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Banumathy Prasanna

@banuprasa

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

Hi Dears,

I am introducing myself as Banu FF writer...

I started a FF on Chandni on Fanfiction forum...

But i thought may be if i put here as well.. Chandni lovers can read and enjoy...

So will be posting updates in both places... 😊

Concept:

What happens when 2 girls fall in love with a guy... What happens when it happens the guy need to marry the other who he didn't love...'

Concept request & Banner credit goes to Jasminerahul...

Edited by banuprasa - 8 years ago

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Banumathy Prasanna

@banuprasa

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

Part 1

Chandra...

He enter into the temple to pray to God to bless him a good start of his life...

Yes.. of course he is just going to start his life just now...

After spending 20+ years of his life in that Orphanage...

He dont know even the trace of his parents...

He dont know what made his parents to leave him in such a small age of day 1...

He dont know when they were not interested to keep him after birth.. why they gave birth of him...

Since the day he knows.. he grow in that orphanage only...

The management of orphanage was kind enough to provide him everything he required including good education...

Chandra was bright enough to come up with good results as well...

This made management to let him complete till his graduation...

After completion of his studies.. he was no more interested to be burden for them,...

Instead he wish to earn for his own life as well as wish to do his best to his orphanage as well...

After applying in some companies.. finally he got the job in this city of Simla in an estate as estate manager...

He started from Orphanage to Simla and finally he reached here...

Now he has come to temple to get blessings of God before starting his career...

By now he reached inside the temple...

He prayed to God..

Chandra; Oh God.. May be i become orphan in my day 1... but you gave that orphanage to take care of me... May be... i dont have any relatives.. but you gave such friends in orphanage to show love.. May be... i dont have anyone to teach.. but you gave me knowledge and talent to learn... Now you blessed me with a job as well.. wish you keep your blessing on me always.. Wish this to be a good start of my life & career...

Pandit came to give prasad to everyone while Chandra was sincerely praying to God...

Pandit went inside without giving prasad to Chandra...

Chandra: Pandit.. prasad...

He tried to call him.. but Pandit was not available there to hear and went inside to perform pooja...

Chandra felt bad that when praying to God to start his life... he missed to get the blessings of God thro prasad...

Still what can be done.. if that is what God wish is...

He console his heart and was about to move from there.. while...

Someone forward hand towards him with some prasad...

Chandra lift his face and looked at the owner of the forwarded hand...

It was a beautiful girl with a very cute smile...

Chandra who lost on her beauty in the first look and was standing speechless...

'Take this prasad... i know pandit missed to give you...'

When she told him.. he came back to his senses...

Chandra with a smile took the prasad and put inside his mouth...

Chandra; Thanks...

He said as he felt this girl filled his heart with happiness when he felt bad on missing to get the blessing...

In short.. this girl came in front of him as blessing itself...

Girl with a smile moved from there to go around the temple...

Chandra too went behind her to go around the temple...

She was in a beautiful chudidar in blue colour...

Simple jewellery.. mild make up... a small flower on the hair was adding beauty to her...

Chandra was going behind her as if mesmerised and taken by her...

After going around the temple.. the girl again stopped near the God and pray again...

Chandra who was coming behind her too stood beside her and prayed to God...

Pandit who came out doing pooja gave prasad to both of them again...

Chandra was not sure.. he was feeling more happy...

As if they both have come together & getting blessings in front of God...

He was not sure what sort of mad thought it is...

But he was unable to hold that thought and looked at her...

She turned towards his side and as he was standing she moved a little away and started moving towards outside...

Chandra was thinking... Oh girl.. where are you going stealing my heart in the first sight... i dont know whether i will meet you again... but my heart wish to be with you always...

Chandra with a smile came out of temple...

He checked his bag for the address where he need to go for joining the duty...

Estate office address was available with him...

He enquired about that address and catch auto to reach that estate office...

Chandra got down from the auto and went inside the estate...

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Banumathy Prasanna

@banuprasa

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

Part 2

Chandra looked around whether someone is there in the entrance...

On seeing him security rushed towards him...

Securtity; Sir.. who you want sir..

Chandra; I came here to work.. i mean.. i got job in this estate...

Security: Sir.. you are Chandra Sir...

Chandra: Yes i am...

Security: Sir told about your coming... welcome Sir...

Chandra: Thank you...

Security: Sir.. as you as you enter into the building.. you will get a room in the right side... Sir should be there.. you can go and meet him...

Chandra: Ok Thanks...

Chandra started moving towards the entrance of the building walking on the lane... looking around the beautiful garden with varieties of flowers, plants...

It took few minutes for him to reach the building entrance itself and he entered into the door...

He looked at the right side and yes.. he found a room there...

Chandra moved towards that room and knock the door...

'Come in...'

Voice came from inside...

Chandra went inside the room and found someone in the chair while the chair was turned against him towards the file shelf...

Chandra: Excuse me Sir.. I am Chandra...

'Sit.. Sit... '

Reply came without turning towards him...

Chandra; Thanks Sir...

Chandra sat on the chair which was there...

'What plans to got for this estate...'

Chandra; Sir... i will do whatever i can to the best for this estate sir...

'Look... we have recruit you with some sort of expectation... and we expect you to meet it...'

Chandra: Of course Sir.. i will do my best to meet your expectation...

'Well.. we expect you develop the length of the estate to 1 km more and height of the estate to 10 feet more.. hope you do it...'

Chandra: What???

Chandra was confused on hearing this...

Voice came from entrance of the room now...

'Roopa.. you started your mischief... that too with the new manager...'

Chandra turned towards the entrance and saw someone entering into the room...

