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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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+ 11

Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Chandra meeting nandini in the temple and talking to her mistaking her for roopa and nandini struggling hard to hide that she is not roopa was emotional. before the ring exchange Chandra finding out that roopa and nandini are 2 different persons and he is getting engaged to the wrong person was such a nice scene.Chandra refusing to marry roopa boldly and nand supporting Chandra instead of supporting roopa's lies was too good I loved the reply Chandra gave when roopa asked what difference does it make if he married her instead of nandini as both look alike was superb.how he explained that the feeling he had for nandini in the temple he didn't have for roopa in other places was excellent. beautiful dialogues. sad that roopa is blaming nandini for her state was sad.poor nandini rejected Chandra for roopa and lied that she doesn't love him.Chandra pulling her and asking if she can look at his eyes and say that she doesn't love him and her silence..so much of passions.Chandra saying that he can only leave her physically not by heart and soul was a breath taking scene.now the story's title suits it.I hurt you. I am scared if roopa will take revenge on chandini

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Banumathy Prasanna

@banuprasa

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Part 16

Nandhini came out of the room with upset face looking towards Chandra while he was going far from her sight...

Nand rushed towards her...

Nand; What happened Nandhini??? Why Chandra left like this???

Nandhini: Pappa.. i didn't agree for our marriage.. thats why he got angry and went...

Nand; Nandhini look at me & tell whether you dont like him...

Nandhini: I dont like pappa...

She said keeping her eyes down...

Nand; Nandhini.. look at me and tell that...

Nandhini lift her face to look at her father...

But she got no guts to tell lie looking at him...

She got tears...

Nand; WHy are you doing this Nandhini???

Nandhini; because i dont want to hurt my sister...

Nand; This is madness Nandhini... did she even consider you when she was doing everything...

Nandhini: but i cant do the same pappa... first lets see Roopa...

Nandhini rushed towards Roopa...

She knock very hard...

Nand informed everyone to go as engagement got cancelled...

Nand & Avantika too went to the room...

Nand; Roopa open the door...

Roopa: I wont dad...

Avantika; Roopa.. what is this... first open the door...

Roopa: I dont want to see anyone mom...

Nandhini; No one is here to see Roopa.. please open the door...

Roopa: No i wont see Chandra...

Nandhini; No need to see him.. he went from here already...

Roopa in a moment swiftly opened the door...

All the other three went inside...

Roopa; Are you happy now Nandhini??? you spoiled my love too...

Nandhini; I spoiled what are you talking!!!

Roopa; yes Nandhini.. its you who always snatch everyone from me & also did the same with my love...

Nandhini; I snatch from you... When i snatch what???

Roopa; Then what... our parents love you more... our relatives love you more... in the school even our friends love you more... Even our staffs they give more respect to you.. now even my love... Though i love him a lot he was only more interested on you.. are you happy now...

Nand; What are you talking Roopa??? How can you say that we love her more...

Roopa; Then what.. didn't you both support her always & criticise me always...

Avantika: Roopa.. you have mistaken... We criticised you whenever it was required by you & as parents its our responsibility do that...

Roopa; Do you mean she never did any mistake & its me who did mistake always...

Nand; Roopa... We never said she is always right or you are always wrong.. whenever we purchased something we did for both of you.. whatever facitilites given, we gave to both of you... whatever we did to our daughters we did equally.. but when its something related to correcting your habits or behaviours or whatever it becomes our responsibility for sure.. we have even told Nandhini at times when she did wrong.. why you think like that...

Avantika; Even now marriage didn't we arranged just because you said you are in love... is it our mistake...

Roopa: Still friends & even my love they like Nandhini more.. i am always left behind by everyone...

She said with tears...

Nandhini: Roopa.. till date i never realised you got such feeling... All move with me friendly as i goes easy with everyone.. nothing else... Did i ever went to anyone and told anything... Am I the reason for that... Even you know i never comes to office.. i goes to staff houses to teach children & not for any other reason...

Roopa was yet to realise their points...

Nandhini hold her chin & lift her face...

Nandhini: Did i ever told anything to you... whatever happens in home or school or office is only as you wish... I am always with my own jobs & i never tried to interfere in yours.. didn't you realised anything yet...

Roopa: How can you say that... everything is as per my wish...

Nandhini; Say take for example... our mother wish to wear a fully covering chudidar... and i do the same while you wish to wear modern dress... did she ever restrict you from wearing that thought she might have advised you avoid such few times...

Roopa was standing silent...

