Swaron OS: No one messes with My Man!

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Monidipa konar

@ehmmbhluvr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

i really really want this to happen...it is superb piece of writing..so apt and needed for this situation...i just hope that cv's show this...you are an amazing writer i must say that..hats off..:)

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Namratha

@nami2811

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

OMG! I love it I love it!
This is the best OS I've read on d current track. I was lucky enough to read dis. You kept everything so perfect.. Swayam's frustration, Sharon's realization both were so matching with the current D3 track!
I so wish to see this on TV!

You made me more demanding 😆

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Vadhana

@Vaddy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Please continue!!! 🥱 I wanna read more...from you :D amazing work :)

loved the way you potrayed swayam's feelings...and sharon's.

It was perfect. 👏

And I still hate Aditya😡

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zyra

@Zyra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Nyc update!!
I hope dis happens for real... :D

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Muskan Verma

@Muskan_SwaRon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

that was awesome

finally kahi to sharon ko akal aayi😆

i have send u friend request plz accept it and next time do pm me😉

Edited by muskan108 - 12 years ago

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

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Edited by -spongy- - 12 years ago

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VruShan_MaNan

@VruShan_MaNan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

WOW I really want to thank you for writing this OS.👏

After so much of negativity, this is giving me positive vibes.👍🏼

This is the kind of D3 that I want to watch.
I really want Sharon to understand Swayam's pov and also realize her role as a GF and I seriously can't see Swayam suffer like this.

Brilliant work.👏 👏 👏

Loveddd it.❤️

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aku30

@aku30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Awesome OS...

Loved how u potrayed their emotions..👏

Thnx for d PM...😊

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Rose

@--Rose--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Wow Wow Wow Its Jus Amazing:-D:-D
I want this to happen in the show yaar...
Loved it<3<3<3
Love Swaron<3<3<3

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SnehaluvsKSG

@snehaswaron77

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Wow its so so so so freaking beautiful & mesmerizing OS...M speechless after reading this ...Absolutely perfect & immaculate at the same time be it swayam's pain his hurt Sharon guilt & concern for him everything were beautifully penned!!!
Hats off I loved loved loved it...
One more request plz try to make it a SS if possible!!!! Its a strong request cuz its awesomely awesome!!!! Plz make it if possible...