That is when the Chair which was turned against him now turn towards Chandra...

Chandra was shocked...

He cant believe his own eyes...

Roopa started laughing...

Roopa: Of course dad... you know me right.. i am like that only...

Nand: But Roopa... known persons know about you too.. but he is new and just coming for first time.. and you should not do like this...

Roopa: But he should get used to all these anyway..

Roopa looked at Chandra...

Roopa; I am right or not...

She laughed again...

Chandra was sitting still under shock...

Nand: Leave all these mischief and go home... i got work..

Roopa; Ok ok.. i am going...

She got up and rushed out of the room...

Nand looked at Chandra...

Nand; She is my daughter Roopa.. She is like that only and always do mischief with everyone.. dont mistake her...

Chandra; Its ok Sir...

Nand: Today is your first day.. so i will send someone with you to show the estate by afternoon.. till such time.. take rest.. You will be staying in the guest house behind...

Chandra: Ok Sir...

Nand; We only expect you to work honestly & sincerely.. nothing more than that..

Chandra: Of course.. i will Sir...

Nand; I got some work.. so i am leaving now.. All the best...

Chandra: Ok Sir.. Thank you...

Nand started from there in his car...

Chandra got up from there and started moving towards guest house...

All the way... she was coming in front of his eyes...

Chandra was thinking.. i really cant believe...

The girl who i saw in the temple is my Boss's daughter...

Her name is Roopa...

I was thinking whether i can meet her again or not.. while.. this was something not expected...

But.. But... yes... why there is huge difference between Roopa i saw in the temple & Roopa i saw here...

When i saw in the temple... the humbleness... the smiling face... plait hair... chudidar...

While now... how come she is quiet opposite...

With a 3/4 pant.. sleeveless tshirt, open hair... more make up...

Then he clarified himself...

Its obvious.. when going to temple...

She might have got ready in that way as its place of sacred...

It seems otherwise she is modern type...

Whatever.. atleast i meet her again...

Chandra smiled...

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Shailaja

@shailusri1983

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

Nice! A contemporary story on Chandini!

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Banumathy Prasanna

@banuprasa

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shailusri1983
Nice! A contemporary story on Chandini!

Yes it is & thanks for your comments... 😊

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krithika

@Krithzz

Stunner

Posted: 8 years ago

Welcome to the forum 😃

Nice FF ...something different ..which we never thought on Chandini !

Continue it 👍🏼

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Banumathy Prasanna

@banuprasa

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: krithikaRao
Welcome to the forum 😃
Nice FF ...something different ..which we never thought on Chandini !

Continue it 👍🏼

Thanks Dear...

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Banumathy Prasanna

@banuprasa

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

Part 3

Chandra came to the entrance of the room where he need to stay...

He checked whether it is locked...

But no.. it was slightly kept open...

Chandra was wondering how come its kept open...

He thought may be they might have clean the room for him to stay...

Chandra with a smile went near the door and lift the door stop...

Then opened the door holding the handle...

Before he could realise what is happening... he got something poured on him...

Chandra was wondering what it is...

He found some Rice or Wheat atta it was...

It was kept in the top of the door in such a way that... when the door get opened it will be tilted and pour all the atta on the person entering the door...

Chandra was completely white now covered with atta all over him...

Specially head & face...

He shake his head to get the atta out of him atleast to some extent...

Then entered into the room..

He kept the bag and rushed towards wash basin...

He washed his face first so that it wont enter into his eyes...

Still.. he cant get rid of it without taking bath...

He came back to his bag and took a changing dress...

He went to take bath...

He filled the bucket with water...

The wrapped towel on his waist removing his clothes...

He took the water in a mug and pour on his head...

Chandra: aaa...

He shouted...

He felt burning everywhere...

He opened the tap and took some water directly from tap and washed his face...

Then looked at the bucket and found someone put chilli powder in the bucket...

When filling water.. Chandra.. didn't checked it...

He pour on him chilli water which resulted in burning...

He swiftly pour out all the water from the bucket and washed the bucket well...

Then filled the water again and took bath...

Chandra came out changing dress drying his hair with another towel...

Chandra was wondering who might have done all these mischief...

Is it that Roopa???

Is she that much mischief???

When i saw in the temple... she doesn't seems to be like that...

But here.. she is quiet opposite...

He was surprised as he was not expecting her to be so mischievous...

He went to bed and looked around whether anything is there too...

But he cant find anything...

Still he slowly sit on the bed and checked whether anything is there to hurt...

After he was ok...

He lay down on the bed...

When he closed his eyes...

The princess who he meet in the temple is what occupied in his mind...

He was not getting any sleep...

Still he dont want to open his eyes and disturb her image which he is getting when he closed his eyes...

Chandra was asking to the image he was seeing...

'As you so much mischievous... really its hard for me to believe...

I really dont felt you to be like that when i meet you in the temple...

WHile here.. you are completely strange...

WHy are you so different here than temple...

Is it that you dont want to do any mischief in the temple...

But you know what.. i love to see you as the girl who i saw in the temple...

Its not that doing mischief is wrong...

But to this level to someone who is stranger and new...

Or you too got interest on me & because of that you are trying all these to tease me...

I really cant understand.. whatever.. I love you.. I love you so much...'

Chandra smiled...

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 11

Posted: 8 years ago

My God.first atta fell on Chandra.now chilly in his bucket too.poor Chandra.It can be done only by Roopa.so naughty.I liked chandra's doubt that if she is doing all tantrums on him just bcz she too got interested in him.

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Princess of Videha

@JanakNandini

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#10

Refreshing start... i luv it

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