Nandhini; Its all the same only Roopa.. you have mistaken that all are giving priority or importance to me while there is nothing like that...

Roopa was listening everything...

Nandhini; Moreover none will be same in this world though sisters or even twin sisters like us.. Nandhini cant replace Roopa & Roopa cant replace Nandhini... you got your own specialities while i got mine... Likewise everyone got their own stuffs.. there is no need to compare anyone for anything...

Roopa looked at Nandhini...

Nandhini; Roopa... even we like someone whom we come across while we dont like few... Same person may vary between us... The person who you feel as good may not be good to me... vice versa... Its all depends on our perceptions & experiences...

Roopa; Nandhini...

Nandhini: Yes Roopa... Let me clarify you.. Our parents like me as i immediately do whatever they say while you argue with them fight against their wish.. that doesn't mean they dont like you.. instead they only try to convince you for their points... Friends.. you got different natures friends & i got mine... your friends may not like me & my friends may not like you... Staffs... they like me as i teach their children.. if you go to them & help them in some or other way then they will give more respect to you too... About Chandra... He liked my simple nature & dressings... as you can see he is simple on his own... But i promise i didn't tried to make anyone stand against you... and for you i denied to marry him though he insist for it.. I cant hurt you Roopa.. i cant...

Roopa realised her mistake and she got tears...

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Princess of Videha

@JanakNandini

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Story starts to gain momentum.. I love these updates Banu dear...

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Banumathy Prasanna

@banuprasa

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Part 17

Nandhini rushed to Roopa to console her seeing her tears...

Nandhini; Roopa.. dont hurt yourself... leave whatever happened... now dont develop such feeling anymore...

Roopa wipe her tears and nod her head as acceptance...

Nand; Roopa... Now you are clarified about whatever feeling you got against Nandhini.. now what are you going to do for her...

Roopa; Dad... i dont get you...

Nand: Roopa... for you she denied her love... i am talking about that only...

Roopa: I am sorry Nandhini... you marry Chandra as you wish...

Nandhini; No Roopa.. i am not wishing for any marriage leave it...

Nand; What are you talking Nandhini... you both girls really played with the life of that innocent boy...

Nandhini: Pappa...

Nand; Then what Nandhini... Roopa played with him like you both are one while she knows he was in love with you... now you denied his love for your sister and hurt him...

Nandhini; I didn't mean to hurt him pappa...

Nand; But in real that is what you did Nandhini..

Avantika: Pappa is right... Roopa you were not suppose to play with him when you got jealousy with Nandhini.. it was between you both and he is affected in this unwantedly...

Nand: Exactly... His feelings were not considered i can say... How you both can play with him like this...

Roopa; I agree dad.. whatever i did is wrong.. i will ask apology myself and get him married to Nandhini...

Roopa said holding Nandhini hand...

Avantika: But where can you do that when he left the place already...

Roopa; What??? no Nandhini... we need to bring him back.. he deserve you.. you know he loves you a lot..

Nand; Yes Nandhini... you go and bring him back.. you alone can do that...

Nandhini: OK pappa.. i will do that...

Roopa: Nandhini... lets first search for him.. come before he goes out of the city...

Nandhini & Roopa rushed towards the room where he stayed while it was only empty...

Roopa: lets check in the bus stop & railway station...

Nandhini; But what if he moves out before we reach places one by one...

Roopa: You go to railway station & i go to bus stop.. Lets search in both places simultaneiously...

Nandhini accepted and both went to bus stop & railway station...

Roopa once reached bus stop found 4 buses standing in the stop...

She searched going inside each & every bus...

But he was not found in any of them...

She was sure that he is not there in the bus stop...

She called Nandhini...

Roopa; Nandhini.. he should be in the train only... as i checked in all buses & not found him...

Nandhini: Ok.. i reached the station.. i will check...

Nandhini rushed inside while the train will be leaving in few minutes...

Nandhini; Chandra..Chandra...

She called all the way & looked into every compartment through the windows...

She got few minutes now and the train may leave...

Its practically difficult to reach every coach before that...

Nandhini got an idea...

She rushed towards the station master room...

He took the mike to make the announcement of starting of the train...

She snatched the mike from him...

Nandhini; Chandra... i know you are in this train only... please come back Chandra...

She took shallow breathe as she came running...

Nandhini: I told lie to you Chandra.. in real i love you.. please come back...

Station master: What are you doing???

Nandhini didn't hear him...

Nandhini; Chandra.. please get down of the train and come back... i am sorry for denying you... please...

