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Posted: 8 years ago
#61
really good,
how you bought both pov by carefully handling emotions
good kudos
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
Very beautifully written Banu. I love the way you write.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 21

Nandhini POV:

I got the money now & need to pay my debts...

I informed my parents and went to meet the persons who gave the money to us...

'Sir.. i have bring the money to pay you...' i said...

'But Nandhini.. its already paid.. ' he replied...

'Paid!!! who paid???' i asked...

'Some one bring yesterday itself and told you have sent the money to pay...' he replied...

I returned wondering who might have paid the amount...

Its not that place alone i faced this... Its faced in every place i went...

All our debts are cleared...

But not even single penny of our money was given by me...

Who might have made all these payments...

I think for a while and remembered Chandra...

Is it Chandra who paid the amounts to all...

If yes.. why he need to do that...

I went to our bungalow... Sorry his bungalow to meet Chandra...

He was sitting in the garden having tea...

He looked at me lifting his face when the gate sound was heard...

'Welcome Nandhini.. Will you have tea...' he welcomed and asked me...

'I didn't came here to have tea...' i said with angry look & tone...

'Oh.. you seems to be hot already... what about having cool drinks then...' he offered..

'Chandra... you are not doing right...' i said with more furious tone...

'You are right..we are in hill station & the climate is cold... and i offered you cool drinks.. its not right.. i agree.. ' he said with a smile...

'I didn't came here to hear all these nonsense... tell me who told you to pay my debts...' i asked...

'Debts!!! you got debts... i dont even know that.. then how you expect me to clear it.. you sold this house to shift to City you said.. is it not truth.. You were having debts???' he puzzled...

I felt bad that i told myself about our debts...

if he is not even aware about the debts then who might have settled our debts...

'Nothing... No debts.. nothing...' i told managing myself and tried to move from there...

'Nandhini.. you have come for first time to my bungalow after i purchased and going without having anything.. its not right.. Have something & go...' he offered again..

'No.. i dont want anything...' i clarified...

'Whatever you want... hot or cold or anything.. please...' he requested...

'I dont want any of those.. give me some water...' i said...

She swiftly pour water in the glass & gave me...

I drink some water as it was even required by me to calm down my tension...

I closed my eyes for a moment...

'Nandhini... are you worried or tensed... ' he asked...

'Nothing.. i am very normal...; i replied...

'But your face didn't tell so...' he said holding my chin & lifting my face looking into my eyes...

'Dont dare to touch me.. remember i am married.. i told you right...' i hurried to remind him...

'Yes i remember.. the marriage without a ring.. without mangal sutra.. without sindoor... am i right...' he asked sarcastically...

'So what.. still its great for me... bye...' i said and hurried out from there...

I was walking towards our house...

if he didn't paid then who might have paid...

Is it by Roopa???

I called Roopa...

After general enquiries... i asked her...

'Roopa Did you paid & cleared our debts???' i asked...

'Nandhini.. i dont even know from whom you took debts.. then how it is possible... if it was possible do you think i will let you sell our estate & house...' she puzzled...

That is also right...

Roopa husband is very nice guy...

But at the same time... he wont let Roopa to give such huge amount for her maternal house...

Its not cleared by Roopa...

I reached home by now...

'Pappa... Maaji.. you have any idea who might have cleared our debts...' i asked...

They looked at me surprised...

'Its you Nandhini who took money today to clear the debts...' my mother replied...

Then its not known to them also...

I was confused...

Still decided to pay back to whoever paid on our behalf with the money we have...

I went to bank & deposited all the amount into bank ensuring safety of the amount...

When i return home... i was shocked to see Chandra sitting in the hall of our small house...
Edited by banuprasa - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 22

Chandra POV:

I settled all her debts already sending through estate staffs...

I know she will be coming asking about it...

I tried to show as if i dont know anything about her debts...

She went from there...

I took my car & went to her house...

'How are you Sir???' i asked her father...

He was excited to see me after long...

'Chandra... how many days went seeing you... how are you???' he asked me...

'I am fine sir.. how is your health now...' i enquired...

'Having medicines... ' he replied...

I smiled...

'Happy to see you back here Chandra...' he expressed...

'I am happy too Sir... ' i replied...

'You are joining job back here...' he asked me...

