CN:DS- Hatred Redefined[Final Part Updated on Pg2]

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Hi Friends,

Thought came up with a thread DS (stands for Dream Sequences) where all of us can select a particular track from the show and redefine in our own words. Here I have chosen the future track of Helena's would be revelation and there by Nandhni's and how would CC reach till there, what role would Chanakya play in that and how will be things there after Helena's revelation and How would a possible (repeated) confrontation of Chandni would pave the way for it.

If you all liked this idea, then we shall make this a common thread, and shall maintain a common index for each DS. If there is any suggestion for the Thread title other than current one , is also welcomed😳

I am posting the precap for the track here, if you all liked it I shall continue.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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DS Track Chosen : Helena's revelation how, when and its after effects
Estimated episodes: 3
Written By: Alanta
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PART - [PRECAP]

Nandhni was overwhelmed of the moment when she heard that word coming from Bindusar for the first time 'MA' and she wanted

to live that moment to the fullest,.. Nothing could stop her now from being happy, she is oblivious to her circumstances

now and less bothered about her fall in status from Maharani to a mere Dasi, a Daima..

All her sacrifices got repaid (though she was not expecting anything in return )in the very moment she heard the word
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Baby Bindu is totally in a playfull mood today, baby Bindu kept on playing with Nandhni's neck chain. Suddenly Chandra makes his entry to the room and couldnt stop himself from rushing to Bindu, seeing him awake, which is not so often these days.

Nandhni hands him over to Chandra and slowly steps towards the doorstep, while Chandra(still playing with Bindusaar)calls out her name 'Nandhni...',

the playfullness on his face is suddenly vanished and a somberness climbed in from nowhere,

hearing her name, Nandhni's steps halted, while Chandra continued in a serious tone - 'Kya tumhe sachch main koi farak nahin padtha?...(paused for a moment and continued in a hurtful voice).. ki mein tumhare barein main kya sochtha hun?'

Nandhni was now confused as of what should she repeat for the nth time in defence of her, for it has turned to nothing but a self insult for her and turned around to see his eyes and only to be surprised;

His eyes looked so tender that it could not anymore bear those tears clouding around, and his eyes were asking her a different question than his voice did -
[You once told me that u are no more bothered of what I think of you..Does that really mean I dont bother you anymore, that you dont care for me anymore, Does that really mean I have become nothing to you?- he asked her in his thoughts
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Link to part 1:-
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/chandra-nandini/4841336/cn-ds-hatred-redefined-final-part-updated-on-pg2?pn=2

Edited by alanta - 8 years ago
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Waiting for your valuable replies and suggestions..😳
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Posted the precap, Please do read and if u liked it do give in comments also for the thread.
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Does it mean Chandra knew about her innocence????
But I did liked the question he asked nandhini , the pain was clearly visible when the mere thought that he is nothing to nandhini , and it doesn't matters her to prove herself to him is haunting him
Do continue soon😃
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Originally posted by: abiariel

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Does it mean Chandra knew about her innocence????
But I did liked the question he asked nandhini , the pain was clearly visible when the mere thought that he is nothing to nandhini , and it doesn't matters her to prove herself to him is haunting him
Do continue soon😃



Thank you Abi I shall complete this asap😊
pls do share your thoughts on making this a common thread.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome Start Alanta.. 👏👏
Aage badho, hum tumhare saath hain
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DS Track Chosen : Helena's revelation how, when and its after effects
Estimated episodes: 3
Written By: Alanta

Link to preface : - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/chandra-nandini/4841336/cn-ds-hatred-redefined-final-part-updated-on-pg2
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PART 1 - [Scene 1]

Chandra slowly puts Bindusaar on the cradle and steps towards Nandhni as to seek an answer..

