fanfic Nandini banished compiled

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Its not A hate thread.

All segments have been compiled for better understanding and lots of prelude has been added.

Tried my luck in writing romantic sentences

SCENE 1

NANDINI after stepping out from palace,she was in state of crude shock.She could not believe that Chandra accused of having illicit relation with Malyaketu. He rebuked her saying"how many men are there i your heart". Thunder fell upon her. She could not understand how can he speak like this to his wife.Her mind was caught in waves of emotion. "The worst part of my life was when I watched you love someone else. I am a stranger in your heart. Do you feel me beside you in your bed, there beside you where I used to lay?

Nandini remembered their wedding premier night. She wanted to avenge her father's death. What to do her mother pleaded that if she acted insanely ,all her family ladies will be in very bad state.So she openly ordered Nandini "to please the majesty". Nandini thought ,she cannot risk her family for taking an revenge. Helpless she was!!! She waited for her husband to come . He did not made her wait for long. When Chandra entered the room, Her heart stopped beating. She realized why Helena was swooning over him. He was young and his gait was so impressive for any girl to fall for him. She sprang from her seat just like a spring and went to him fell on his legs.

He lifted and was beholding her face he spoke "Do you even realize how amazing you are? Nandini did not reply. He continued if magadh was a temple then you are its Devi. Nandini quickly retorted"Then my Magesty is...looked into his face for reply."Iam your bhakt".Nandini could not control laughing"How many Devis you worship my lord"...She was hinting his marriage to Helena and Durdhara . He replied "Temple can have only one God... To answer your question I am not in love with Helena. She is just like my teacher who taught me war skills. Durdhara is my best friend. I cannot see her With that intention. I love her, because she is my best friend.Nandini was speechless. She thought "Is he a mad. Will any king speak his relation with his other wives.But he is not bad after all.I have to be in his good books to save my family. For that I am prepared to LOOSE anything.Nandini retorted" You can ask for your wish my king".He was an expert lover who could easily find place even in his enemy's heart. "Only you can make things better Nandini".He did not wait for her reply .He took He took her into his arms again, using all his strength to be gentle, and let his lips touch hers so lightly he could hardly feel .Best feeling indeed. He stopped to say another golden proverb about love."You should be kissed and by someone who knows how".This was their sweet memory . After this interlude things happened between them is a private affair.This night thought itself brings blush in Nandini's face. Nandini thought" He knew everything a girl loves to have ."

Her life was going smooth with no reason to worry. Her only worry was her father's assassination ,even that she came to know that her father was alive.Her happiness had no bounds.She thought Let him be away from Magadh. Let Chandra and Her father sort out their issues together.

Chandra is not a bad person after all. He treats her nice,better than how her father treated her mother. Chandra shared all his attention between Magadh and Nandini,ofcourse his other two wives. But her bad time came in disguise of Malayaketu. Her first misunderstanding between Chandra and Nandini came when He was inclined to Hand over his widowed sister to Malay. Even then misunderstanding did not stop his love for Nandini. He helped her to study. Evil had other plans,it came in form of Helena. Helena instilled doubt on Nandini Malay relationship and Chandra spotted them together in certain occasion. Both malay and Nandini did not even look each other ,but Chandra irked to see them together.He threw her out of palace thinking that Nandini betrayed him at middle of night. After spending 45 days together in ocean of love, his understanding was very little. Manipulative Helana .

SHE knew that Her pati is good and kind, his actions against her was just fit of anger. she somehow believed that enemity between them is to going to end even in next birth. Helena too provoked her feminine desire to love her pati unknowingly. EVEN ON that fated night she thought he came to express his sorry for insulting her dignity.but fate had other plans.Now she understood milk and water can be one and same but oil and water cannot be one.She thought of her brothers how they pampered her. HAD they been alive they could have chopped Cgm' S tongue for accusing her of infidelity Why All brothers are alike...had they been alive can malyaketu or helena can wag their tail.Even if they kept quiet , Her pita maharaj could have not spared them. She cursed herself to fall in love with her father's arch rival who just married her to keep her father at bay or may use her as Bite.Her father is not a good king,which she understood after witnessing her pati cornation ceremony.Still he is her father who still dotes her .Only with her father she felt comfort. HE is undoubtedly good dad.

