Chandni FF: I hurt you Completed FF - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71
chandra moved towards nandini and she misunderstood him.ha ha.very romantic.Chandra is getting naughtier and romantic. he said the tea is tastier now as it got blended with love as she sipped it.so cute.how smartly he made her feed him and fed her her.romantic.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 25

Chandra POV:


I am at bungalow...

All alone in this big bungalow...

I badly want her to be with me with her family...

But i cant do that until she accept me into her life...

Of course she will...

I am doing all the required already to bring her to my way and accept her love...

Yes.. i didn't go to estate office since past 2 days...

I informed manager in the estate that i am not well...

She might have enquired to manager about my absence...

He might have informed her that i am not well...

I am sorry Nandhini to tell lie...

I am now eagerly waiting for her to come...

yes.. standing in the balcony looking for her...

Also took her she dont see me sitting in the balcony too...



Nandhini POV:

I am restless...

Why he is not coming to office for past 2 days...

Of course he is MD & its his wish to come or not...

But if its just casual missing.. its ok...

No.. even that is not ok... I am badly missing him...

While he is missing without even letting me know the reason...

Yesterday my parents noted restlessness on me and asked the reason...

I just managed as workload...

But truly its not because of any workload...

Instead i am worried for him...

Not anymore.. i cant hold me...

I went to manager...

'Sir.. Is MD out of station...' i asked manager...

'No Nandhini... he is very well here only...' he replied...

Then why he is not coming... but i cant put the question in that way...

'Ok.. just asked... as he didn't came to office..' i clarified...

'Yes.. as he is not well...' Manager replied leaving me shocked...

'Not well!!!' i asked...

'Yes.. it seems seasonal effect...' he confirmed...

i went back to my seat...

But unable to sit in it...

Chandra is not well... He is alone in the bungalow... What is his condition..

I am really worried...

I went to manager again...

'Sir.. i want half day leave...' i requested for which he granted...

I started from office and went to bungalow...

There was no one engaged anywhere... No Security.. No servants... No one...

If anyone is there.. atleast can see him when he needs...

I entered into the entrance of the gate...

I remembered playing in that beautiful garden...

Its all become memory & not mine anymore...

The feeling itself was giving pain somewhere...

I took deep breathe and reached the door...

I pressed the calling bell...

But the door was not opened...

My heart beat started fast & my body shivering...

Why he is not even opening the door...

I tried to open the door while it was locked inside...

What to do now???

I wonder walking here & there...

Then i remembered the place where we keep spare key in the garden secretly...

I rushed towards there and took out the key...

I opened the door and went inside the house...

'Chandra... Chandra... ' i went inside calling him...

But no response...

I went in search of him in every room in the downstairs...

No where he is found and i slowly took steps to the upstairs...

I checked every room and only room left was mine to check...

I opened the door and found Chandra on my bed.. on my pillow... wrapped with the blanket...

His eyes were closed and face was dull...

I rushed towards him... with tears rolling from my eyes...

'Chandra.. Chandra... ' i called and kept my hand on his forehead...

No.. he is not having fever...

I hold his shoulder and shake him gently...

'Chandra... get up...' i said...

He slowly opened his eyes & looked at me...

He slowly got up while i helped keeping the pillow on the headboard to lean over it...

'What happened to your health... you dont have temperature... still you are looking dull and sick...' i asked...

'Yes Nandhini.. the sickness is not related to temperature...' he answered...

'Are you feeling ill inside.. Shall i call doctor...Did you checked with doctor...' i asked series of questions...

'Yes Nandhini.. the fever is inside and no need to call any doctor as my doctor has come..' he said looking into my eyes...

What he mean by doctor has come...

I shrink my eyebrows and looked at him...

'Yes Nandhini.. the pain is here for which you are the doctor...' he said keeping his hand on his heart...

Oh.. its trap again to bring me here...

'You.. You... you told lie...you know how much i was worried that you are not well... you not even came down to open the door and i felt like i lost my breathe...and you are playing...' i was telling giving soft punches on his chest with my soft hands...

He didn't hold me from punching him... He just accepted all my punches happily with a smile looking at me...