Nandhni broke the silence while wipping her tear that trailed over her cheeks - 'Kya uttar dun mein?

in a slight accussing tone - Kya karoge tum ab? Tumhare nazron main mein aaj bhi apraadhi hun, aur iske saza toh mein aaj bhi bhukad rahi hun..uss waqt bhi saare pramaan mere khilaf dhe aur aaj bhi mere paas koi aise pramaan nahin jise mein yein siddh kar sakun ki mein nirdosh hun...toh..toh kya hua Chandra? Ab kya dhand dena shesh hein? while Chandra still trying to figure out her words,
she continued in a teary voice - Mrithyudhand?, tumne muje ussi kshan zinda maardiya tha Chandra jab tumne mujh par vishwas karne se inkaar kar diya tha..jab tumhe yeh laga ki mein apni behen jaisi mithr ko maar sakthi hein..

in a tired tone - ab kaunsa dhand shesh hein mere liye and looked towards Bindusaar who was lying on the cradle -Kya tum ek maa ko apne bete se door kardo ge?
Haan muje gyaath hein ki Bindusaar ke teek hone par muje yeh mehal chodna hoga'
- on hearing that Chandra turned his face away from her and tightly closed his eyes while she said 'kithne der tak ek maa ko apne bete se alag kar paoge tum, aur iss baath ke pramaan toh tum khud ho Chandra'

Behind his closed eyes he was contemplating all his sweet memories with Nandhni and Bindusaar, but the sweetness doesnt last long as the scene which he read the name 'Nandhni'on Durdhara's letter flashed on his mind and his face became strenuous, while Nandhni went on saying
'Muje yahan rehna hoga Chandra, Bindusaar keliye, uski maa ko meine vachan diya tha Durdha..'

she couldnt complete her name as Chandra roared at her 'Bas Nandhni..',

and Bindusar who lying on the cradle started crying impatiently even in a higher decibel, as Nandhni rushed to console Bindusaar, a dasi came at the doorstep and

said - Maharaj, Rani Chaya ke swasthya bigad rahi hein aur Rajmatha ne aapko yaad kiya hein,
before he hastened towards Chaya's room, he made sure to make Nandhni stay near Bindusaar (in a commanding tone) - Nandhni tum Bindusar ka khayal rakho,
and Nandhni stayed back.


Part 1 Scene 2: Chaya's room Moora and Dadi beside

Chandra in a concerned filled tone - Chaya kya hua, (towards a crying Moora)kya hua Chaya ko?
Chaya was still unconscious but went on gibberish - Nan..dhni..woh log...ttumhe..Nan..woh..woh log..
Chandra kept on asking - kya hua Chaya, tum kya kehna chahthi ho,.. Nandhni kya?
Chaya went on - Nan..dhini
and suddenly became silent fall asleep
Chandra went on calling her - Chaya Chaya bolo kya kehna jaa rahi thi Chaya..
when vaidji interfered.

Vaidji - kshama kijiye Maharaj, woh ab baath karne ki sthithi main nahi hein, atheeth ki kuch yaadein shayad inko aane lage hein, yeh toh achcha sanketh hein Maharaj, isse gyaath ho jaathe hein ki woh kabhi bhi nischal avastha se baahar aasakthe hein..

Moora's and Daadi's teary eyes twinkled with a ray of hope.

Chandra's excitement got convinced a bit but was still concerned for his sister, he caressed her head and thought in his mind - Chaya baar baar Nandhni ki naam kyun le rahi thi? Nandhni ke barein kya kehna jaa rahi dhi? Mujhe Acharaya ji se sheekhr he milna hoga.

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Link to Final Part
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/chandra-nandini/4841336/cn-ds-hatred-redefined-final-part-updated-on-pg2?pn=2
Edited by alanta - 8 years ago
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okay I just cast a cursory glance...this looks interesting ...will be back 😃
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DS Track Chosen : Helena's revelation how, when and its after effects
Estimated episodes: 3
Written By: Alanta

Link to Part 1 : - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/chandra-nandini/4841336/cn-ds-hatred-redefined-final-part-updated-on-pg2&TPN=2
Part 3 Scene 1


Chandra riding over the horse on to the way to meet Acharya Chanakya in the disguise of a guptcharan. On his way the scenes kept flashing one by one in his mind -

Nandhni : Meine Durdhara ki hatya nahin ki hein Chandra

Nandhni's name written on Durdhara's letter

Durdhara pointing on Nandhni just before she died

Chaya taking Nandhni's name..



