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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thnx friends for all ur support n encouragement🤗, this is the last part of the story plz read it n leave ur valuable comments also.Because from next month i'll be totally away from forum except one day till next year. 😳


😳~~~~~~~~~~~~~~PART-9~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~😳

I'm in my office room peeping out through the glass and watching out the tall buildings in before me. Now what I am from what I was; a well known business tycoon, owner of many hotels and shops, has a big palace like sweet home and Peihu as my business partner. I memorized how with guidance and blessings of Murli sir, how I befooled Dhanand and emerge out as Lotus from sludge.

I went back to D's home n make a fake call n say ,"Ya Mr. Nath u don't worry as soon as possible I manage to take D's sign n soon u'll be no.1, here, in this city."

Then to police inspector Nirbhik,"Ya u'll get 50% shares of his business company."

And finally to Mr. Pasha, "Congrats pasha sir, Mr. Nath n Nirbhik both agrees to deal with u and more probably I think Mr. Nath'll also work with u soon on a new bakery project."

Everytime ' Everytime D check phone calls n find them correct. One day his evil mind had a superevilish plan to kill Nath, Nirbhik n Pasha. He call out them in a party, and stretched out his piston on Nirbhik, "U cheat me!!"

"What r u saying, I'm cheating a big cheater like u?" a pale n confused face of Nirbhik I almostly fall to laugh.

He also stretched out his gun onto D, and I shoot on D hiding behind the curtain. Everybody in the party thinks that Nirbhik have fired on D, and a policeman is handed over to police. After his death, I handeled my father's business which is snatched by Dhanand. Murli sir in his home with some new research scholars, Vijay has completed his Ph.D got a good job and I with my mother live in my sweet home n still waiting for my sweet life partner. That's how I got my revenge and finally this is my petite but a tough story.

😳~~~~~~~~~~~~~~the end~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~😳

Edited by indupriya2008 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
awww u ended it 😭

nicely written
loved it

will miss u richa🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
bad girl. I knw y u end d story
bcz u want 2 leave us *cry* *cry* *cry*
hume sab chodkar chale jaa rahe h.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
aur pm jis jis kiye h tumne. Pata nehi vo log ayega ki nehi.
Kyuki vo log v chodkar chale gye
*cry louder at top of my voice*
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
awww u ended it 😭
nicely written
loved it

will miss u richa🤗


thnx meri didi ji
i'll also miss u..🤗



bad girl. I knw y u end d story
bcz u want 2 leave us *cry* *cry* *cry*
hume sab chodkar chale jaa rahe h.

maharaniji don't cry..😔.kuch months ke liye hi toh gayab ho jaongi...per chinta mat karo i'll be back very soon...and agar is beech time laga toh kabhi kabhi aa bhi jaongi... till then miss u rui...🤗🤗




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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: radhikarani

aur pm jis jis kiye h tumne. Pata nehi vo log ayega ki nehi.
Kyuki vo log v chodkar chale gye
*cry louder at top of my voice*


Aur ending kaisi lagi yeh to bata do radhikey??
Don't cry sakhi, nhi to D ko bura lagega 😆😆...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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~^~ yes do visit warna me khub roungi ki magadh me bhuchar aa jayega ~^~
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Posted: 13 years ago
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~^~ ms d old fragnance of forum
hum saath saath the ~^~
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Posted: 13 years ago
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buchal aata hai buchar nhi 😆...n hum chahe kitna bhi door hon saath saath he rahengey..😳..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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main tujhse baat nhi karungi..ja😭

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