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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 29

Chandra POV:

Its Roopa house...

We took our cars and reached the city where she is living...

When i entered into the house... Roopa was crossing the room from hall to her one of the room...

She was walking with difficulty with her big belly...

She turned her face on hearing the voices at the entrance and gave a big smile...

Then her eyes landing on me...

Her eyes pleased for apologising for her mistake...

I expressed my acceptance of her apology...

She smiled...

She went inside to get ready for the function...

I looked at Nandhini while she was looking at me with guilty expression...

I know i triggered that guilty expression inside her...

I hold her hand as support unnoticed by others...

I slightly lean towards her...

'Nandhini.. go & be with Roopa... dont bother about what i told you.. we will handle it later...' i said for while she return a smile...

She rushed inside to be with her sister...

After a while...

Roopa came and sat in the chair which was put in the middle of the hall for her to sit...

Nandhini was standing beside her...

The function started...

One by one all started blessing her giving gift and putting haldi sindoor on her face..

After their parents... Nandhini tried to come in front to do that...

While May be Roops' mother in law...

'You can do later... let others do...' she said in little rough tone while Nandhini moved and went back to stand behind Roopa with a smile...

Other ladies continued blessing her...

Nandhini tried 2 more times to come to front for her turn while the same treatment was given...

May be Nandhini realised something...

She came & sat with us...

Almost all ladies finished and the function is about to finish...

'Nandhini.. you got atleast now...' i said her in low voice...

'Its ok Chandra...' she replied...

'Nandhini.. you go and do now...' i said again in a demanding tone now...

Nandhini got up and went near Roopa...

'Why cant you understand Nandhini.. its better you dont bless her.. you didn't even start your life yet... She is expecting good life for her and we dont think its good to get your blessings...' she said while Nandhini got tears...

She turned and tried to come towards us while i got up and went near Nandhini...

'Nandhini.. go & do that...' i said in a tone which can be heard by all...

'Who are you now to tell her for doing that... its our function and we know who need to do that...' she said in same rough tone...

'She is her sister & i wish to know the reason... ' i demanded now to that lady...

'She is unmarried girl... After Roopa came out of that house.. the house lost its property and everything which always give me a feeling that Nandhini is unlucky... She lost her life... We dont wish our daughter in law get her blessigs...' She justified her action...

I looked at her parents, Nandhini & Roopa.. all were in tears...

'Let me clarify.. Nandhini is not unlucky.. she is the luckiest...' i said making everyone shocked...

'Yes i become lucky after i become her lover...' i said...

'Yes... i was orphan and was just having no one and without anything i came to hill station for a job... After i started loving her i got my mother.. i got all properties... I am now crorepathi... ' i continued...

'Who said she lost his property first.. Estate as well as House is in my name only and when it is in my name its hers & her parents too...' i continued specifically insisting her parents excluding Roopa who failed to help her parents & sister when needed...

'You are just lover.. and telling your property is hers... does this mean she is living with you without marriage...' she spit her next venomous word making Nandhini close her eyes tightly shedding tears...

'Why my wife need to live with me as lover.. yes she is my wife too... ' i told this new information making everyone shocked...

I looked at Nandhini...

'Nandhini.. you are going to atleast tell & proof everyone that you are my wife or still going to die with your guilty conscious...' i asked...

She adjusted her hair to show the sindoor she is filling for me hiding from others...

All looked at Nandhini shocked including her parents...

I hold her hand with all rights now in front of everyone...

'I am giving my invitation to all of you now itself to attend our procedural marriage by next week.. we will confirm the date once its finalised... Nandhini.. can you go and do the procedure now to your sister...' i concluded...

Nandhini went forward to bless her and when she was about to gift her something which she purchased...

I know she purchased out of love.. but i understood no value of love in that place...

I gave a gift pack to Nandhini...

'Nandhini open this...and gift it by your hands...' i said..

She opened the pack which was having gold bangles...

Nandhini put those glass bangles on Roopa hands...

I hold Nandhini hands again & looked at her parents...

'Shall we make a move...' i asked...

They got up and we four started from Roopa house...



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 30
Nandhini POV:

We reached home from Roopa house...

Chandra too came to our house with us...

'When your marriage happened Nandhini... You didn't even let us know about it...' my mother asked...

'Not only that if you accepted your marriage then what was the need of waiting all these days...; my father asked...

'Sir.. Actually few days back to make her accept for the marriage i filled sindoor on her forehead in the temple.. I know she respected that and filling sindoor daily when sindoor was one day visible slightly inspite of her try to hide it... ' Chandra said with a smile looking at me...

'I am sorry.. i hurt you.. ' i said looking at him...

'Let me call priest for the date first...' my father hurried to call the priest...

In a while he came back with the news...

'Coming friday is auspicious day... ' my father said...