I took him to terrace and told him whatever happened in these 5 years...

Also told him about buying his estate & house...

'Sir.. I dont want our estate & house to go in other hands..thats why i buy that... but trust me its always yours...' i said...

'Chandra.. i am proud you...' he expressed with tears...

'Sir.. there is request from my side... i know Nandhini loves me.. but still she is hiding it from me and told me that she is married... i wish to let her go on her way & i will wait for her to accept me... till that i wish you dont reveal any of these truth to her...' i requested...

'Chandra.. its between you both and i dont want to interfere in that.. about your truth of whatever you told.. trust me it wont go out of my mouth...' he promised...

I smiled and we went down...

Her mother offer me tea...

I was drinking tea sitting in the sofa while Nandhini reached home...

She was tensed seeing me...

'You.. here...' she asked...

'Yes Nandhini... i just came to drink tea.. Aunty is preparing tea very tasty..' i said looking at her...

'I know you didn't came to have tea...' she said...

'C'mon Nandhini... you are not having tea when coming to my bungalow while not even letting me to have tea here.. whats your problem...' i asked smiling at her...

'Nandhini is this the way to behave with him.. he has come as our guest right...' her father told her...

'I didn't mean to insult the guest pappa...' she replied...

'By the way Nandhini... you are going yourself to your husband or he is coming here to take you...' i asked...

'Its between us.. what bothers you???' she asked...

'Nothing.. i thought of seeing him if he comes here...' i replied...

'Why you want to meet my husband???' she asked...

'I said casually Nandhini... why are you getting tensed...' i said..

I was just admiring her expressions...

Her father was smiling at us as he knows the truth...

'Ok Sir.. i am taking leave..' i said looking at her father...

Then told her mother.. but ignored her...

I went out of the house without even looking at her...

When i turned to enter into the car...

I can see her staring at me with upset face...

I know my ignorance might have effect on her...

But Sorry Nandhini.. i need to give your own medicine to you so that you come out of your drama and accept our love..

I smiled and get into the car...

I started driving towards Bungalow...


Nandhini POV:

If he has come to our house which clearly shows he knows we are residing here...

I dont know how he knows...

I tried to manage answering him towards his questions about husband...

Now i need to answer my parents for telling him something as husband...

All these i can handle...

But not his ignorance...

Yes.. he ignored me and went without even looking at me while going...

I was feeling upset & even got tears...

But hide it swiftly before my parents note it...

'Nandhini.. what is he talking about your husband...' my father asked...

'Nothing pappa... i only told him that i am married...' i replied...

'But why???' my mother asked...

'Pappa.. maaji.. he is not our old Chandra.. he came back rich... though i dont know how... Moreover i rejected him earlier.. now if i agree then it will be like accepting him for money.. thats why i told so...' i explained...

'I dont think so Nandhini.. its your unwanted fear...' my father said...

'Yes Nandhini.. he is very nice person & he will surely accept you...' my mother said...

'I dont want him to accept me out of pity or anything seeing our condition... Our love has become a past tense & let it be like that... Lets not refresh it...' i told & went inside...

It was easy for me to tel that...

But my heart was feeling pain...

I got no other way other than bearing that pain for the mistake i did...

I got tears...



JanakNandini thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65
nandini and chandra was too good ..
i loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
can't believe that 5 years leap took place...roopa got married and they are facing huge financial crisis and nand is sick. very sad.surprised to see Chandra at their compound.he bought their estate and bungalow as he didn't want them to lose them.wow.chandini conversations were superb.oh it's irritating that nandini lied that she is already married as she feels that Chandra will think that she is accepting him for his money.loved nandini sharing this with nand and he trying to clear her misunderstanding. glad that Chandra didn't believe her lie and is trying to make herself say the truth.loved Chandra nand conversation and nand supporting Chandra. surprising that Chandra saved a lady who turned out to be his mother.fb was sad.but happy that he united with his mother and he became rich.it was an nexpected twist.happy that chandra always enquired about nandini and family.after leap chandini are no more soft and naive.they are very bold.Chandra is mischievous also.please give more scenes on roopa with Chandra and nandini
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chandini relationship has withstood the test of time. Both of them have waited for the other. They never forgot the other or moved on. I loved every bit of these updates.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 23

Nandhini POV:

I got ready to go to estate for work...