In a while i realised punching him and i stopped... while till i was unable to control my tears, heart beat & shivering body...

When i tried to take my hand from his chest he hold my hand...

'Thanks Nandhini for this medicine for this wounded heart by your words that you dont love me... now i know you love me with all these punches...; he said with a smile...

'Chandra... Still i dont love you..' i said...

'Is is Nandhini.. Yes i can see in these tears...' he said & wipe my tears...

'Also in your tensed state...' he said and pulled me towards him...

I fell on his chest while he wrapped his hand around my waist and pulled me closer...

I lean on his chest and closed my eyes...

Slowly my hands forward itself to wrap around him to complete the hug...





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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
Awww such a cute update...loved it...greedy me waiting for more
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74


Dear Banu,
Just saw this FF and read all 25 Chapters at one shot.

You know..,your style of writing, the estate, rich-turned-poor but good girl, poor-turned-rich but rough and tough yet mischievous hero, all their knok-joks reminds me so much of RamaniChandran Novels. It used to have the same flavour of Hidden Love and Emotional scenes. Can't wait to read the rest.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Banu. I am so sorry for my absence. I really lost track because I restricted myself from reading and commenting further due to my exms. Therefore, just limited my number of posts per day.
OOOhhh... so much has happened. Wow... Chandni can't be anymore in love. Chandra is now hell bent on cornering his Nandini. Even Nandini is powerless to resist his love advances. I loved each and everything he does to make her reciprocate. And things have come till hug. Nandini is really being foolish trying to cocoon herself from the heaven that awaits her in the form of Chandra's love.
Please sow some brains into this girl. She totally lost it in her so-called mahaanta of sacrificing her love.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
Banu you are going from strength to strength in each update. I am loving the story. Chandini love is becoming even more beautiful and stronger with each passing day. It really makes one want to root to see how much more beautiful two such beautiful people like Chandra and Nandini are when they will come together. The cuteness of their love, the mischievousness, all this cannot get any better that too with such utter simplicity. Keep it coming Banu.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
Thanks for all your wonderful comments...😊

Sorry dears to keep you all waiting...

Update in few minutes...
Edited by banuprasa - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 26

Chandra POV:

Nandhini looked at me after being inside my hug for sometime...

Yes.. she might have get her senses back on what she is doing only after a while...

She got up and looked at me into my eyes and looked at her hands wrapped around me...

Also my hands around her..

There was mixture of shyness & sadness on her expressions...

She swiftly took her hands from me and moved away...

She took my hands which was wrapped around her too...

'I am going Chandra...' she said...

'Why Nandhini... be with me for some more time...' i requested...

'Chandra.. its not right.. i just came here thinking you are not well... otherwise i might have not at all come here...' she said...

'Why Nandhini??? why are you still hiding your feelings???' i asked...

'No Chandra... i really dont love you... ' she tried to manage...

'Its not true which is known to me...' i said confidently...

'How can you say that???' she asked...

'Why not i know... i know you fell in love with me on the first day we meet each other as i did...' i said with a pause...

She looked at me wondering what to tell...

'Moreover you remember i filled sindoor on your forehead when i thought our marriage is fixed & i told you are my wife...' i was telling looking into her expressions...

She was still silent...

'Leave all these which you can deny as my imagination or assumptions.. then what about you confess your love...' i asked...

Her face puzzled what i am talking about...

'Nandhini... you remember confessing your love in the railway station in the station master room in the mike meant for announcement... You confess your love...' i said with a pause atleast expecting some reply from her now...

'How do you know that???' she questioned widening her eyes in surprise...

'When the whole of the people who were in station & in train were hearing then why not i !!! i asked with a smile...

'YOu were in the train???' she enquired...

'Yes Nandhini.. i was in the train as one of the passenger...' i clarified...

She swiftly hold my shirt with her hand with that question...

'Then why you didn't come to me!!!' she puzzled...

'I didn't Nandhini as i was angry on you when you denied my love in the hall... ' i said looking into her eyes...

'Ifs it your physic i was attracted to love if yes.. then i might have married to your sister who was your look alike.. am i right...' i asked...

