fanfic Nandini banished compiled - Page 3

Originally posted by: Avantika1115

Hi shailu..thnx for replying ..after reading ur fanfic only i got an idea to write one ya... iam blissfully ignorant of such author... Basically iam 4rom science stream...iam still to explore all these topics dear

Originally posted by: shailusri1983

Avantika, as soon as I read your FF, I realized that you had quiet a lot of novel and innovative ideas. But I also realized that you were hampered by the newbie restriction in your writing. It is terribly restrictive and also frustrating. Since you wanted a few more detailed reviews and insights, I will mention the ones which stuck me.

Your FF is a different take off from the same CN story. The characterization is very refreshing as is the story line which appears very novel and at the same time realistic. Where it could have been better is in the transitions from scene to scene and place to place. There are places where it tends to be a bit abrupt. The pace is also fast. Try to go a bit slow and easy on this. The story of many months had been encapsulated within a very short space.

It takes time for readers to get attached to, used to, and warm up to any new story. Give them that time. I am pretty confident that readers will start loving your story as soon as Chandra and Nandini start interacting more at a personal level. I have loved and liked it even now as I knew you were laying the groundwork and foundation for your later story. I am interested and intrigued in seeing where this story of C&N will go.

Originally posted by: rajatshweta

I like it when an experienced writer pats on the back and encourages an other writer to make their imaginations and creatives better !!

Shailaja, hats off to you... now even I wish I could write a FF like you guys... and if it happens, am gonna run to you for editing... seriously.

Originally posted by: shailusri1983

Seriously what makes you think I am an experienced writer. I just write FFs occasionally for the heck of it and when I happen to have a lot of free time on my hands. I grew up reading books and novels all around me. My dad had a very big personal library full of literary classics. I don't think I do anything special or extraordinary.

God knows we have very less FFs, SS, or OS or creative stuff on this forum. It is not like the show is going to exhaust all the possibilities of the story's potential. I generally respond to any creative stuff I like. It is really very demoralizing for anyone who is writing if they don't receive any responses even though they have done well.

I suppose seeing the kind of response this particular FF(Written by Destiny) gets, all of you must have assumed that I am a big and experienced writer which I am not. A couple of my recent FFs are incomplete and hanging in mid air. Neither am I going back to complete them nor do my readers seem to be interested in them.

The situation in the CAS FF I wrote was particularly deplorable. I mentioned how the response was in my FF thread. I was just writing pure and serious historical fiction and story telling sans any frills. One Babur and Nonnie held it up with their responses otherwise the whole thread was deserted except for me.

If you really feel like writing and have the time to do it, I would advise you to do it.

Originally posted by: shailusri1983

Seriously what makes you think I am an experienced writer. I just write FFs occasionally for the heck of it and when I happen to have a lot of free time on my hands. I grew up reading books and novels all around me. My dad had a very big personal library full of literary classics. I don't think I do anything special or extraordinary.

God knows we have very less FFs, SS, or OS or creative stuff on this forum. It is not like the show is going to exhaust all the possibilities of the story's potential. I generally respond to any creative stuff I like. It is really very demoralizing for anyone who is writing if they don't receive any responses even though they have done well.

I suppose seeing the kind of response this particular FF(Written by Destiny) gets, all of you must have assumed that I am a big and experienced writer which I am not. A couple of my recent FFs are incomplete and hanging in mid air. Neither am I going back to complete them nor do my readers seem to be interested in them.

The situation in the CAS FF I wrote was particularly deplorable. I mentioned how the response was in my FF thread. I was just writing pure and serious historical fiction and story telling sans any frills. One Babur and Nonnie held it up with their responses otherwise the whole thread was deserted except for me.

If you really feel like writing and have the time to do it, I would advise you to do it.

Originally posted by: rajatshweta

Guess you are being modest, girl.

Your FF is very good, be it your story, or your story telling style, or your sequence of chapters or the vocabulary... you he managed to keep it for decent and interesting read.

As for your CAS FF, I would love to read it if you could send me the link or the entire story thro PM.

Thanks