NANDINI mind yearned to see his face."Oh pitamaharaj where are you. AP KAHAN HEI, KAISE STITHI PAR hey. Mein jald apke pas aah rahi hoon."

Then chandragupt face flashed on her mind. WHAT else she can do?. Who to blame . Her age and his charm ignited the passion of love ,having spend almost all nights together in ocean of love ,she cannot digest that he could call her women of loose morals.Though Moora found the truth but she expected Cgm to acknowledge her feeling.Suddenly she remember his accusation and her eyes filled with anger and flame of revenge overtook her reasoning abilities."Mein tumhe kabhi nahin chodhungi. Arey tu kon ho jo meri mahal se niklega... mein tumhe eisi pratishod karungi jise tumhe tumhare sharir par pran ke siva sirf dard rahegi.The worst part of my life was when I watched you love someone else. I am a stranger in your heart.

Do you feel me beside you in your bed, there beside you where I used to lay and sayOnly you can make things better.Malyaketu ko tum sachi samj rahe ho na dekho ek din wo tumhe aur tumhare behen ko tatpayega .us din tumhe meri surat yad ayegi. Fir tum muje smaran karoge...Hey ishwar ap itni kroor kyun ho. mera dushman se mere vivah kar diya. Mera vivah aise bandan me tha jisme prem ke pal kabhi nahi tha. Gruna ke agg hey.Nafrat ki sej pe Meri din rat chale .pita ke hi shatru tha. Us helena . Jale pe namak chidati

hey. Yavani . Uski yeh himmat.. mein tumhe apni pativrata ki man rakhar tumhe shrap deti hoon. Tuje kabhi Chandra ki pyar nahi milega. Aj rat jaise mein akheli rahi us bati sadev tum uski nikat hokar akeli tadpegi..

Even that time she thought Helena is responsible for all her ill fate. Dont know why... still she unknowingly had soft corner for husband,who never was hers.She crossed the Gates.But even soldiers did not ask her or even wish her.They just let her go. OH CHANDRA you dont want to come again thats why even soldiers did not even stop her.At that time one dasi camemahraj apki mangalsutra ko leh ane ko kahanandini shocked and yelled AT HER.

Just then Helena came with her smoky eyes and casted her vile look.Her eyes glowing with victory

"oh Nandini muje bura nahin samjo...jab Chandra tumhe chod diya to... uski mangalsutra ki kya matlab hein. Deke jao..Nandini looked her from top to bottom and sighed .with heavy heart she gave it"Helena mein ek bat kahoon.. ""han bolo nandini"Nandini in soft but deep tone uttered" Hamari milan hogi woh itni bayanak hogi jise dekh kar kal be bayabeet ho jayenge. MEIN NAND PUTRI apni apmano ki uttar diye bina nahi maroongi.ja ke apni pati se bol dena.. mene keval yudh hara yudhbhoomi nahi. Gruna ke ag se tu sab ko jAlaoongi yeh nandini..

Nandini ki pratishod he "wah helena... tum ko kya lagta hei woh tumhe chahta hei. Woh tum par kabhi ruchi nahi thi.. woh

Jak Helena mene tujhe pyar ki bheek feki hein... bharosa nahi kya jake apni Mata se puche.shayad woh tumhe bata sakti he kyunki woh ek raja ki putri he koi raja ki das ki putri nahin...jao yavni ... tum ek bharatiya nari se pyar ki bheek li.

Helena taken back.

