KriYansh OS : Highway No. 51

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Highway No. 51



He ignited the engine and changed the gears accordingly as his car moved swiftly on the isolated road . It was pitch dark already and one would ask why was he willing to drive at this hour of the night on this path which was devoid of streetlights and surrounded by dense forest . But to him , these adventures derived him an unknown pleasure and he was would willingly take any the risk to attain this strange , euphoric feeling .

He carelessly drove along the rough patches with lightening speed without a worry in the world, as the blissful solitude enveloping the atmosphere bestowed him with peace .

He pulled the hand-break immediately as his eyes fell on the warning plate .The road he was heading to was temporarily out of order . He felt his nerves tensing up and he wanted to rush back home then and there but the underlying pride he beheld somehow gave him the courage to lead through the alternate path 'Highway no. 51' . The dark , intriguing 'Highway no. 51'

He cautiously applied the reverse gear as he took the alternate path . Everything seemed familiar to his even after so many years . The uneven grooves , the sharp turns and the unusual calmness in the atmosphere .

He treaded forward as he noticed a lone figure standing at the corner of the road . Curiosity from nowhere struck him and he stopped the car abruptly .

He opened the window pane slowly as his eyes unsurped the beauty that the standing entity beheld . There stood a beautiful lady most probably in her early twenties , looking at nowhere in particular .

Her eyes fell on the car and she stepped forward and leaned on the window pane ." I lost the track of this place , mind giving me a lift?" , she spoke with an unusual composure in her voice and he couldn't help but compare her voice with the wind chimes .
His voice betrayed him then and there and all he could is nod his head denoting approval .

The initial fifteen minutes were spent in silence as Reyansh was trying his level best to ignore the piercing gaze of the enchantress that sat besides him. As if her smooth , scintillating skin paired with those mystic , hazel eyes weren't enough , her scandalously revealing outfit made things more difficult for him .

She was clad in a black colored , knee length dress and it obviously didn't lack in the body revealing part . The outfit gave him full access to her dusky legs and the exposed cleavage made his thoughts all the more sinful .

This was not normal . He usually didn't fantasize of with a random stranger , he was obviously not that desperate ! He felt a sudden pull towards her from the very moment he laid his eyes on her , like she had cast some spell on him .


Logic and rationality made no sense to him as per now and all he wanted was to take her into his arms and kiss away every drop of nectar that lied beneath those rose petals

As if reading his thoughts , she moved forward , making him face her as she blended her lips with his and he forgot everything else that existed in that very instant .
He could swear he had never relished anything as delicious and sumptsous as he explored the sweetness that lied in those crevices .

Reality struck to him as he heard the vigorous honking of the truck that was pacing towards them and he swiftly switched his control on the steering wheel and avoided the terrible mishap that could have happened .

He was panting heavily as he realized the gravity of what could have happened . He eyed her only to witness the brimming desires that were evident in those deep trenches of her hazel ones . She inclined towards him and fiercely bit his earlobe as if asking for more as her hands strolled lazily on his thighs making him lose every ounce of resistance in him .

" Hotel Midnight Harmony " , she mouthed huskily near his ears and he turned and bit her lips ferociously , expressing his approval .

The ride to their desired destination was torturous to Rey as she teased him all along , biting him , nipping him , kissing him as if inviting him openly to devour her and he found it all the more challenging to resist her .

He pulled her out of the car and marched towards the entrance . The world , people and he himself didn't matter at that instant . All he wanted to do was satiate the burning desires evoking in him . He winded up with all the formalities and headed towards the room with her scooped in his arms , his eyes never leaving hers . He knew he would die of sexual frustration if he was made to wait any longer.

He closed the door abruptly with a loud thud and put her down only to engulf her in a ferocious kiss , a kiss that expressed all the raging desires erupting out of him like burning lava .