'I will inform my mother to come immediately so that we can start the marriage arrangement... We will make it out in temple itself...' Chandra said...

He called his mother & informed her to start giving good news of my acceptance to her...

I am amused as everything is happening just like that all of a sudden...

I almost got tears of happiness and was finding difficulty to handle it after whatever i faced all these days...

I just rushed into my room...


Chandra POV;

Marriage date is fixed and i informed my mother to start...

Suddenly Nandhini rushed towards her room...

We wonder what happened...

Her mother tried to move towards her room...

'Shall i talk to her...' i requested...

Her parents accepted...

I just rushed towards her room...

She was on the bed upside down shedding tears hugging the pillow...

I closed the door and locked...

I went near her and sat beside...

'Nandhini.. what happened???' i asked...

She didn't wait a moment to get up and rushed towards my shoulder to lean & hug tightly...

'Is anything bothering you...' i asked...

She nod her head as 'no...'

'Then why are you crying???' i asked...

'I am sorry.. i hurt you a lot... i love you Chandra.. I love you so much...' she said...

I turned towards her face & kissed on her cheeks...

'I love you too darling.. but why all these tears for such beautiful love confession...' i asked...

'I dont know.. i was unable to handle the emotion...' she expressed...

'I know the medicine for that...' i said...

'What???' she puzzled...

I hold her chin & lift her face...

I wipe her tears...

I cup her face & kissed on her forehead... on her eyes... on her nose.. on her cheeks... on her chin...

I looked into her eyes while she blushed...

I moved towards her lips to hold with mine...

It was a deep & passionate kiss to let out all our suppressed emotions towards each other...

Though she was kissing.. i can see the tears rolling from our eyes to our cheeks...

We didn't hold the tears & let it giving a last chance for it to shed finally...

After a while when i realised she was short of breathe.. i left her lips and moved apart...

We looked into each other eyes...

There was no trace of any negative emotions on those eyes...

'I should not see you in tears anymore...' i demanded...

She accepted with a blush...

My mother reached bungalow the next day...

Arrangements started for our marriage...

We decided to have marriage in temple in simple manner only with our family members...



Nandhini POV:

Its my mehendi...

Mehendi designer came to put the mehendi on my hand...

I selected a beautiful design with moon as concept...

'Oh Oh... His name is the mehendi concept itself...' Roopa tease me...

Yes.. Roopa came today morning & she asked apology for whatever happened the other day...

I blushed...

Mehendi was so beautiful & dark...

'See how dark it is... Your mehendi tells how much Chandra loves you...' Roopa tease again...

I was eagerly wait for our marriage...

I wish to show the mehendi of his name to him...




Chandra POV;

Marriage...

We gathered in the temple where our love started...

I looked at Nandhini remembered the moments we shared in that temple...

She looked in the same way towards me... May be she remembers the same like me...

Priest started chanting mantras...

Her father did kanyadhan...

We exchanged garlands...

We took 7 pheres...

I filled her forehead wtih sindoor...

I put the mangal sutra on her neck...

Now Nandhini is my official wife...

We took blessings of the elders...

Her parents were about to start to their house where they were staying...

While i hold them from going there...

I handover the papers to them which was showing the property in the name of Nandhini & also her parents got rights to stay their till their life time...

This i made so that Roopa family dont try to play games...

Otherwise i got no issue to make it in name of her parents...

We all started to the bungalow...

Nandhini entered into the house procedural kicking the kalash & making foot & hand print...

I looked at Nandhini while she looked at me as well...

There were untold expressions exchanged between our eyes...

I cant wait more in making her mine in all means...

I really love her a lot...

The much awaited moment has come...

I entered into our room while the room was decorated romantically by the elders...

Candles.. red roses... red baloons... fragrance which was filled in the air...

OMG... my bride.. my love on our bed waiting for me...

I locked the door and went near her...

I sat beside her...

I lift the veil which was covering her beautiful face & kissed on her forehead...

I wrapped my hand around her shoulder and pulled her towards me...

She lean on my shoulder... and wrapped her hand around my waist...

We were enjoying the closeness for a while...

'Nandhini... Are you happy now...' i asked...

I hold her hand & removed all her bangles from her hand...

'Yes i am.. i am really happy when you made my parents to come back to this place...' she said with a thanking gesture...

'You really wish to thank me...' i asked...

I removed her ear rings...

'Of course.. i wish to thank you...' she said...

'Then promise me you wont see them as different from our family.. is there anything great to make our own family members to stay in our own house...' i asked...

I removed her neck lace & long chain which was on her neck...

'I am glad to make such promise... but what was the need to change these to my name...' she asked...

'Its my wedding gift to you darling...' i said...

i removed her hip chain...

'If thats your wedding gift.. then what can i gift you...' she asked...