As his trail thoughts ended he reached his destination where Acharya was waiting for him.

Part 3 Scene 2

Chandra gets down from the horse and assures that no one is following him and walks towards Acharya. He takes away the veil partly covering his face and greets Acharya

- Pranam Acharya

Acharya welcomes him - Aao Chandra

They both discuss about Chanakya's meeting with Padmanand and conspires their next trap for Padmanand and gang.

As they concluded the discussion, Chandra greeted Chanakya and was about to go when Chanakya called him as Chanakya had noticed Chandra in the whole discussion and

found something was disturbing him, apart from Padmanand.

Chanakya: Kya hua Chandra? Tum kis chintha main pade hue ho?
Chandra : Ji kuch nahin Acharya
Chanakya : Yeh math bhulo ki pehle hum tumhare Guru hein, aur mere shishya ke muh par yeh saaf pratheeth hotha hein ki woh kisi baath se chinthith hein.
Kya hein tumhari chintha ki vishay
Chandra : Nandhni
Chanakya (affirmative tone): Ek raja ke , ek rajdhrohi ke prathi chinthith hona shobha nahin dethe hein Chandra Gupt.
Chandra: Nahin Acharya mere kehne ka tatparya hein ki Nandhni ke vyavahar se yeh pratheeth hotha hein ki woh Bindusar keliye apni jaan bhi de sakthi hein; toh dusri

kshan main yeh sochkar chinthith ho jaatha hun ki mere puthr uski maa ki hatyaran ki paas hein. Ek aur Nandhni ki Bindusar ke prathi mamtha ke pratheeth hotha hein toh

dusri aur woh saare praman jo Nandhni ke khilaf hein, jo Nandhni ko hathyaran sidh karthe hein, khaaskar Durdhara ke pathr jisme yeh likha hua tha ki Nandhni usse

marna chahthi hein!
Chanakya who has been listening to him silently became alert with his mention of the last sentence(in a thoughful tone) : Kya uss pathr par Nandhni ka naam likha hua

tha?
Chandra: Haan Acharya meine abhi do din pehle hi woh pathr phir se padha aur usme Nandhni ka naam saaf likha tha.
Chanakya recalls how he had read Durdhara's letter and could only find the word sauten and not anyone's name in particular and said as to himself but in an audible

tone - tab avashya woh pathr badal diya gaya hein.
On hearing which Chandra asks - Ji aapka tatparya..
Chanakya continues - yeh hein ki hamare khilaaf ek aur shadiyanthr rach raha hein jisse hum anjaan hein, aur ashcharya ke baath yeh hein ki woh log mehal ke beethar

hein.
Chandra (in curiosity): Lekin Acharya kiska yeh saahas hoga ki Durdhara ki kaksh main jaakar woh pathr badalne ki
Chanakya: Isliye meine kaha ki woh log mehal ke beethar ki hein..aur tumhe saavdhaan rehna hoga Chandra.
Chandra: Hamein unlogon tak sheekhr pahunchna hoga
Chanakya(thinks something and assures him): Uski chintha tum mujpar chod do. Tumhe ab jaane ka samay horaha hein.
Chandra greets him and sets out to Mehal .



Chandra on his way back to mehal was trying to figure out the underlying meaning of their whole discussion about Durdhara's letter.

Chandra riding in thoughts - Meine Acharya se bas yahi kahan tha ki pathr main Nandhni ka naam likha hua tha aur keval ithna sunkar unhe laga ki pathr badal diya gaya

hein , toh iska ardth yehi hua ki asli pathr main Nandhni ka naam nahin likha hua tha..aur phir kisi ne jaanbhujkar Nandhni ke naam jod diya taaki Nandhni par apradhi

hone ka ilsam banaye rahe - toh iska ardth yehi hua ki asli apraadhi Nandhni nahin balki koi aur ho saktha hein?