Station master took back the mike from her and made the announcement of starting of the train...

Nandhini came out of the room and looked for Chandra whether he got down...

But there was no trace of Chandra...

Train started and it was going away from her...

When the train passed her completely.. she checked whether he got down anywhere atleast the other side...

But no... There was no trace of Chandra anywhere in the station...

Nandhini went on her knees and sat on the heels holding the knees with her hand and putting her head down...

Nandhini got tears...

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ananyachaudhary

@ananyachaudhary

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Very nice update...love this story

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Shailaja

@shailusri1983

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Very beautiful. I could feel the love and pain of Nandini in every word you wrote. I could literally see the scene in front of my eyes.

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 11

Posted: 8 years ago

#57

liked the conversation between nand and nandini.nandini sacrificed her love for Chandra. still roopa accusing her was sad.loved nand and nandini trying to make roopa understand that they both were equally loved but how their personalities differ.glad that roopa realized her mistakes and let nandini marry Chandra. loved nand and avantika made them understand how they both played with chandra's lives.glad that nandini decided to accept Chandra.railway station scene where nandini confessed her love to stop Chandra was lovely.but was that there was no trace of Chandra. poor nandini.wish he is hiding somewhere and actually heard nandini's confession

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Banumathy Prasanna

@banuprasa

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Part 18

Nandhini POV:

Its 5 years now...

Since i lost my love Chandra in my life...

I dont know where he is...

In the meantime so many changes in our life...

Yes.. All started asking why Roopa marriage got stopped...

Gossip started spreading among relatives & friends...

My father swiftly arranged her marriage with our distant relative...

Roopa was not interested in the marriage...

Still we explained the problem which is happening...

Once her name is completely spoiled, she cant get married only...

Slowly she gave her acceptance and we got her married.. now she is settle in another city...

The fate didn't leave us so easy...

May be its like punishment for hurting Chandra who was good hearten,...

Yes... Heavy rain completely spoiled our estate...

We lost that year production into complete loss...

My father got sick in that tension...

We took him to City for giving treatment...

Lakhs of money was spent in that...

We sold the estate...

We are no more estate owner...

We didn't bother about it...

My father is alive now is more than enough...

To meet my father's medical expenses after his surgery, we took some loans...

I tried for some job... but was not getting anything as i got no experience...

City expenses was going out of our control...

We shifted again to our hill station...

I went in search of the job in our own estate...

Some new manager was working in the estate and fortunately he gave job...

But that salary which i will be getting only can serve for our food...

Medical expenses need to be met and already taken loans are to be cleared...

We decided to sell our house as well...

Now i am waiting for the person who is going to buy our bungalow...

Taking the money from the person i need to settle the debts...

Balance i need to deposit in the bank as i can use the interest for monthly medical expenses...

All the calculations were done inside my mind...

My parents felt very bad on this situation of us...

But i always console them ups & down are just normal...

Their worry is all about me...

Yes.. Roopa got settle on her life while i am unmarried is their main worry...

But where i even got any interest for any marriage even if my parents didn't meet this downfall...

Its Chandra filled all over my mind, heart & soul...

Moreover he already made me his wife filling my forehead with sindoor...

I did denied to marry him when he was fixed for Roopa so that i cant hurt my sister...

But that doesn't mean i was about to marry someone else and live happily...

Instead i might have lived my life all alone just in his memories...

Infact that is why i wanted to go abroad somewhere and work...

But now i cant do that also leaving my sick father alone...

How my mother will handle alone...

My fate is not leaving me to leave the place also...

I am working in my own estate & as we are selling this bungalow, we occupied the staff house...

Even now my parents are there only as they cant handle seeing selling the bungalow...

When i was in all these thoughts i heard the sound of car...

It entered into the bungalow and stopped in front of the entrance...

The door of the car was opened...

Some one got down from the car wearing cooling glass...

As entering into the house, he lift the glass from nose to his head...

I saw him & got shocked...

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Banumathy Prasanna

@banuprasa

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Part 19

Nandhini POV:

What i am seeing in front of my eyes???

Is this really my Chandra or its my imagination???

When i was on various thoughts, he came near me...

'How are you Nandhini???' he asked...

Now i am confirmed it is none other than Chandra...

But what to reply him???

I dont want to tell all my downs in my life begging for pity...

'I am all fine... How about you???' i asked...

'I am fine as well..' he replied...

I looked behind to see his family members...

But none were found...

'Who are you searching for???' he asked...