'Will you promise to give whatever i ask as wedding gift...' i asked...

I removed her anklet...

'Of course.. i am ready...' she said...

'I wish to have one Junior Chandra & one Junior Nandhini... Will you...' i asked looking into her yes...

'Yes i promise...' she said with a blush...

I dropped her dupatta of her lehenga down...

I pushed her gently to the bed and lean beside her...

I wrapped the blanket on us & pulled her towards me switching off the bedside switch...

In a while we were on each other arms making love towards each other... forgetting the world and dwelling on the world where we both alone exists...

'I love you Nandhini...' i said...

'I love you Chandra...' she said before falling asleep after spending moments filled night...





Nandhini POV:

I prayed to God to help me to fulfill his wish of a daughter & son...

God was so generous and blessed us with a positive report in just 3 months of our marriage...

All of our family members were excited...

When we went for scan.. doctor gave the good news of the baby being twins where one is boy & another is girl...

When we were returning home...

'OMG Nandhini.. i never thought you will get twins to fulfill my wish...' he said with excitement...

I prayed to God to keep him happy always...




Chandra POV:

OMG.. i am waiting for the good news from doctor as my Nandhini is inside the labor ward with delivery pain...

After few hours of struggle... She gave birth to a baby boy & a baby girl...

We named the baby as 'Chandhan & Chandhini'...

yes combination of our names of course...

We went to temple with our cuties in our hand...

We prayed to God to bless us with all happiness forever...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey ..Banu ..thanks for the FF ..

I really enjoyed it .😃

Sweet , simple , short n beautiful⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved your ff banu...sweet and cute and crazy...do pm me when u write next story...if u can then pls write one story on maaneet of geet forum...they r my favorite
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I really can't believe the FF is over. Such a cute and beautiful love story with a sweet and wonderful ending.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh my!!!! Can't believe you finished this lovely story...?? Anyways, it must end some day, so no matter.
It was such a lovely turn of events. Nandini respected the fact that he applied sindoor on her and made her his wife with the God as witness. She therefore regularly began to keep it, however hiding from the world.

Chandra is a true gem and a true life partner in every sense of the word. Loved how he stood up for Nandini and proudly declare what she means to him and how precious she is to him. He just declared his wedding invitation right over their faces.

Awww... the kissing scene was so beautiful and blissful to imagine while reading. It was not out of physical attraction. It was a poetic way of venting all your pain. Their tears were also falling freely as they kissed each other because the tears had all their pent up pain and longing for each other. This is now no longer needed because they are going to be together forever and hence have let out during the kiss. Seriously, so poetic Banu. Nothing vulgar. Just pure and unadulterated love.

Awww... so cute... So now Chandan and Chandini have made their marriage complete.

Thank you so much for this stupendous piece of gold, Banu. Do write more on Chandini.
I AM WAITINGGG...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: krithikaRao

Hey ..Banu ..thanks for the FF ..


I really enjoyed it .😃

Sweet , simple , short n beautiful⭐️


Thanks Dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: ananyachaudhary

Loved your ff banu...sweet and cute and crazy...do pm me when u write next story...if u can then pls write one story on maaneet of geet forum...they r my favorite


Thanks Dear... Sorry dear.. i never see any other serial & dont even know about maaneet...

I saw Jodha akbar & Chandra Nandhini being historic...

I will try to get glance of Maaneet first to start writing FF... 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shailusri1983

I really can't believe the FF is over. Such a cute and beautiful love story with a sweet and wonderful ending.


Thanks Dear... for such lovely comments you gave & encouraged me in this FF... which infact made me to continue this FF & end it successful...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jodhu

Oh my!!!! Can't believe you finished this lovely story...?? Anyways, it must end some day, so no matter.

It was such a lovely turn of events. Nandini respected the fact that he applied sindoor on her and made her his wife with the God as witness. She therefore regularly began to keep it, however hiding from the world.

Chandra is a true gem and a true life partner in every sense of the word. Loved how he stood up for Nandini and proudly declare what she means to him and how precious she is to him. He just declared his wedding invitation right over their faces.

Awww... the kissing scene was so beautiful and blissful to imagine while reading. It was not out of physical attraction. It was a poetic way of venting all your pain. Their tears were also falling freely as they kissed each other because the tears had all their pent up pain and longing for each other. This is now no longer needed because they are going to be together forever and hence have let out during the kiss. Seriously, so poetic Banu. Nothing vulgar. Just pure and unadulterated love.

Awww... so cute... So now Chandan and Chandini have made their marriage complete.

Thank you so much for this stupendous piece of gold, Banu. Do write more on Chandini.
I AM WAITINGGG...


Thanks a lot Dear for all your valuable comments.. Which means a lot...

Yes I will start next FF soon... 😊

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