Last time she assaulted physically,this time she slapped her very hard in her heart..Even she is aware that Chandra loves Nandini even in his dream. FIRST time she tasted defeat.Without looking back NANDINI soon reached streets .She was walking in a direction but mind was completly in opposite direction.Thanks to Love. Love is an abstract feeling.Since its invisible people dont understand.It is like a fire within river of emotions...When emotions rise fire will extinguish and vice versa.Nandini was raging in fire of love. She was in a state of complete break down.Her mind was thinking

"I can forgive Helena but not you Chandra. YOU LET ME GO.How can you be so cruel.My father was bad king but you are a worst king. Infact I feel pity on Helena for loving you.You married her only for greek troops. Poor Helena she may have won me but lost to you. You have no heart. You are made of clay.

Theek kaha tumne .Muje ab vish ki jalan se be tumhara sparsh adik dard deta hai. God has punished me for foiling my Father's plan and saving you. Thank you Chandra.Whenever we meet again we are completly stranger.you are nothing to me.you are crooked,manipulative.You spent nights with me only to make me surrender to you.You embraced me to just brainwash me against my father.Why chandra,only weapon you found to defeat me is love, you could have used your sword.Even then pain will be little lesser.

She decided to go and join her father.

She knew that her Father was in Kaushambi through spies just 10 days earlier.Thank god she did not say to Chandra ."I did something sensibliy by keeping Chandra unaware of this secret".She did not eat or drink even water.Thanks to her dad who made her strong.Her father used to say Nandini "tum kachi kali math bano.Tum ek yodha ki tara shareer ko lohe jaise banana hoga. Na jane kab kahan hamare liye mushkil samayd ayeng.Tab tumko bhook ki kamjori nahi ani chahiye.PITHAmaharaj ap kitne satya kaha. NANDINI reached Rajgirh and crossed mighty Ganga. ITS PLACE somewhat far from pataliputra and its surrounded With many hills.Now her body is somewhat exhausted. At that time she saw some small group of merchants. They saw her and sympathised with her and gave food and water.Nandini on enquired they said they were going to Kausambi.Nandini requested them to taKe her with them.They agreed on seeing her state. Nandini wanted to go there because she knew there under the disguise of a vaidya her father was living in incontigo.Her father knew medicine .Amatya Rakshasa chose that place because it was far from Pataliputra and that village mukya was his nephew,so there they were protective.They can plot nobody would find suspicious.Nandini thanked the merchants who escorted them safely to Kaushambi. Kaushambi was an old city.
Nandini was welcomed by Ashwath. Ashwath was Amatya Rakshasas 'son.He took her to Nand. Nand was astonished to see his daughter. Neither of them had any words to speak. Nand looked his daughter from top to bottom.He understood her pain.He was undoubtedly a doting father.
"Putri Nandini... Tum yahan? "
Nandini spoke"Pita maharaj chandra ne mujhe tyag kar diya... Usne mujhe charitraheen kaha"Nand did not expect this accusation. He did not know what to reply and how to react.
"kya.. uski yeh himmat.Mujhe ab samaj aya woh tumhe abhi bi gruna kar raha hei. Chod do Putri, MEre jeethe huye tumhe koi kuch nahi kar sakta. "
Nandini was somewhat consoled . Seeing her father mustered her strength.
Nandini took a glance at the place. THe place was like a ayurved vaidya shala.
"Pitha ji... yeh ap vaidya ki vesh kyun choona... "
Nand sighed and spoke "Putri ,mujhe aushadi ki bare mein gyan hei.Kya kare Jeevan ko chalana hona na. Mein kisi ke age hath ferakar nahi ja sakta hoon.isiliye vaidya bana hoon.Kuch dhan be kamana hey na..