I am maintaining accounts book there...

I started walking towards the estate office...

All the way.. though i tried to avoid, i was only remembering Chandra...

I remembered his every words & action and smiled...

But felt bad when thinking he ignored me while going...

How can he do that to me???

Then i realised what madness my thinking is...

I only told him i am married... then talk to him in such a way that i am not interested on him...

When he told that he is interested to see my husband... i gave blunt reply to him...

Then how can i expect him to move casually with me...

With various thoughts i reached the office now...

I went inside the office and sat in the chair...

I took the accounts book and started checking the accounts...

i checked the cash balance & bank balance...

Then payable for the day & receivables for the day...

That is when Manager came there...

'MD is calling you in the cabin...' he said and went to his room...

On hearing MD... i remembered my father...

He was the MD since i ever known as its owned from my grand father days...

Now it is hands of someone else...

Taking deep breathe i reached the cabin door...

I knock the door...

'May i come in...' i asked...

'Come in...' reply came from inside...

I opened the door and went inside...

The chair was turned against me and MD was checking for some file in the cupboard...

'Sir.. you called me...' i asked...

'Yes i did...' the reply came from him and turned shocking me...

Chandra... Does this mean... he only buy this estate too...

My eyes widened in surprise...

'Take your seat...' he said

I sat in the chair opposite to him...

'You are Ms. Nandhini right...' he asked giving stress on Ms...

I was sitting speechless...

'Just now i saw the staff details file and saw your details in your bio data... ' he paused & looked at me for the expressions...

I was still silent...

'There its mentioned your marital status is unmarried... is it true...' he asked...

What to reply him now???

Whether to tell yes then the version i told to Chandra as married is lie... if i tell no.. then the biodata states false...

'I think it should be true.. you see i got your bio data with your signature stating its all true.. right...' he said with a smile...

Smile which was now triggering the guilty conscious inside me for telling lie...

'Tell me Ms. Nandhini.. you are unmarried right... you can tell lie to the innocent Chandra.. you can make him fool.. but not your MD...' he said still looking into my eyes...

I down my eyelids and face...

'I am sorry.. i didn't mean to hurt you...' i said...

'Whatever i just wanted to know the truth... i wish to hear from you...' he asked...

'Yes.. i am unmarried...' i finally agreed...

He got up and came near me...

'Good you finally agreed...; he said standing near me...

I was sitting silently...

'This is not right Ms. Nandhini.. your MD is standing while you are sitting...' he said... while i swiftly stand up and stood beside him...

He came more nearer though not touched me...

I was going restless on his closeness...

He moved towards my left cheeks...

My body started shivering...

What is he trying to do...

His breathe was hitting my cheeks heating my cheeks turning it to Cherry red...

I was thinking whether to run from here...

Though i wanted to do that.. my stupid heart was only wishing to go much closer to him and fill the gap between us...

He further moved towards my ears...

Oh God... what is this man is going to do... why is he killing me like this...

'Nandhini... can i have a cup of tea...' he asked murmuring into my ears...

Is this what he wanted to ask...

For this tea only he did all these restlessness inside me...

That he might have told from his seat itself...

'What are you still doing.. Go & bring the tea...' he said while i realised the voice is coming from little far...

I looked at the place beside me where it was empty...

Then lift my face & saw he was sitting on his seat & checking some file...

I got breathe of relief...

'Sir.. i am not attender.. instead i am accountant here...' i said and turned to go...

'Thats why i told you...;' he said...

'What???' i asked...

'You are accountant & you will be having money right.. so send the so called attendant with the money you have and tell them to bring tea...' he clarified...

'Oh ok...' i said and went back to my seat...

I called the attendant & gave money to buy tea...

I was thinking... Still what is the need to call me & tell...

Even if its told to attendant.. he will come to me asking for its money...

That too coming such closer...

I can feel me blushing just by remembering our closeness...

Attendant came with the tea...

When he was trying to get into his room...

'Wait.. i will take it...' i said and took the tea cup from him...

I went inside & looked at him...

'Your tea... ' i said and kept the tea on the tea coaster...

'Did you changed your job profile from accountant to attender now???' he asked sarcastically...

I was wondering what to reply...

'Not that.. as you asked me.. i bring it myself...' i replied...

