Swaron OS: No one messes with My Man!

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Kritika Julka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Awesome os do hope aisa hi ho

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Awww this is so bloody good
I really wisha aisa hi kuch ho
Gt well soon

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vrushanharshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

awesome os

loved it

may this one u wrote it according to the track going on in the show at dat tym

n i am sorry for commenting late

but truly speaking it was amazingly written os

thanx for the pm

keep writing more

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

I am late as this was a situational OS but it was absoulutely amazing. It had everything, from aggression to guilt to hurt to pain to realization, everything. All the emotions were highly described, especially swayam's aggression and pain in the rehearsal hall and then his broken state in sharon's house.
It was all upbeat and stupendous.

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darshita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

that was a amazing and fabulous... loved it...
wow that he deserve it ... and going to get learn soon
and this time sharon is going to deal with him because he messed up
with everyone rey,swayan and his whole gang and for that the old sharon is back
good ... do continue soon and pm me