They broke the earth-shattering kiss as she freed herself from his tight embrace making him groan . She arched backwards and he approached her stealthily , his eyes never leaving her as cornered her against the wall . Her hands carelessly wandered as if memorizing every inch of his staunch contour . She leaned forward and inhaled his musky cologne as he gasped in pleasure and he was sure his every cell was on fire

He grabbed her waist as his lips yearned to taste her divine ones . But she was quick enough and retorted backwards . She clutched the collar of his shirt demanding dominance .She knocked him across the wall in one swift motion , leaving him all startled and curious in anticipation . She dug her face into his neck and breathed heavily evoking sinous desires within himself . She grabbed his shirt and mercilessly ripped it in bits and tatters . Her lips trailed an undefined path all along his neck and collar bone , rewarding his hungry skin with lingering kisses as he thrust her more into him to feel more of her heavenly body .

She bit him fiercely on the thumping pulse as he moaned in response . He clutched her forcefully pushed her as she fell on the bed .

"Not so soon Miss , Not so soon " ,

He approached her briskly , his eyes wandered around her heavenly frame shamelessly as his insides craved to devour every inch of her skin .

He landed upon her and took her lips into his with hers and their breath mingled with eachother as he tasted her luscious lips while his hands her flesh . Their bodies were hopelessly crushed into themselves , not allowing even a pint of air to surpass between them .

He wanted to get more of her by every passing second. She was like a drug ,the more he relished her , the more he needed her . His lips grazed though her neck to her cleavage , biting her , nibbling her , torturing her for teasing him all the while . She didn't have even the slightest idea of how much was her piercing gaze affected him . She was least aware of what those kisses did to him .

He unhastened the straps of her dress as he admired the Goddess that lied beneath her . The almighty had sculpted her with perfection , sheer perfection . She was what they call flawless and he felt he was fortunate enough to have gotten the chance of having her tonight .

He undid the hook of the flimsy garments that debarred him for exploring her more . He feasted on each and every minute part of her as if he wanted to mark her his till the end of time. He worshiped her like a disciple and she expressed her gratitude with moans .

His rugged lips trailed downwards and planted numerous peppery kisses on her navel as she moaned harder making more testosterone gush through his veins .

He devoured each and every part of her form to quench his thirst and satiate his hunger . The more he savoured her , the more his insides ached to feel her making him harder if it was even possible .

He found it all the more difficult to break though his resistance and diminish the only gap that separated them with every passing second . He finally entered her as he lost the last pint of tolerance that beheld in him , brandishing her as his and she drove him into another world of bliss as both drifted to their own paradise .

xxx



His hand wandered around the bed in an attempt to find her and he drowsily jerked upwards when he didn't find her . An involuntary smiled wavered on his lips as he recollected the events which took place some time back .



His witnessed the silhouette of her near the window . He approached her cautiously to startle her . She turned around sensing him as their eyes met . The eyes , he realized they weren't the same . They possessed something unearthly , something inhuman in them . They were dark and vague unlike before as if they seeked for revenge ... Her constant piercing gaze was suffocating . He tried to avert his gaze but to no avail . He felt her devious eyes were engulfing his existence as making his entire form tremble miserably . His breath was hitched and he wanted to scream but his voice died in his throat as images of the past turbulently flowed around him .. He collapsed on the floor as she strangled his soul out of his body .


5 years back

He was drunk , he was hopelessly drunk when his friends asked him not to drive . But he didn't consider anyone's opinion . He recklessly drove on the road when he heard a faint scream . He stopped his car immediately . Realization dawned upon him when his eyes fell on the motionless body soaked in blood lied in front of him . He wanted to help , he wanted to save her but he was too scared , too frightened to react . He decided to opt the easy way out and escaped leaving the innocent human to die there ...

""I will hurt you for this. I don't know how yet, but give me time. A day will come when you think yourself safe and happy , and suddenly your joy will turn to ashes in your mouth, and you'll know the debt is paid "


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I hope sabko concept samajh aaya atleast😆
This is my late christmas gift to everyone 😃
It took my every cent of energy to complete this OS ... How I hate writing on love-making -_-.
This is my second attempt on the same , I hope it was good enough .
Special thanks to Vaishuu baby for the amazing title .. ^__^
Teri daant ke bina ye complete nahi ho pata lol😆
Do review 😃