"pita ji ap ne uchit kiya.. Pita maharaj Amatya nazar nahi ah rahe hein
kahan hey woh"
Nand replied" Amatya kuch mehatavapooran kam ke liya Avanti Nagar gaye hei. tum vishram karo.mein tumhara khane ki tyari karta hoon.
"pita maharaj ap ne bhojan ki ayojak khud kar liya"
"pputri mein kisi ko anavashyak nahi rakh sakta hoon. Mein yehan Gupt rahana chahiye. Tum to raj nandini ho tumhe yesi sawal nahi poochana chahiye.
"pita mujhe kshama karna"
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Nandini spent a week there,but pangs of separation did not leave her.especially at night. She somewhat accepted the truth that she and chandra cannot be together,still she longed for him.By that time Amatya also came from his trip. Nand and Amatya were having long discussions about strategies they can use to overthrow Chandra.Nand did not do it before Nandini. He knows that his daughter loves Chandra.He did hide from Nandini because he does not want to push Nandini to choose between Chandra and himself. Nandini was busy playing veena,which she plays very well.It consoles her but still she cannot forget him. But fate had other plans, which she was completly unaware. Fate took her to that point that she has to meet Chandra soon.She went to well to fetch some water. While roping in the bucket she felt somewhat unusual.She fell down near well. People gathered around her and someone in the crowd sent a boy to her house.

Nand was sitting in his chair. At that time a young boy came running to him and said Nandini has fainted near the well. Amatya and Nand rushed to the well and took Nandini inside the house. Nand though a physician did not want to test Nandini toh usne ek vaidya lady ko bulaya. She holded Nandini's wrist and said after carefully feeling the pulse.
Nand " kya hua meri putri ko woh theek hein na"
vaidya lady " Apki puti ko wahi bimari ai jo is ayu ke ladkiyen ko hogi. Ap ke putri ek nanhi phool ko janam deni vali hei. Jao Devi ma ko mitay chadana "
Nand could not believe her words.Amatya gave vaidya lady her fee and sent her back. Amatya closed the door.

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Amatya said "maharaj ap yeh yudh jeet gaye. Is bache hi hamare liye woh kar degi jo hum nehi kar sakte. Mujhe Guptacharan ne suchana diya ki Jab Durdhara garb hooi Chandra ne bahut jhoom niklaa. Yeh Chandra ki kamzori hei. Yeh baccha uski kamjori he..
Nand was spetical about his words "Amatya woh sab theek hei ,Par woh ise sweekar karna na"
Amatya said with wile smile in his face "Avantika sambhalegi"
Nand looked irritated "Kya woh..woh to apne damad ki sath de rahi.. woh kesi manegi."
Amatya continued "Par bhi woh apni putri aur uski bache ke liye KUCH BI KAR SAKTI HE"
MEIN ABHI SANDESH DE DETI HOON.
NAND unbelieving his plan said " cHANDRA kya moorkh he kya? us pe weh prashn karega?
Amatya replied calmly "toh kya hua .. Avantika apni putri keh liye kuch bhi kar sakti hei.Sunanda bhi hein na.Woh usko samjayegi.Avantika ja kar kahegi ki "DAMAD JI,NANDINI GARBH PEHLE SE HI.WOH YEH KHUSH KABARI APKO SWAYAM KEHNA CHAHATI THI.
He contd"Chandra pehle se hi Nandini ki Gulam tha ab aur banjayega. Uski Nandini ki Nasha aur baap banke ke khusi kuch be sweekar karega...
Nand"Woh Chankya??"
Amatya "Bal be nahi pakad sakta.., Chandra Avantika ko saman karta he... Aur hum bhi kya jhoot todi kehte hain. Sirf sach.. Sirf satya is baar. Yeh to pati patni ki bat he..
Nand became happy. He was relieved that What his 9 sons could not do,his daughter just by her charm made possible.Nandini was still asleep , By the time she woke Gupta char had already left for Pataliputra to write both Chandra and Nandini's fate.

