Swaron OS: No one messes with My Man! - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Beautifully written

Amazing OS loved the way swayam breakdown infront of sharon and the way she cares for him

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nancynnv

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Posted: 12 years ago

I just loved it...❤️

This is all wht I want ...

I hope thy show something like this...

N the tittle is WOW ...I actually got excited only reading the tittle gud choice👍🏼

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Varada

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome!!👏 Just the way I want the storyline to proceed to...😛 Sharon just can't see her Swayam broken like that...😕 Now Mr. Khurana is in for a big trouble...😆Update soon n pm me...😊

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Roger

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Posted: 12 years ago

I was really disssapointed after seeing the new promo but this os surely made me smile n moreover comfort me too 😆
Hope we get something like this in show too.
Loved it

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medha

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Posted: 12 years ago

smart wala os smarty.

loved it.

hope something like this happens.

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abhilasha_dream

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Posted: 12 years ago

lovely... but is it the end or one more part is left, coz otherwise the heading does not get justified.

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Fatima

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow another amazing OS by you! 👏👏 You wonderfully described all the emotions<3

Loved it. Do continue soon can't wait.

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Divya

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Posted: 12 years ago

it was simply awesome... 😃

ur an amzing writer...i just love ur all work...

d way hav described Swayam emotions were simply perfect... 😊

swayam frustration and Sharon taking care of him...dat was cute... 😉

wish we get similar kind of scene in actual epi... 😊

keep writing more dear.. 😊

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Mehvash Naazneen

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Posted: 12 years ago

amazing os 😊

great work 👍🏼 👏

really loved it

beautifully written

u described emotions very beautifully

swayam's frustation,helplessness can be seen clearly and it was perfect

and sharon taking care of swayam was nice

loved it

do continue 😊

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Neeraj

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Posted: 12 years ago

ek part or chahiye bai kuraan ki halt bhi toh dhekhni hai 😆

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