Swaron SS ~I love you swayam~ completed

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Amazing update baz.

It was lovely.

thanks for pm.

beautiful end.

It was wonderfully described.loved rain sequence.

Thanks for continuing ur ff.

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manasi

@manasie23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

oohh well thank you for keeping that in mind that with all ur updates i always asked to update this SS too... n thanks atlast u updated it... it was just awesome loved it... not too less not too much... i could feel the hesitation going on sharon's mind while reading it... and thanks for continuibg ur FF too...

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ABI

@ABBY92

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

You finally updated it and it was great...I love the way Swayam was so happy when he found out that Sharon loves him and the whole ReYam scene was so cute...The way Sharon was so shy to talk to Swayam in the cafeteria was HAYEE !!! And to end it with the whole sequence under the rain was PERFECT !!!

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346815

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

So it rained on her ... like in movies ... and so just like any other girl's dream .. Sharon Rai Prakash finally Got her fairytale moment.

I LOVED how u showed Sharon SOOO nervous .. and she ran away from Swayam without telling him how she felt .. and told him I love you in the most absurd way possible .. "I .. u .. are stupid" 😆 Sharon Rai Prakash .. sooo romantic 😆. But that feeling .. that despite knowing how much the other person (Swayam) likes u ... u feel SOOO nervous when the time comes for YOU to tell them how you feel .. in fact the fact that they love you SO much .. makes it all the more difficult and you feel all the more apprehensive .. wondering if you could ever live upto how they feel about you. And THIS .. was SO beautifully portrayed in the last chapter. Loved reading EVERY bit of this SS. Do you mind if I copy paste this one word and save it .. so that I can read it sometime later again ? 😳

Edited by SwaRon911 - 13 years ago

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

amazing update and thanks for a wonderful ss it was amaznig

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Sometimes it takes water to kindle a fire. Awesome conclusion . Loved the FF to the core.

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

U r like ur Swayam of this SS ... he says I am not into romance &mushy mushystuff & u say this confession was boring ... I mean u know how far both these things r from th truth - luvd ur andaz of rain . ... the classic luv season - kya confession tha shewas finding it so difficult to brng it out when she made the effort to but when she let her mind float free it came out so simply...

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Snowey

@Snowey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Amazing update.

Loved the emotions you shown when swayam gets to know that sharon does love him.

His happiness knew no boundary and what you wrote was spot on. Rey and Swayam dance was cute 😆. Sharon's monologue was awesome, what she felt for him had turned her in to a sweet girl from the DIVA..at least for the moment. The rain added to an already burning chemistry that these two share.

Thanks for the update and PM.

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Finally u updated this one...i was waiting for such a long time for you to update this one and even i reminded u several times abt this one. U call this boring..this was so cuteee..the whole ReYam conversation and dance was so adorable and more than that i love the way Sharon was marching her way to cafeteria and how she was relieved and said "haye ..he is not here" that was so cute.

Love that u made Sharon so nervous that she was constantly staring at ground and forgot ABCD 😆 and love how swayam was provoking her to say but instead she pushed and ran away saying "ur so stupid" awww and tht stupid grin on swayam's face was adorable. The confession was superb.

I can't express how uber cute this update was..i was grinning like an idiot while reading the whole update..I STILL AM 😛

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BeulaSwaRon

@BeulaSwaRon

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#80

loved the confession...it isnt boring...its beautiful...their first rain dance...so sweet...plzzz update the next part continuing from this rain scene itself...