She nodded...

'If its your property i am interested in then i might have married your sister easily as the property might have come to your sister if you can get it... am i right...' i asked...

She nodded...

'Nandhini.. its your heart.. your soul i was in love with.. that is why i always differentiated between you & roopa though i was thinking both as same person... When i realised the truth.. i immediately stopped the engagement telling the truth to your father... i wanted to be true to my love.. while you denied my love...Am i right...' i asked...

She got tears...

'Even now you are not ready to accept your love Nandhini.. you told lie that you are married... even i made you accept that you are not married, you are not yet ready to accept the fact of loving me... Why Nandhini???' I asked her now holding her shoulder...

She left the hold which she was having on my shirt...

She closed her face with her palm as she was unable to face me...

I hold her hand and removed from her face...

I wipe her tears...

'Nandhini.. Accept me.. Accept our Love...' i requested...

She lift her eyelids to look at me...

We had eye lock for a while...

I sent the request which i made in words through my eyes to her as well...

Her eyes were receiving my untold words...

She was having great battle between heart & mind...

I know her heart want me while her stupid mind was misguiding her to deny...

I dont want to put more pressure on her...

'Nandhini.. you go home... we will meet tomorrow at office...' i said giving her some water...

She drink water and relaxed her a while...

Her eyes asked me permission to go...

My eyes expressed her to go...

I got up from the bed and went behind her...

I badly wanted to hold her hand and walk together...

But i know she is already disturbed...

I dont want to disturb her more...

I just went till the entrance and let her go back to her home...

She turned and looked at me before going out of vision...

I smiled and she rushed out from there...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 27


Nandhini POV:

I came out of the bungalow and out of his vision...

His touch.. his hug... his talk... OMG.. it got great effect on me...

I was unable to even concentrate on my walk now...

Moreover he knows about me confessing my love in the station that day...

Its another shocking news...

He didn't return as he was angry...

Of course he will be when i badly hurt him denying his love in the hall...

When he was so angry.. then why he came back to me...

Why he is trying to get me back...

There are so many unanswered questions inside my mind...

Finally i reached the house...

'What happened Nandhini??? you are late today!!!' my mother asked...

'I went to bungalow.. thats why...' i replied...

'Went to bungalow for what???' my father asked...

'Manager told he is not well.. thats why went to see him...' i clarified...

'Nandhini.. you love him a lot right... you went to see him knowing he is not well.. then why are you playing hide & seek till with him...' my father said...

'Yes Nandhini.. its all enough to hide your feelings... please accept him...' my mother said...

'i dont think it will work out...' i said and tried to manage...

'What are you talking Nandhini??? if this was not a real love.. then you might have moved on getting married to some one like Roopa...' my mother said...

'Moreover As he said that day in the hall.. he is still not ready to leave you and thinking you as your wife right...' my father said...

'Please maaji & pappa... lets not discuss about this now...' i said and rushed into my room...



Next day...

I went to office...

Taking a bigger box for lunch...

Expecting him to come to office...

Yes he came to my excitement...

Its excitement only just looking at him...

I smiled while he went to his cabin...

I meet him couple of times for talking official & nothing personal...

We had food together as usual...

Its evening...

He came out of his cabin...

'Nandhini.. come lets go...' he called...

'Where Chandra???' i asked him...

'Oh.. you will come only if i tell you history & geography...' he asked sarcastically...

I got nothing to tell above that...

I just got up and took my back...

Started walking with him...

As we were walking some distance... i understood where we are going...

its to the temple...

We prayed to God sincerely...

Priest did perform pooja & gave the prasad...

He took the sindoor from the prasad and filled my forehead with sindoor in front of God unlike other day where he did that hiding from others...

Priest and few who were there was looking at us surprised...

He hold my hand and we started going around the temple...

When we finished one full round...

'Nandhini... you forgot the marriage happened that day may be i did behind hiding from others.. but now i did it in front of God... Hope you remember this...' he said...

'Chandra.. why did you do this??? when i am not ready to accept it...' i said...