'Your family...' i said keeping my eyelids down & hoping i dont get a heart breaking reply...

'Where are you searching my family behind Nandhini when my family is standing in front of me...' he said...

His eyes were on me... other than we both none were around...

Does this mean he is mentioning me as family...

Does this mean he didn't married anyone yet...

Does this mean he is still my Chandra...

But i dont want to ask him anything like that...

Now i want to clarify my puzzle in my mind...

'Is it you who is going to buy this house???' i asked...

'Yes... i am only going to buy this... for you.. for us...' he said..

What he said...'for us'... does this mean he is still loving me...

My heart was crying with joy while my face didn't reveal any such happiness to him...

'Please correct your statement.. i am selling the house & you are buying it for you.. this is no more mine' i said...

'Oh... you want to have another bungalow for you... its ok.. select whichever you want.. lets buy that for you...' he said...

'What are you talking??? i dont want any bungalow.. actually we are shifting from this place & that is why i am selling this house itself... remember that...' i said...

'Ok.. then select the bungalow in the place you go.. lets start living there together...;' he offered...

'Chandra.. Please stop talking all these... you are talking as if i am your wife...' i said...

'Its the fact Nandhini.. you are talking as if we dont have any connection...' he said looking into my eyes...

'yes its the fact.. there is no connection between us.. you know i am even married.. please stop talking all these to me...' i said...

Yes.. i said that.. as i dont want him to know any of my situation & accept me out of pity...

Moreover when he was poor and i was rich i denied his love and sent him out..

Now if i try to even love him, he may mistake me that i am trying him as he become rich...

'Oh Good.. Congratulations.. whee is your husband??? why are you alone here???' he asked...

'My husband is in different city where i am going to settle with him after selling this house.. in fact that is the reason i am selling this house itself...' i clarified using sequence of lies...

'Well... but i cant see any signs of marriage.. no engagement ring on finger.. no sindoor on forehead... no mangalsutra on your neck...' he puzzled...

'he dont have belief in all these.. so we did register marriage... that is why...' i continued my lie...

'Oh ok.. anyway... so you want bank transfer or cash' he asked...

'Give me as cash as i need to go to our city urgently...' i said...

'Ok take this...' he said & gave me a suitcase..

I opened it to see filled with cash...

I closed the suitcase...

'Count it Nandhini... ' he said...

'I have trust on you.. bye...' i said and came out of the house...

I was finding difficulty to take even single step..

Slowly i managed to reach home...

I kept the suitcase inside the wardrobe and jumped on the bed...

I got tears...

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Banumathy Prasanna

@banuprasa

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Part 20

Chandra POV;

I am seeing Nandhini after years...

My heart is jumping in joy...

I really wanted to hug her & place few kisses too...

But i was controlling all my emotions...

I felt like laughing when she said she is married...

I know she was telling lie...

She is thinking i am out of touch of her..

While i was getting all her updates through Ganesh... (Estate staff)...

I dont want their estate & bungalow to go in someone else hands...

That is why i purchased myself...

How i got such huge property...

Its really a fortunate happening...

After going from here i went to near by city...

I saved a billionaire from her enemies when they tried to kill her...

She was so thankful to me and took me with her...

She made me her manager.. i was living together with her in her bungalow...

When i went to orphanage while she too accompanied me...

When we were there... she asked about my details of coming to orphanage from the management...

From the details given by the management, it was understood that she is my mother 'Moora'...

Yes... It seems like when i was born enemies of my father tried to kill our family...

My father was killed by them...

While they tried to kill my mother & me... To escape me from their hands she dropped me in a temple and thought of taking me from there after escaping from the enemies...

But when she returned after handover the enemies to police station, i was not found in the temple...

She searched for me here & there.. but got no trace of me...

Then how i got identified as her son is because i got a mole in star shape in my shoulder which was marked by the orphanage management staff in their record as well as same is recorded by my parents in my birth certificate...

Also date, place everything tallied which confirmed me as their son...

After death of my father & losing me... she struggled hard to run the family biz and with her hard work she developed the company to great extent...

Now she handover everything to me and made me the heir of all the properties...

After some days... she started to ask me to get married..

That is when i told her about my love towards Nandhini...

She told me to bring Nandhini immediately as daughter in law...

But i dont want anything to happen out of force...

Instead Nandhini who said not loving me should confess her love...

Accept me whole hearten though i know she too loves me...

I started contacting Ganesh to update on Nandhini family status and that is when i was told about all the bitter truth...

I purchased their estate...

Then heard they are selling their bungalow too...