Swaron OS: No one messes with My Man!

Frequent Posters

Sunil

@Suni1986

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

It was wonderful update. Swayam's pain due to all this problem was come to know to sharon. Nd she held herself responsible for this. She want swayam to be happy always bt for his pain, she can do anything to make him happy. Swayam let out his anger bt he wanted to with her nd sharon is there for him now.

Quote

Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

So wish to see this happening ...if sharon gets to know the reality and the fact that she is being used...everything will be solved...amazing work dear👏👏👏

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

very nice!!

it is gr8 to read something so positive!

ty for the pm.

Quote

Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Loved this os a lot..
Sharon finally understood swayam's feelings and handled him pretty well..She finally understood aditya khurana's mean plans and am happy the diva sharon's back not only for her friends but also swayam just wish show main bhi aisa hi kuch ho..😊.
Hope this os has one more part would love to read a continuation to it to know how sharon handles aditya khurana..

Edited by sweet16cash - 12 years ago

Quote

manya90

@manya90

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

This was awsum...it is so much needed in d3 rite nw. Best part was that the diva is back!
Its was written so beautifully,plz do continue it!

Quote

mili1987

@mili1987

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Awsome OS...
very nicely penned down...👏👏👏
i hope this happens for real...its high time sharon should know everything

Quote

Shweta

@addicted_love

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Amazing OS !!! 😊
Loved the swayam breakdown 😊 ... I always end up crying seeing swayam cry 😊 ... wish they show something like this in the serial as well...
Thnx fr the PM 😊

Quote

anushka1129

@anushka1129

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

awesome os..
totally loved it..
how i wish something like this happen in the show..
thanks for the pm :)

Quote

-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

it was superb

loved it a lot

amazing

i so wish aisa kuch D3 main ho

it would be magical

love your works..

please do write more

and thanks for the PM

p.s.

tanvish

please

iska next oart hain na..

plz jaldi se post karo

i cant wait

and agar nahi hain toh banao

Edited by -spongy- - 12 years ago

Quote

Don't even know anymore

@Death_Memories

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Nice one
The intensity,frustration and pain were nicely penned down
I really liked swayam's outburst it was very well written
The way sharon comforted him was again amazingly portrayed.
The realization at the end was really awesome and i really want you to continue this one to second part where sharon takes Swayam's mind off the tension and spends some quality time with him and later teaching aadi a lesson pls continue this
Again fab OS👏

Quote

1 2 3 4 5

Swaron OS: No one messes with My Man! - Page 2

Related Topics

Explore Topics