Thanking you .
Yours ,
Mahi

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Why mahi why?? Or should I say how??
You do derive some sadistic pleasure for torturing us like this right?
I have read the whole thing nearly three times over and I have yet to decipher how you have created something so sensuous and exotic with mere words.
The whole story from start to finish captured an element of thrill and mystery with such perfection that it felt almost real and had me clutching my phone fighting a battle within myself to enjoy every word slowly or satiate my craving for more.
The detailing was absolute perfection, the thoughts, the emotions, the rush of excitement was penned with such expertise that I could feel it as of it was happening with me.
The way you expressed kriya as a ravishing goddess, a drug, something he could not help bit want, a temptation so lethal and dark that it nearly drove him crazy with desire was blissful.
The end definitely worked for me, the unexpected element of paranormal making me a do a double take.
The best thing for me was that it had this unique aura of darkness which was perfectly maintained throughout and the fact that you could take nothing for granted
The main seduction was ofcourse absolutely deadly. I'm not gonna dwell in the details because I don't want to tarnish it with my words but I'll say this is by far the best work I've read by you which makes me doubt you're a novice to this style.
I don't know whether to love you for giving us something so ethereal and beautiful or hate you for doubting your skill and depriving us of this for so long.
It was an absolute joy and an 'experience' to read this. Just flawless
Edited by medha_is_me - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjali22

amazing os

loved it
well written

Thank you ^__^
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such a wonderful concept..
Personally I luv to read this type of Romantic Fantasy..
Beautifully written..
Luvd every bit of it..
Great Job
Edited by --Shukti-- - 11 years ago
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Awesum OS...

Loved it...

Well d end was good...

Beautifully written and executed...
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Unresed 😳
I was first to comment
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OH MY GOD !!!
So this was the OS you and Adi were discussing about? 😛 OH MY HOLY GOD! Itna intense OS and utna hi intense concept, btw samjh aa gaya 😆 Bhondu nahi hun 🤣 BTW wow wow wow ! This was amazingly hot and beautifully written ! Romu, one of your best works ever. Ikr, writing love making things are a little difficult but you wrote them in the best possible manner 👏 You are a star writer. Muaaah 🤗
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supab os different concept asa concept to kabhi nahi suna love it
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Originally posted by: medha_is_me

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Why mahi why?? Or should I say how??
You do derive some sadistic pleasure for torturing us like this right?
I have read the whole thing nearly three times over and I have yet to decipher how you have created something so sensuous and exotic with mere words.
The whole story from start to finish captured an element of thrill and mystery with such perfection that it felt almost real and had me clutching my phone fighting a battle within myself to enjoy every word slowly or satiate my craving for more.
The detailing was absolute perfection, the thoughts, the emotions, the rush of excitement was penned with such expertise that I could feel it as of it was happening with me.
The way you expressed kriya as a ravishing goddess, a drug, something he could not help bit want, a temptation so lethal and dark that it nearly drove him crazy with desire was blissful.
The end definitely worked for me, the unexpected element of paranormal making me a do a double take.
The best thing for me was that it had this unique aura of darkness which was perfectly maintained throughout and the fact that you could take nothing for granted
The main seduction was ofcourse absolutely deadly. I'm not gonna dwell in the details because I don't want to tarnish it with my words but I'll say this is by far the best work I've read by you which makes me doubt you're a novice to this style.
I don't know whether to love you for giving us something so ethereal and beautiful or hate you for doubting your skill and depriving us of this for so long.
It was an absolute joy and an 'experience' to read this. Just flawless


MEDHA I love you
You have no idea how amazingly you decipher my write ups ... I myself am not able to do that you know
I am super glad to know I was able to create the necessary ambience for the story ..I wasn't sure if I will be able to pen this properly ..But your amazing review makes me squeal in delight and relived
You liked it ? Thank Goodness you like her description

I wanted to show her unearthly and at the same time didn't want to give any hint to the readers about the suspense ..Glad it worked😃
You liked the love making part ? God I wanted to hit myself hard after writing that ... I was damn exhausted ...after reading it
Thank you so much darling🤗
I always look forward to you reviews ...They leave a fulfilling smile on my face :*
Edited by -Khwahish- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: princessSonia

Awesum OS...

Loved it...

Well d end was good...

Beautifully written and executed...


Thanks yaar 🤗
I am glad u loved it ^_^

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