Swaron SS ~I love you swayam~ completed - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
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when r u updating next ??? plz make it soon ...
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Continue soon pleasee and do pm me! The update you wrote was amazing! :D
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pleasee pm me when u update i hope u update fast
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Heyi pls update soon...eagerly luking 4ward 2 ur nxt part...plsss update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I have always wanted to read a SwaRon FF from Sharon's point of view .. thanks for writing it ou so beautifully .. Id be thank ful if u sent me a PM :)

I love how Sharon is smiling seeing him smile ... thats like a dream in the show .. no ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Sooo beautiful...:)
first, shar...:) she kept looking at swayam only...:) so cute...:)

n swayam listened all sharey conv... Wow... He must really very happy k finally his shar fall fo him...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys first of all thank you for being so patient with me and sticking with my SS...i am in a hurry so am not able to reply to all ur comments individually. but thanks all of for being such a support and such great comments. yes i did mentioned that it contains 5-6 parts but i ended it in this one i thought maybe that would have been too dragging. anyways here is the last part enjoy...i am warning ya all its very boring so read at ur own risk.
oh and one more thing this chapter is dedicated to Mansie she kept reminding me that i have an SS to update and never forgot to mention my SS in her precious comments...so a special thank to u Mansie hope u will like it.

chapter 3

Rey shook his head and turned around only to find swayam standing leaning against the window. His eyes filled with unshed tears and relief written all upon his face. Rey looked at him; he looked at rey and passed him a big smile. Rey also smiled at him and walked towards him saying "congrats dude" swayam just smiled he couldn't believe what he heard. It seemed like a dream to him. "She loves me" whispered swayam and rey said while patting his shoulder "yeah dude she finally admitted it" swayam "yeah she did'.she did" he grabbed rey from her shoulders and started shaking him saying "OMG you heard her she loves me'.I can't believe this'pinch me I am dreaming" rey pinched him and he moved back while rubbing his arm still lost in his daze yeah she loves me.Swayam grabbed rey's hand and started twirling him around singing "she loves me'lalalala'she loves me..lalala" rey looked at him confused and for a second thought that he had completely lost it. May be it was huge shock for him that Sharon finally admitted that she loves him and he is in a shock or something like that. But when swayam placed his other hand on his own shoulder and started dancing with him still singing he decided to play along so he started dancing with him pretending to be a girl and singing along "I love you'lalala'I love you'hmmm'lalala" swayam suddenly stopped dancing and his eyes gained a different spakle as he looked in reys eyes making himself conscious asking him "you love me?" rey replied in a girl's voice "yes, I do, swayam" then he turned his head sideways and pretended to be blushing but then suddenly swayam cupped his face and looked at him with so much intensity that for a second rey thought he can see through him then he pushed him back causing him to fall down yelling "what are you doing dude?...I am not Sharon..geez man" swayam stood back and replied coming back to reality "I am sorry it's just that I can't believe it" rey replied while creating some distance between them "yeah yeah whatever, leave now I think she is looking for you and I don't wanna be alone with you here" swayam shook his head and then ran outside saying "oh yeah she is looking for me" rey smiled at him he was really very happy for the two of them.

Sharon marched towards the cafeteria to look for him like a solider going for a war and with no other intention but to come home only after winning the battle. Her pace involuntary slowed down and her heart beat increased as she approached the caf. Her mind started to think what am I gonna say to him? Moreover how am I gonna say to him whatever I wanna say to him. She didn't even realize that she had stopped a few feet away from the caf. Her heart was beating so fast that she could actually hear her own heartbeat. And within seconds she was taking deep breaths thinking hard what to say to him, how to say to him. She had heard, read and seen in movies that confessing ur love to someone is not as easy as it looks or seems. She had seen how someone fumbles to say just three words and she would get so frustrated when the confession in any drama or film would take too long. Now experiencing it all in reality made her realize why it actually took such a long time. she closed her eyes and took deep breaths and said "you said have to go and say I freaking love you swayam" she then opened her eyes and shook her head saying "no that's actually five words I will say I love you swayam'these are four it will take less time'yes" she nodded to herself in approval finally thinking what to say. She took a step forward and her heart again started to beat a double rate. She felt as if she was going to commit a murder in reality committing a murder seemed to be easier to task to her right now. She could feel her palm getting sweaty and curled them into fists. With every step she took towards the caf, her heart seemed to beat faster. She took another step forward now just one more step and she would be in the caf. She moved her leg forward and then turned around and ran in the opposite direction. She suddenly stopped and asked "why the hell I am running? And whom am I running from? Swayam? Isn't he the one I where I want all my paths to lead me." She smiled as she once again remembered what happened earlier in the caf and said "you are Sharon rai prakash and she can do anything. She is not afraid of anything" she once again walked towards the caf getting a funny feeling in the pit of her stomach and finally entered the caf. Her eyes searched every nook of it and swayam was nowhere to be found." She joined her hands together and placed her head above them saying happily "haye'.he is not here" she was so relieved. She turned around and almost bumped into someone but both of them took a step backward at the right moment. She looked at him as if he caught her stealing the last cookie and he looked at her with brightness in his eyes. He just wanted to tell her that he loves her too but was scared that she might get upset or eavesdropping on her and rey's conversation. They looked at each other for a while and when she didn't said anything he broke the silence by saying "you wanted to see me" Sharon first nodded her head and then suddenly said "how do u know I was looking for u?" swayam realized his mistake and said"mm..woh rey told me'yeah he told me" Sharon nodded and then started starring at the ground. She said no idea why suddenly she was at loss of words. She started at the ground concentrating on a specific spot as if there was something very important written there. "Why the hell r u staring at the ground Sharon?" she asked herself and she had no answer. She suddenly felt as if she had forgotten whole ABCD and didn't know any letter anymore. Swayam was being very impatient. She was taking such a long time to say three simple words. He finally spoke once again "so'what did u wanted to say?" sharon looked at him first time and replied "I wanted to say that'.ummm'I'." swayam encouraged her and said "you?"Sharon "I'.I" swayam "yes I got that'.you please move forward now" shaon looked at him straight in the eye and said "I'I'.u r so stupid" she pushed him aside and ran away from there, leaving him with a silly grin on his face.