Chankya great acharya came to meet his student Chandra. He is his well wisher. HE can and had sacrificed every thing for his pupil including his daughter MITRAVINDA.
His very daughter who once fell in love with Chandragupt. Chandragupt started having feeling for her.Chankya killed his very daughter as she was distracting chandra from his responsibilities.He cannot understand why his student is so dependent on Nandini. He knew the matter still he was relucant to speak with him on the same matter. he felt it indecent. BUt he had to do it, HIs student needed his help.
Chankya came and spoke to Chandra.
"you are my best student .Whatever I am doing is for your welfare. You have only few well wisher as far as I know. I know every single expression on your face. I knew you fall for Nandini just because she resembles my daughter Mitra!!! But one thing let me say chandra. Love is a mirage.It is an abstract devil which does not let you live peacefully. you are more than a King.Anything more than required is a poison.You loved Nandini more than its required. I told you to use her but you have been used by her!!!now see you deeds of your action she is pregnant now. Now only I have recieved message from my spy"
Chandra's face was showing Happiness of being Father
"Acharya Have you found her. Answer me Sir. What else you want me to do. If you want to Kill nandini then kill her too just like Mitra ."
Chankya sighed heavily and replied" What to do.I am doing on your best interest.Leave it chandra you are not in state to accept .Anyways she is in Kaushambi"
CHandra:"What she is doing there"
Chankya"King should not ask silly question. Where there is stagnant water there will be lotus. She is with Nand. More than you Magadh require her. She is carrying Your child.
Chandra:"Acharya kis bat ki vilambhata.. mein abhi jakar Nand ko phakadunga"
Chankya"use phakdkar kya karenge woh tumhe pehle hi pakad liya...
Chandra"App kya keh rahe hein"
Chankya"mein is prashn ka uttar bad mein doonga Chandra..Mein fir se chetawani deta hoon, Mujhe Nandini aur uski santan kisi KISI BHI mulya par yehan surakshit lana hona yeh.Jab thak mein khahoon tum wahan nahi jaoge. Jo bhi tumhe milege chahe Helena ya Durdhara ya Avantika is charcha par tumse kuch bhi bole mujhe turant bolni chahiya.. Yeh mera adesh hei. He left him. Soon night fell in. Chandra tried to sleep somehow he did it.Soon day is going to fall.

CHANDRA got up from bed at the crack of dawn. He went to balcony to worship Sun. He did this everyday. These days he was doing this mechanically. He kept gazing at the sky for quarter of an hour. After waiting for what seemed to be an eternity the sun began to peer over the trees almost like a child looking over the chair to see if anyone has discovered them in a game of hide and seek.

As the sun slowly rose over the trees, he shifted his gaze. He went to do morning routines and came back again to the same spt. This time he was staring at a flower called parijath .That flower is called night jasmine because it blooms only in night and it withers even by slightest touch of Sun rays. He paused for a moment and took that flower which was already withered and shrunk due to torching heat. He beheld it and spoke to it as if it was only one thing that really wanted to speak to him from heart. He could not bear the mental agony .He could not share his feeling to anyone in his Palace because he does not know whom to believe. He could not identify his own friends and enemies.

"Oh GOD, what is happening to me!!why do you always snatch from me whatever I love most. Look at this flower ,even this small tiny weeny flower reminds me of Nandini. I have humiliated her so badly. I don't know why I did that to her

I've won many things.Except what I wanted most,her heart.

The only thing I ever wanted .I know no one else will stay for me.

I have for the first time found what I can truly love - I have found Nandini. NANDINI You are my sympathy - my better self - my good angel; I am bound to you with a strong attachment. I think you good, gifted, lovely: a fervent, a solemn passion is conceived in my heart; it leans to you, draws you to my center and spring of life, wraps my existence about you - and, kindling in pure, powerful flame, fuses you and me in one."

Love never dies a natural death. It dies because we don't know how to replenish its source. It dies of blindness and errors and betrayals. It dies of illness and wounds; it dies of weariness, of withering's, of tarnishings.