As Chandra leaves Chanakya becomes thoughtful and have a monologue -

Durdhara ke pathr main toh sirf sauten likha tha, shesh sab praman Nandhni ke khilaf thi siva iss pathr ko chodkar jo sirf ek sautan ki aur sanketh kar raha tha, aur

aaj uss pathr main Nandhni ka naam joda gaya hein.(trying hard to figure out) Durdhara ne asli pathr main keval sauten shabd likha tha, aur Durdhara ki do sautan hein,

Helena aur Nandhni, aur koi yeh chahtha hein ki shak sirf Nandhni par jaaye aur Helena par thadha bhi nahi aaye...kaun aisa soch saktha hein(and it striked very hard

at him) Apama .. iska ardth yeh hein ki iske peeche bhi Apama ka haath hein aur ascharya ke baath yeh hein ki Helena bhi isme shaamil thi? aur yeh baath iski aur

sanketh kar raha hein ki asal main apraadhi Nandhni nahin balki Helena ho sakthi hein, lekin yeh baath koi dhor praman nahin balki sirf ek sanketh hein jo galath bhi

ho saktha hein..

While Chandra continues with his thoughts still on the way to Mehal -

Mein jaantha hun ki yeh sirf ek sanketh hein koi praman nahi jo Nandhni ke begunayi ka aadhar banegi, yeh pathr uski apraadh ka ek maathr praman nahin tha, shesh sab

praman uski khilaf dhe..


All those scenes flashes through his mind where she repetedly said she is innocent in Durdhara's murder.

Chandra thinks : Saare praman tumhare virudh dhe, sirf yeh pathr hi ek maathr praman hein jo tumhare paksh sanketh kar satha hein ya phir tumhare virudh bhi ho saktha

hein, lekin mere hriday main aise anek praman hein jo mujse baar baar yeh kehrahe hein ki tum apradhi nahi ho, aur yeh baath mein Acharya se nahin keh saktha.Iss baath ki sachayi toh muje khud hi dhoondna hoga.


while Chanakya continues his monologue -

Aur yeh baath agar Chandra ko patha chalega toh woh bhavuk hokar Helena ko dhand dene par uthrega , aur Helena ki Maha rani padh main banayi rehna Magad saamrajya ke astitv keliye philhaal athi avyashak hein. Agar Selucus ke Greek sena hamare virudh khade hogaya toh saamrajya badhne se poorv hi Magad aur hamare saare praja ke astitv sankat main aajayega aur Magad ki raksha mere uthardayithv hein aur saath saath Bindusar ki suraksha bhi athi avashak hein aur iskeliye Apama ko jald se jald Mehal aur Magad se baahar jaana hoga. Helena ki sachch jaan ne keliye humein iss poore samasya ke jhad thak jaana hoga, aur tab tak mein Chandra se yeh baath nahi batha saktha.


While here Chandra in his thoughts still on the way to Mehal -

Aur yadi Nandhni sachch keh rahi hein toh - he again goes lost in his thoughts where Nandhni tells him about she is innocent in Durdhara's case , and how much she cares for Bindusar and her words echos in his mind - tumne muje ussi kshan zinda maardiya tha Chandra jab tumne mujh par vishwas karne se inkaar kar diya tha..jab tumhe yeh laga ki mein apni behen jaisi mithr ko maar sakthi hein..- and Chandra gets hurt in his thoughts..

While on one side Acharya vows to himself -

Hamein sadhark rehna hoga - Durdhara ke mrithyu ke peeche agar Apama aur Helena ke haath hein toh woh log Bindusar ko bhi haani pahuncha sakthe hein.. aur yeh mein tadha bhi nahin hone desaktha, iskeliye muje khud Bindusar ke raksha kavach banna hoga.

and on the other side Chandra vows to himself -

Yadi Nandhni nirdosh hein aur yadi inn sab ke peeche koi aur hein toh mein avashya hi

Durdhara ki mrithyu ke sach aur Nandhni ki sachchayi sheekhr sab ke samaksh sidh kardunga.


Both of them are now determined on their own decision.

[END OF DS Track😳]


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