CN:DS- Hatred Redefined[Final Part Updated on Pg2]

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

As an end note : Chanakya even though might figure out Helena's support for Apama, he knows the master brain is of Apama's and the real threat is Apama and not Helena. He might be cautious over Helena hereafter but she might always be granted with a benefit of doubt and like wise Chandra too might reach till Apama only and Helena would be given the same benefit of doubt and the end Apama alone might be punished for the crime/s

I hope I haven't disappointed you . please do give your comments, criticisms and appreciations are equally welcome. Your valuable comments are so needed 😊

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: loveislife1991
Awesome Start Alanta.. 👏👏
Aage badho, hum tumhare saath hain

Thank you so much Prathiksha. The final part is updated . Please do read and comment. Waiting for your valuable comments😳

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: aishwish
okay I just cast a cursory glance...this looks interesting ...will be back 😃

Thank you so much aish . Have updated the last part too. Now waiting for your valuable comments😳

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: alanta

Thank you Abi I shall complete this asap😊
pls do share your thoughts on making this a common thread.

Hi Abi, I have updated the last part too. Please do read and do give in your comments. Waiting for your valuable comments😳

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Venba24

@Abinaya_24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Beautifully written alanta👏 I just loved the thought process of both guru sishya unlike in serial😉😆

At least chakku is not acting like another sauten of nandhu😆. Chakku really has brains here , quickly figured out . y don't u add chandhini confrontation after this scene, some light hearted moments , and chandhu leg pulling nandhu😳

Just a request😃

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loveislife1991

@loveislife1991

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Read the second & third part. They are both beautifully written Alanta and the Chaya part was woven very intelligently into the scheme.👏👏👏

I hope, CVs read this (as they are reading quite a few of FFs here) and use this into the actual serial. It will be interesting 😊😊

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Joyee Banerjee

@Animal.Lover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

This was fabulously written Alanta, I reeeally hope something like this happens in the actual show! Uff how I am waiting for the grand expose of Helena and her evil mother. This was the kind of content I had been looking forward to reading in the forum since some time, so thanks a ton for giving me a very, very satisfying read 😳

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aishwish

@aishwish

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Hey alanta 🤗

Finally I'm here😛

okay first of all let me congratulate you for this wonderful idea of DS...this will be bringing out a lot of creativity, I can see that.

Now about the episodes. ...what I really liked was the fact that the essence of the show along with the characters were completely intact. I could actually imagine each and every scene. I appreciate that the dialogues were in hindi, making the write up all the way more close to the original show.

Now in the first episode chandra was so true to his character just the way nandini way and even chankya in the following episode. chandra no matter in whatever frame of mind he is, cannot tolerate nandini not caring for him.

I really liked how you incorporated chaya in the episode and used her. finally about the revealtion...I really loved it more for the fact that it was simple figuring out rather than a grand dhamaka thing. I especially liked chanakya he was very balanced, with all his reservations, he was true and very close to his onscreen character still far better

In short I just loved it. One request don't stop, keep them coming

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: abiariel
Beautifully written alanta👏 I just loved the thought process of both guru sishya unlike in serial😉😆
At least chakku is not acting like another sauten of nandhu😆. Chakku really has brains here , quickly figured out . y don't u add chandhini confrontation after this scene, some light hearted moments , and chandhu leg pulling nandhu😳
Just a request😃

Thank u so much Abi😳

@bold 🤣

@red : I am afraid that I could make it up to the mark...but will try to come up with some thing similar 😊

Your comments are very much encouraging and thank u so much for the prompt support Abi😳

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: loveislife1991
Read the second & third part. They are both beautifully written Alanta and the Chaya part was woven very intelligently into the scheme.👏👏👏
I hope, CVs read this (as they are reading quite a few of FFs here) and use this into the actual serial. It will be interesting 😊😊

Thank you so much Pratiksha and am happy that you liked the Chaya part.😳 Thank you so much for your support