'I might have married with all rituals if you accepted... but now i did this as you didn't gave green signal for that... once you give green signal i wont waste any further from making you my wife procedural & by all means...' he said making me blush to cherry red...

He hold my hand and we started walking together holding our hands coming out of the temple...

When we were in a place where no one was there... he stopped below a tree...

When i tried to take further step, he hold my hand and pulled me towards him...

He wrapped his hand around my waist & pulled me closer...

'Chandra,... what are you doing???' i asked trying to move out of his hold...

My words were only a whisper while he smiled...

'Nandhini.. do you really dont know what i am doing??? What is the meaning of your strength less question...' he teased me...

I blushed...

'OMG.. you drive me crazy on your pinky cheeks...' he said...

He slowly moved to my cheeks & kissed on my cheeks...

i was shocked...

I looked into his eyes lifting my eyelids...

His eyes were filled with mischief...

He tried to move towards my lips...

OMG.. i cant handle this anymore...

I just pushed him gently and rushed out from there towards my house...



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 28

Nandhini POV:

It was indeed a great news...

yes.. Roopa just called & told she is pregnant...

My parents are very happy hearing the good news...

'Nandhini... we were waiting for this good news from Roppa & we got.. we wish to hear such news from you too...' my mother said...

'What are you talking maaji.. Roopa is married and giving such good news...' i replied...

'Thats what we are also telling.. get married Nandhini... Chandra is waiting for you... and give this good news soon...' my mother replied...

'Maaji.. lets better not talk about my marriage and spoil our happy mood now.. lets celebrate her good news...' i said...

I went to my room...

I remembered Chandra telling me making my wife in all means after coming out of temple the other day...

I dont know why i remembered that now...

May be Chandra wants to marry me and get child...

But i am unable to accept our love till now... Though i agree i have love on him which is even known to him...

After that simple marriage.. i mean filling sindoor on my forehead, he accept me as wife by heart...




Days were passing...

I am in the office...

Chandra called me in the intercom...

I went inside...

He got up from his seat and came near me...

He didn't stop near me and went further to the door and locked the door...

I was shocked...

"Chandra.. why are you locking the door now???' i got tensed...

He came near me & wrapping his hands around me...

He pulled me closer...

'Why are you tensed Nandhini??? do you think i am someone who will misbehave with you locking the door...' he asked with a deep look into my eyes...

'Not that...' i denied as i know he is such a nice gentleman...

'I just wanted to have personal talk Nandhini.. i dont want others hear that...' he said...

Oh.. door locked for just talking.. then what is his hands doing around me???

What his lips is doing near my face making me turn ruby red...

I just closed my eyes as i was unable to handle his sweet torture he was giving me..

Yes... He neither staying away and keep quiet nor kissing and getting his wish fulfilled...

His closeness near my face when his breathe was badly hitting me conveying his wishes and making me restless going weak on my knees to even stand further...

He knows i will fall down without able to stand any further...

He hold my hand and placed on shoulders to hold for support and wrapped his hand around me again...

I blushed...

'Chandra... why are you doing this to me... let me go...' i pleaded...

'Sir called me & said Roopa function is coming this weekend...' he asked me...

I nodded my head as acceptance...

'He told me too to attend the function... shall i...' he asked...

Is he asking me permission??? for what???

'When you are called by my father... you can very well attend the function... what is there to ask me...' i asked...

'Of course... you are the one who need to answer me for the questions my eyes ask you to give that happiness she is giving of becoming a father to her husband...' he said making me speechless...

I was right.. he long for having child...

'Nandhini.. wont you accept my love and our relationship... what mistake i did other than loving you madly??? why are you punishing me like this???' he asked looking into my eyes...

What answer i got to tell him...

'I am sorry for hurting you...' i apologised...

'You are hurting yourself darling...' he said...

While i was unable to hold myself other than leaning on his shoulder and cry wrapping my hand around his waist...

He console me caressing my back and hair...

He lift my face holding my chin...

He kissed on my cheeks...

I looked into his eyes can see the hot desire on his eyes...

I lift my face towards his face & kissed on his cheeks...

Then rushed out from the room...



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