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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Awwweee Mahi Di... :D
dis os is ssooo goood..
Amazing concept n beautifully written.. Loved reading it...
Sacchhh mein, u have very diff style of writing n really like it..
:D
superb os
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Kaheesha

This was so amazing and is extremely well written

the story is so unique sweety ... I loved the way you wrote love making ...
It was a treat to read
write more
Love
Minky


Thanks minks 🤗
Glad to know that u loved it ^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Madhu_ArSha

Awwweee Mahi Di... :D
dis os is ssooo goood..
Amazing concept n beautifully written.. Loved reading it...
Sacchhh mein, u have very diff style of writing n really like it..
:D
superb os


Thankuu swty 🤗
Glad u liked the concept and my style of riting ^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
a different concept n story.
well written.
njoyed it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Sneha.V.Arsha

a different concept n story.
well written.
njoyed it


Thanks u ^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
fantastic!!! Its different...😃

Haven't read any thriller mysterious work with romance laced in it... since so long...😛

& its unusual to happen... but supernatural do exist ... specially when it concerns a strong revenge...😊

Its was her fateful night.. or to say his dead end was approaching that he had to go through the same path...😳

Lolzz.. i knew there is something so strange abt her ... like who the hell will pounce n engage sexually with a stranger like that... 😉😆

So it made it cut clear... that she was waiting just for him... n with her seductress look... she already had a plan... 😎

Fu*k... that was so damn sexyyy ... u totally blew my mind... it was freakinggg hawwwttt ... such a killer n sinfully amazing romance.. hotness unleashed... ☺️👏

Rey is a jerk... he couldn't understand her unusualness from start... her quick moves & everything else... no wonder he was blinded by lust... 😛

Good ... very good revenge... one who killed an innocent... be it unintentionally... but he was so irresponsible... Must DIE!!!! 😡

I thought at first... she could have killed him straightaway in car.. maybe she tried it ... but her words were- "when he would be happy n feeling safe..." 😈
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Sneha.V.Arsha

a different concept n story.
well written.
njoyed it


Thanks yaar ^_^
Glad u liked it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: yogini64

fantastic!!! Its different...😃

Haven't read any thriller mysterious work with romance laced in it... since so long...😛

& its unusual to happen... but supernatural do exist ... specially when it concerns a strong revenge...😊

Its was her fateful night.. or to say his dead end was approaching that he had to go through the same path...😳

Lolzz.. i knew there is something so strange abt her ... like who the hell will pounce n engage sexually with a stranger like that... 😉😆

So it made it cut clear... that she was waiting just for him... n with her seductress look... she already had a plan... 😎

Fu*k... that was so damn sexyyy ... u totally blew my mind... it was freakinggg hawwwttt ... such a killer n sinfully amazing romance.. hotness unleashed... ☺️👏

Rey is a jerk... he couldn't understand her unusualness from start... her quick moves & everything else... no wonder he was blinded by lust... 😛

Good ... very good revenge... one who killed an innocent... be it unintentionally... but he was so irresponsible... Must DIE!!!! 😡

I thought at first... she could have killed him straightaway in car.. maybe she tried it ... but her words were- "when he would be happy n feeling safe..." 😈


You yourself have deciphered the entire story so well that I don't have anything to say or add 😃
Thanks Yogini🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Res/unres
Awesome concept yar...! Dis was lyk somethin unexpected...!
I neva thot something... Lyk dis wud hav happened while reading at d beginning...!
D way u expressed rey's desires rushing thro him was great yar...!
I must say... It was hot.
Luved it... Keep writing more
Edited by geeth_amar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
awesome OS!!!!!!!
Just loved d concept different n lovely!!!!!!
That was hot n passionate n at the end a bit fearful!!!!!!
I was expecting her to b a Vampire but it seems a bit similar to Talaash!!!!!
Keep writing more such nice OS!!!!!

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