"Gosh I am s stupid" she said to herself. "I made a fool of myself in front of him" she opened the window and looked at the sky. Clouds with a shade of grey and black had surrounded the moon. "Looks like it's gonna rain" she thought and jus then a rain drop fell on her face followed by lots of others. She moved her torso outside the window and allowed the raindrops to fall on her face. She opened her arms wide and the wind took the opportunity to flirt with her.

Swayam smiled as he remembered how she confessed her love for him in front of rey but in front of him she was completely at loss for words. He had no idea she could be so shy and he loved his shy Sharon even more now. He sighed and thought how long is she gonna take. He didn't want to wait so he stood up and "I don't wanna wait any more'if she doesn't wanna be the first one to say it then I will be" with this he walked out of his house grabbing his car keys on his way out.

Sharon opened the door and walked on the roof once again opening her arms wide open enjoying the rain and the cool wind. The raindrops kept drenching her and the wind kept flirting with her, playing with her. She felt so happy today and the weather made her heart burst with joy. They say that "rain" is a very romantic thing. It can turn on anyone. People have shared so many romantic moments in rain and she wondered how her and swayam's first rain together will be. How they will play together in rain and they will share their first rain dance. How his tough will burn her skin and how their first kiss in rain would be. She covered her face with her hands as heat flooded to her cheeks upon the last thought. Then she shouted while twirling around in rain and with her eyes still closed "I LOVE YOU SWAYAM" then she heard someone say "I love you too Sharon" she stopped and her eyes fluttered open. Her heart almost stopped when she saw him standing there equally drenched in rain. His shinning like she had never seen them before. she felt something twist in her stomach her mind wondered "did I heard him right?" and then he said again "I love you so much" and it was enough to tell her that she is not dreaming and she indeed heard him right. She was not one of those who would waste time or moment so without wasting a single second more she ran into his arms which were wide open for her. She hit into him with such a force that he almost lost his balance but saved them the fall by taking support of the wall. She hugged him tightly and buried her face in his chest. He hugged her back with equal force and she said "I am so sorry for all those time I hurt you'.I never realized that I love you so much" swayam "it's okay Sharon'.but now u know that u love that's enough" then he broke the hug and went down on his knees and moved his hand forward saying "I am not good with all this romance and saying mushy mushy stuff' but would u like to dance with me still the end of the world" Sharon couldn't believe her eyes and ears. Is he saying that he is not good with romantic stuff? Does he know he said the most romantic thing to her in the world'.dance was her passion'.and he her love was asking her if she would like to dance with him till the end of world'why won't she?...of course she would" she gave her hand in his hand replying "yes I would" he smiled at her and stood up placing his hand on her waist and her on his shoulder. Then they started dancing and she got her answer to how their first rain dance would be.

And they danced till the end of the world.

THE END

P.S: ahh boring right? i know but still since u all are so kind do leave ur feedback and hit the button. and plz ignore my mistakes i am feeling to sick to read it again.

NOTE: okay guys so about my FF i had to intentions to continue it but thanks a ton for being such a support again. the response is overwhelming thank you for that. finally i decided that i will continue it credit for that goes to you all who actually asked me to continue it but mostly to my beloved sister who strictly ordered me to continue it so thanks ya all and my loving sister. i will continue it. if u all r willing enough to give it a chance then i am no one to stop u and hope i will be able to reach atleast half way to ur expectations. will reply ya all individually soon and yeah updates will be after 21st now.

love

-Baz

Edited by DaShInG_DeViL - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing swaron love confession n rain dance.i m really happy that u decided to continue ur ff,update it soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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U can't cal dis boring at all!!!dis update was way too cute...i loved d last bit..wen sharon unknwngly confessed her llove in rain..n swayam heard it ri8...!!!it was pretty romantic swaRon!!!
n happy dat u r continueing with ur FF!!!bt dis SS ends!!!:(
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Res. Will edit it later. Sorry am in a hurry now.

N I'm sooo glad that you've decided to continue your FF. :)

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