SwaRon OS - A Promise Broken

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Okay.. Im Sleepless and Bored So thought I would write an OS! Hope you all Like it
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Sharon was really Annoyed at the Way Swayam was acting.. He was being oh-too-stubborn and that annoyed the Crap out of her.. All they had to do was rehearse for the couple dance..

Sh: *To herself* How Awesome!! These Footloose people also had to suddenly announce that they had a couple dance too for the people in the same team!!

Ever since she had become a part of this team Swayam was acting weird... Sharon was actually Happy that She was going to dance again... And deep inside she was happy that it was going to be with Swayam.. The whole drama that took place for this was too much for her anyways.. Rey had fought with her and Swayam as Taani didnt get the 6th Dancers' place and then she finally confessed to cheating and Blah blah blah...

Sharon couldnt think of all that right now as Swayam suddenly decided that He didnt want to dance with her!!

Sh: What the hell is wrong with you?!
Sw: I cant do it!
Sh: Why?!
Sw: Cuz I have to do it with you!!

Ouch!! That really did hurt Sharon.. She knew she wasnt that bad but what had gotten into him noone knew..

Sh: Swayam.. Whats wrong?
Sw: Nothing
Sh: Please cut the Nothing crap!! Ever since I Joined this team you have been cold and indifferent to me!! You think I dont notice?!
Sw: I know you do!
Sh: Then why?!
Sw: Cuz.. Cuz... Forget it Sharon...
Sh: I have the right to know!!!

Swayam had reached the Brim of his patience!! Sharon joining the team was a Shocker to all and Esp. Swayam cuz he was pretty much convinced that She didnt need him in her life and Now Boom she goes being a Vital part of the team and being around him 24*7!

Swayam who was sitting on the floor of the Rehersal hall next to where sharon was standing Got up and pinned her to the mirror in what seemed like just a second!! Sharon was breathing heavily and he could see the confusion in her eyes!

Sw: Well!! I thought you didnt want me in your life and that was the only thing keeping me from coming close to you and there you go becoming the Sixth dancer and being around me all the time... And then you show Immense interest in me and I actually hink you have finally fallen for me and Boom!! I get the News the very day I realise this that I have got the College in Manchester which had been my dream all Along and I have to leave as soon as this Sem ends which is right after the Footloose Competition!!

Sharon was stunned and didnt know exactly what to say.. The only things that was stuck in her head was that He knew!!! And He was Leaving!!!!!

Sh: How.. How.. did you find out?!
Sw: I know you Sharon!!
Sh: Well your wrong!

Sharon knew she had to deny it and Stay away from him as he was leaving and any type of closeness would just mean More Pain for her!!

Sw: ENOUGH SHARON!! I HAVE HAD ENOUGH!!

Sharon was Shocked and Scared but neither could she say anything nor could she move herself when too quickly his lips met hers.. She protested for a minute or so But Swayam's firm hands held her waist and her hands tightly.. She was slowly losing herself and finally Let her hands go upto his neck and pulled him urgently into her lips.. She was kissing him back.. Their lips moulded among each other as Her hands pulled his hands and His grip on he loosened as he pulled her Closer by the waist and held her up to meet his height with ease.. Finally they Broke apart...

Swayam placed his head on hers as she had closed her eyes... He pulled her closer by the waist so that there wasn't even a gap for air to pass through between them.. Thoughts were running through his head as fast as lightning..

Sw: *whispered* Im sorry I broke my promise
Sh: huh?
Sw: I tried to Open the book.. Sorry

Saying this Swayam let go of her and snatched his things from the floor and walked towards the Door cursing himself inside for what he had just done..

Sharon on the other hand was Shocked that he had said that when she finally thought They were going to be together... She then understood that it can never happen unless She started it..

Sh:*Thinking* That.. Swayam that was how our first kiss should have been and it was perfect.. You are PERFECT! And I cant let something this Perfect go..

Sh: Swayam! I Love you!

This was enough to make Swayam stop at the Door way and She knew she had finally won the Battle she was fighting for this long!
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d3ians thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yaayy first to cmmnt!!! awesome... i love the way u write...wish smethhing like dis happens on d show...nd they finally together!! thnxx for writing such a beautiful os..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I love the fact that you made Sharon the sixth dancer! Awesome OS! Big congrats for your first one! Insomnia and boringness must be letting your creative, writer's juices flow freely. I can relate to that! :P
Your writings are a treat to read! pls do rest and keep up the awesome job!! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome. You skipped the drama of taani ( the part which we dont want to see) to the point which we actually want to see. Now seriously i too am wishing to see what will happen between SwaRon if these two are in the same team.
Coming to your OS it was brilliant. Their kiss perfect and them Sharon's confession super awesome.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Areyyy mai toh title dekh ke dar hi gayi thi ... ke koi sad sa hoga 😒

But this ended so beautifully .. I guess SwaRon toh Fairytale hai hi afterall .. and how can a Fairytale NOT have a happy ending ! 😳 ☺️ 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome OS Nish...Loved the fact that it was direct and you ended it so beautifully !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey good one, loved it 😊
Swaron are meant to be together...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Not only did you skip the whole Taani drama( which frankly, I don't think any one of us wants to see) but also added a Swaron confession to it. Kudos to you!

P.S. I really liked the ending.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I just loved this OS... Nicey... Still confused n denial mode sharon.. But finally realising his worth n not letting him go... Awesome... Keep writing more n the first kiss aaawww...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing os nish !! thanks for not putting the tanni drama and only focusing on swaron :) loved the confession and the first kiss was way too adorable :);) u r an awesome writter , do write more !!

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