It's A Beautiful Day! (SwaRon OS)

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

A very own and such a beautifull one shot..Just loved it..Its so long to read ur work..Hope u will maintain same ahead..Now moving on,i really like the small moments they shared,such as sharon surprise for swayam,Making tea with adding her extra love..And then guitar playing moments,drenching in rain,enjoying the beautifull day,A monsoon day..And specially SUSU part..(Thats was hillarious..😆) All the scenes are perfeclty written,I just loved it..And the song is really superbb..Specially loved the lyrics..Describing the real meaning of SUNDAY (Most beautifull Day)..Last loved the sharon open confession in front of gang..In short,Awesome work..very well written..

Keep it up..
Thanx for PM

Prateek

Edited by prateekdave7 - 11 years ago

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

amazing os.. beautiful.. loved d way it was penned.. sharon's surprise for swayam by staying back.. then preparing coffee for him n then d song n dance was romantic n beautiful.. loved d way sharon made gang come to garage n d way she showed d gang that they r together was brilliant.. loved simmi who was standing with tears n rey happy for his nut bffs to finally b 1.. nilesh expression rinni's n vicky amar n bharath's face.. literally rofl reading their expression... awesome os..

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Nancy Beck

@NancyB

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

awsm..simply wow!!
Luvd the ending haha...in actual when the gang wud come to knw abt swwron...they would surely react in the same manner which u hve mentioned

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Rabina

@raveena2807

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Loved, loved, loved it. Every single moment, every single word. Loved that easy and comfortable bond between Swaron. brought back so many cherished Swaron memories. And also loved how it ended: Swaron letting their friends know that they are together. This made me fall in love with Swaron a little more. Nice work.

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RebelHart

@RebelHart

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

O my days!!! This was one beautiful OS, sooo romantic so flowless. What great i deas of romance abd beautiful thought andbreathtaking imagination, megsy u are just too good, WOW just simply WOW, am awestuck am just amazed, it was so gripping from begining till end, not for a second i thought abt anything else but swaron swaron & just swaron. Megsy u r magical i m literally all red and pink coz of the romantic piece of work u created. It was just 'PERFECT' nothing more nothing shot just purely perfect.

I loved the expressive sharon i adored the equally in love sharon and her mischievness. Man swayam was just a dude a hot perfect dude like always 'my dodo' 😳, the way u decribed the nature and both their feeling towards the nature was so dreamy so beautiful, how sharon went openly abt her relation with swayam in front of the whole gang gave me feeling of satisfaction and each and gang member reaction was just amazing, simmi and rey's reaction was the best as being closed to swayam and sharon they both felt their happiness and had tears in their eyes for finally two crazily in love their frnds are together. i never knew you are so romantic but u clearly are very romantic, simple ideas of romance but u given it a life and another meaning throgh ur genius writting skills. O God no matter how much i say about this will not be enough so sm just gonna stop.

P.S. indeed its a beautiful morning and a great strat to a beautiful day as i read a beautiful megsy romance tale 😉

Love ammie 🤗

Edited by Swaron.maniac - 11 years ago

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