SwaRon OS - A Promise Broken

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

How delusional of you, Nish. 🤓

Honestly? The OS is well written, I'll give you that. But what's the nicer part is your imagination skill, well done there, you just made 47 people apart from yourself real happy for two minutes. Yeah, it took me two minutes to read it and all, just saying! Made a marvelous read. 👏

-K

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rachita_1994

@rachita_1994

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Rasam!!! Bhagwan ke liye becum the scriptwriter please!!!! Pleasee!!

U wer sooo gooodd(as usuall)

Please keep getting bored and keep writing!!! Loveee this part!!! It was soo much like SwaRon!!!!

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nly4usharon

@nly4usharon

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

first of sryy m very late 2 comment...internals the soo couldnt b regular here...tu ne toh dara diya yaar!!!
title dekh kar yeh samji thi ki koi sad OS hoga...bt u ended it on a happiee note!!!
ahhh i loved it!!!i wish tujhe rozz needh naa aaye aur hamein aise beautiful OS padhe ke liye de!!!LOL!!jus kidding!!!

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-bitz-

@-bitz-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Nice OS Nish...loved their Kiss and Sharon's confession <3<3<3

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SugarCubes

@SugarCubes

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Awesomie blossomie OS! I know I'm too late but solly dolly!
Itna sad title, itna happy OS! I loveeeddd it!! :D

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KaranWahi5

@KaranWahi5

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Their First magical kiss!!!!

Sharon is so right HE really is perfect.Cv's seekh lo kuch

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Madhura

@Madhura..

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

I saw this thanks to NL...guess didnt get a pm. Our pm tragedy lol..

But it was brilliant and perfect!!No wonder you won!!

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Zeenat

@-Zeenat-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

aww, this is awesomeness!<3 wrt more pleasee.. 😳

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Wow . . . . Sharon wants him . . . . . & swayam is avoiding her coz he knw he can't get her love 😭
awww . . . . Majnu,,, diva ab itni bhi predictable nhi hai 😛
& this broken promise is totally appreciable . . . . Coz ur words made her confess
commendable job . . . . Well done 🥳