'Well.. have your seat...' he said while i sat on the chair...

'Have some tea...' he push the tea cup towards me...

'No Thanks.. you have it...' i said...

'No Ms. Nandhini... i cant drink keeping you looking at my mouth... atleast have a sip...' he said and pushed it more towards me...

I took the tea cup and had a sip and kept it back on the table...

He took the tea cup with a mischief smile and started having tea gazing at me...

Oh God.. what that eyes is doing with me...

'Ms. Nandhini.. this tea is tasty than the one i had when i reached here...' he said...

That means.. he just had sometime before when he reached here...

'I will check with attender in which place he buy this as you felt its tasty...' i replied...

'Its not the shop which is the reason behind.. ' he paused..

'Then...' i asked widening my eyes...

'This tea got the blend of my love.. ' he said turning me crimson red...

I just got up and rushed towards my table...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update ...Waiting for more
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Part 24

Nandhini POV:

Its lunch time...

I bring my lunch box and took it on my hand...

But i wonder what Chandra is going to do...

Whether he bring food or need to buy from outside...

What is bothering me...

Dont he knows to take care of his own...

If he wants he will bring or buy as he wish...

Was I the one who was taking care of all these years...

I took my box and went to dining...

No i was unable to hold myself...

i cant do that...

i got up and went to his cabin...

'Did you bring lunch???' i asked him...

'No i did't ' he said with a smile...

'Shall i tell someone to buy for you...' i asked...

'No i dont want...' he said...

'What do you mean by i dont want??? are you not going to have lunch' i asked him...

'I mean i dont want as outside food is not accepted by my stomach...' he said...

'Then why cant you bring from home...' i asked...

'I cant because i dont have anyone to cook at home to keep it ready for me... and i got up late today as i dont have anyone to wake me up to at least cook for myself...' he explained...

I know what he means by all these dont have...

'Ok.. i will give my lunch to you so that you can have...' i said and rushed out of the room without waiting for his response...

I took the box and went back to his cabin...

I forward my hand with the lunch...

'No i cant have..' he said...

'Why???' i asked...

'First reason.. you bring this for you and you need to have it...' he said...

'Its ok.. you have it...' i answered...

'Second reason... i am busy right now sending mails & my hands are not free to have it...' he said...

'Ok.. i will keep it here and go.. you have when finding time...' i said...

When i turned to go out...

'I wont be free till evening as i got so many works to be done...' he said...

Oh.. he is informing me that he cant have the whole day...

'Then how you will have... ' i puzzled...

'I cant... you better have atleast...' he said...

'Please Chandra.. have it...' i pleaded...

'But Nandhini.. i dont have anyone to feed me atleast to have it...' he expressed...

OMG.. so all these are for making me to feed him...

No.. i am not going to do that...

I turned and took few steps and reached the door...

I even hold the handle...

But i was unable to do that...

Giving an angry look for trapping me to make me feed him.. i came near him...

I opened the box and took the food...

I forward my hand towards his mouth...

'Have it Chandra...' i said keeping my face down...

'This is not ok Nandhini... i want you to give with smile & happiness.. not with such angry look... Then your anger too get feeded and i may get stomach ache and you know i dont have anyone to take care of me at home...' he elaborated...

'Ok Ok.. now have it...' i said with a smile...

Why not i get smile seeing his tries to make me do what he want...

I feed him with all smile...

He closed his laptop and was having food gazing at me...

This man is too much.. he said he is busy and told me to feed.. while he kept the laptop closed and just gazing at me...

'Gazing at you also keeping me buzy Nandhini.. Dont scold inside...' he answered my unspoken question...

I really dont know how he read my mind just like that...

I blushed when he bite my finger when feeding him...

He took the food in his hand and forward towards me...

I denied to have it...

But his eyes ordered while i got no way to deny...

I just opened my mouth and had the food feed by him...

We had food feeding each other...

After we finished lunch...

'Nandhini... you bring food in bigger tiff in box from tomorrow so that we can have like the way we did today..' he said with a mischief smile...

'No way i am going to do that... ' i answered...

'No problem if you dont want... i can stay hungry...' he said...

This man is really stubborn in his decision & know he will do that...

I just rushed out of the room...

Next day i didn't forget to bring in bigger box...


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