SwaRon OS - A Promise Broken - Page 2

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AmRiTa_S

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awwiiee beautifully written NISH. Thanx for skipping tanni shit cz i personally can't stand that girl. Love the bit where Swayam was all frustrated abt Sharon being around him 24/7 and loved the part where he placed his head on hers after kissing her and whispered "I am sorry i broke the promise." Trust me i could so visualize dese two while reading you OS. I hope this happens on show it would look so beautiful. Keep writing and please dnt forget to PM me nish 😊

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Puja

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Posted: 13 years ago

Aewsome OS...!!!
Luvd it...finally sharon realisd her felngs fr swayam n said dose 3 majical wrds...lovely...!!!:)
thnx fr d pm...:)

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

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Posted: 13 years ago

Luvly OS...you made it look so simple & straightforward...I hope u get bored more often & we get to read brilliant stuff like this!!! The Swaron moments were so believable & I wish this really did happen😍

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Asma

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome OS nish.

it was very cute one.

I'm really happy that they have confessed.

beautiful ending.

thanks for the pm.

Continuw writing.

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tanharocks

@tanharocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

Fab nish...it was so like swaron...n for me u r the osmest writer... just beautifull...

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Maneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome OS...their kiss was perfect n luved the confession part...

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Sakina

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hayye,this was NAIICCE!!

I loved the way he apologized,and the way she confessed.<33

Hayee...SwaRon <33

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 13 years ago

Cnt believe it dat uv written an os for d 1st tym u wrote it beutifully I luvd it keep writng..

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-Ripal-

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Posted: 13 years ago

wooww fabulous loved it

brilliant ...luved the ending swaron confeesion awsumm

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NikiBh8

@NikiBh8

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awww,,,Nish It Ws So Sweet 😊

Thanks For Pm

P.S - Love the Ending 😳

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