Swaron SS ~I love you swayam~ completed - Page 9

Originally posted by: SwaRon911

So it rained on her ... like in movies ... and so just like any other girl's dream .. Sharon Rai Prakash finally Got her fairytale moment. ...yeah she finally did hope she gets in show too soonish :)

I LOVED how u showed Sharon SOOO nervous .. and she ran away from Swayam without telling him how she felt .. and told him I love you in the most absurd way possible .. "I .. u .. are stupid" 😆 Sharon Rai Prakash .. sooo romantic 😆. But that feeling .. that despite knowing how much the other person (Swayam) likes u ... u feel SOOO nervous when the time comes for YOU to tell them how you feel .. in fact the fact that they love you SO much .. makes it all the more difficult and you feel all the more apprehensive .. wondering if you could ever live upto how they feel about you...yes you are so right...i wanted to show the hesitation from sharon's side for which i used a whole paragraph and u my friend just explained in these few lines...i wanted to show how the hesitation from sharon's side because no matter how strong she might be to the world in the end she is a girl and seeing her majnu infront of her just like anyother girl she forgets what to say... And THIS .. was SO beautifully portrayed in the last chapter....thank you... Loved reading EVERY bit of this SS....thank you... Do you mind if I copy paste this one word and save it .. so that I can read it sometime later again ? 😳...of course not dear go ahead...

see thats why i told ya i love ur comments...u notice such details and comment about them which i loved to read...loved ur comment to the core..keep giving me such biggy biggy and goody goody comment.

and yeah i am Baz...and you are rafi?? sorry if i got ur name wrong.

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Amazing swaron love confession n rain dance.i m really happy that u decided to continue ur ff,update it soon

Originally posted by: Rumeli_GkD

U can't cal dis boring at all!!!dis update was way too cute...i loved d last bit..wen sharon unknwngly confessed her llove in rain..n swayam heard it ri8...!!!it was pretty romantic swaRon!!!...awww i am glad u liked it.
n happy dat u r continueing with ur FF!!😳 !bt dis SS ends!!!:(...aww i'll be startng another one soon,

You are really a superb writer yaar. The way sharon confessed is really so very romantic. She is shy and tongue tied in front of swayam. It is really a mindblwoing OS thanks so much. Loved every minute of readin it.