It's A Beautiful Day! (SwaRon OS)

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Vadhana

@Vaddy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

It seemed like a dream <3 beautiful serene and lovely :)

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

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Di..i will take sometime to edit it..OS fir se padhungi fir comment karungi 😳

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

First of all welcome back its been a long time iv seen you here..😃.
The Os was lovely.. I liked the idea of the songs list it sweet and romantic..❤️. Then the Susu idea of sharon hehehe hasa diya..😆.
The sweet moments they spent talking and romancing each other.. Then the guitar playing by sharon and both of them getting drenched in the rain all of it was beautiful I loved it..
Last but not the least the confession to the gang by sharon through her actions that she loves swayam was great..👍🏼.
Keep writing more hope we get to see more of you and your works on the forum from now..😊

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Barso re meghaaa :D ;D
Lol megha di you wrote it so cutely :*
Swayam and sharon spending cute romantic time with each other, sharon making tea for swayam...awwh! And that jungle joke was LOLL
You described them so amazingly that i didn't wanted those scenes to end :/
Then gang confession was unpredictable for swayam which was very nicely penned, everybody's reaction were superr!
Loved it!

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vaishali

@vaishali_mhaske

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Lovely OS...👏

Beautifully penned it down...😊

Loved it..😊

Thanks for PM

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

loved the sweet moments between swaron!!

loved it!!

such a pleasure to have you back!!

ty for the pm nd do write more:)

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

megha---

so nicely written.

perfect combo of mischief lovey dovey ness and love.

loved the humor---the emotions---and the happiness in its lazy onward march.

loved the crazy couple wh love fight and do everything but only with each other, nobody else.

loved the sharon way of publicly disclosing the relationship. loved swayam's reactons and sharon's thoughts.

loved your writing.and the jungle line.

love--medha

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Di! 🤗

Thank God you finally told something, anything about your SS. I was missing it. I have an idea why don't you convert it into never ending story? Like NES.

This OS was awe so beautiful, di! It made my day. I was like giggling and doing aw all the time reading Swaron! They were so adorable in this. The doggy lick! Awe awe awe awe awe awe awe awe awe awe! I can't stop it. I so wanted to just be there and see them doing it and capture this moment for life time. 🤗

Sweet and adorable Swaron and the best Swaron! The tea scene was so sweet! All in all i loved this OS! Love you for writing it.

PS: Sorry for short comment. I am not well. 😔

Love,
Marium

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Shardha_Swaron

@Shardha_Swaron

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Megha aapi
Just lovex this OS!!
Its a dreamy story of two love birds
Romantic songs, susu and tea scene was to to to sweet 😆
Beautifully penned down 👏 👏

Edited by shardhasingh - 11 years ago

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Awww wow... soo cute...😃

Totally loved it...😊

wish...Only if swaron could be shown in the show this way... 😳

Common favourite songs... & then dancing on them whole night ... awww...

Subah to ho gyi ... ab aur kya der hogi usse...😆

Lol... neend bhi zaroori hai... bechara 24*7 majnuman kaise bana rah sakta hai...😛

She's making tea n taking cookery classes too?? Hain??? 😲

Guitar n singing... I would love to see that scene...😊

Nyce... confessing in front of her friends... good... 👏

Beautifully written...👍🏼

Edited by yogini64 - 11 years ago