what masterpeice u hv created...u know frm long i used to hear a word "prefect"..nd i was told dat prefect means perfection next to perfect..i guess now i got the meaning in exact way..all thanx to you