KriYansh OS : Highway No. 51 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

awesome OS!!!!!!!
Just loved d concept different n lovely!!!!!!
That was hot n passionate n at the end a bit fearful!!!!!!
I was expecting her to b a Vampire but it seems a bit similar to Talaash!!!!!
Keep writing more such nice OS!!!!!

Thanks a lot Mahak🤗
Glad you loved the concept and story 😃
Definitely 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
amazing mahiii...
brilliantly written...
omg what was that at end 😲
i was dammm scared reading the end part n re-reading ur whole update again 😆
good one
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Amazing os.
I like such kind of fantasies nd concepts.
Gud job...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
I swear I have lost the count as to how many times I opened the Post Reply tab to comment..
And closed it without commenting...

So finally here I am...

You know how much I love this concept...

I mean I swear... This is like totally engrossing... and so mystical.. and just amazing..

So hats off for the concept...

Really such uniqueness... You get fun... You get your portion of kink...

And moreover you get such an engrossing work to read...

So I say job well done...

So firstly the encounter... It was just beautiful... You showed Kria amazingly as a hooker.. and the Rey... how he was addicted to her... was just amazing...

The start of make out in the middle of the road and the honking... added a mysterious effect to it..

Then comes my motel.. ahhh... do you know the motel name is also my name of OS? which was my first attempt over 18+ 🤣

The animal Reyansh out... It was so nicely put up... Plus I really loved the way you showed the entire tharak... ^_^

A joyride it was...

And then the flashback... Ahhh... bliss...

And soul snatching was my favorite part trust me... ^_^

I mean it was just so cool...

Awesome...

And yesshhh... an Awesome title too... :*
Edited by -Vaish- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
kri ek spirit thi?? waoo.. dat was something..
well written indeed nd luvd d title too..
awsmm wrk..👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
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unres

Wow mahi ji.. tussi te kamal kr ditta...

it was superb ya... highway no 51... ahaa

So kriya was the same human whom he had killed...

n it was her revenge...

i loved the ideaaa... :P

n merry Christmas.. in May :P sorry im late
Edited by Dewdrops.ShaKun - 11 years ago

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