Just at that time His Patrani came to him. She embraced him from his back. His back shivered at that contact and immediately turned back . His eyes saw Helena. she was looking calm and smiling like an innocent girl.She was looking too beautiful.he could not stop looking at her but his mind spoke following "Being beautiful alone will not win you a love"."All beautiful ladies like seeking revenge and cause of great misdeeds in humanity.Helena or even Nandini did not leave any chance to destabilize his mental harmony. Who did more harm is still an unsolved question.Both these ladies were once betrothed to Malyakethu,his mind was lost in thoughts of that moment when Helena openly wanted Malyakethu.He got infuriated sometimes thinking how can ladies love and hate same person.What makes them to love ?what makes them to hate? Even creator dont have any knowledge.His mind was arguing just then Helena broke the silence. Then only he came to reality and tried to follow her conversation . She was glorifying his decision to support farmers by reducing the taxes.He did not replied to her praises . Normally he does not like praising before face. He wanted to +cut down the talks."Helena anything else"

Nahi Chandra!!!mein bas..Helena tried to hide her disappointment that she could not draw any attention from him

Chandra: mere pas adhik samay nahi hein.. mujhe guruji ne Sandesh beja hai. Mein waha ja raha hoon

Helena: "haan zaroor... mein tumhari liye chiintit thee ke.. tum he boora laga hoga ...Nandini ne tumhe

Chandra just like a spring retotred which she did not expect

"Helena... Mujhe jana hei... JO yahan nahi hei unki baren mujhe charcha karna accha nahi lagta"

Tum jakar kuch mehatvapooran karya karna..

Helena"Chandra ..tum mujhe galt samj rahe ho"

Chandra turned to her and took her close to his face"Mein abhi tumhe sahi samaj raha hoon.. Chintan a karo Helena.. Mein sabh apni aap sambaloonga..

Helena replied customarily" theeke Chandra... Mujhe Durdhara ke liye aam ras banana hei kya mein jaoon

Chandra nodded his head in acknowledgement..

He left like a wind without even turning back..

Helena rejoiced that Chandra was accepting her web of lies. She was affirmative that her King is so naive and immature in dealing human emotions. So she took bold steps to bad mouth Nandini. Lie is a thing which when used correctly can outsmart truth. Seeing him entering political chamber she left King's chamber. Chandra could not understand Helena.She is so pocessive,but dare did he imagined that she could even speak lie to make place in her husband's heart.

Chandra thought" I don't understand how can she go on speak lies and never feel bad about it. Is she badly in love with me?No she can't.. she loved Malyakethu just few months back,how can she fall in love with me? because I am a king,? He sighed and again immersed in his thought"Honesty is an expensive gift which we cannot expect from everyone especially from Helena. Trust of innocent is tool for a lier. "

Chandra entered the political chamber and took his throne and started discussing regarding drought and people welfare.By the time when it was noon, he heeded towards chamber of Durdhara for lunch. Durdhara a bubbly fun loving girl was more friend and less queen.Though she is childish, he finds some solace when he is with her.At least DurdhARA does not misuse her position to manipulate him.She will not speak rude. Will speak in such a manner that does not hurt the listener.She is a perfect medium. Even his mother Moora will say important messages through Durdhara. Durdhara was very careful in her words she chose to speak with him. She knows his temperament .She spoke general things and slowly she shifted the topic about Nandini.

Durdhara:"Chandra .. kya tum theek ho..."

Chandra replied" Durdhara , mujhe kya hua... tum meri chod apna kayal rakh lo... imli kathi rehati ho"

Durdhara frowned at him" mujhe imli khana hei. Mein kaoongi Chandra.They had some cute moments.

Durdhara again started "Chandra tum mujse kuch nahi chupa sakte ho.. tumhe Nandini ki yad ati he na. tum ne jo bhi kiya woh theek nahi hei.Us Ghori bhilli kuch chal kar rahi he.

Us se bach rahnna"Saying this Durdhara suddenly vanished from the room without waiting for his answer. Durdhara is always like this. She can come and go anywhere without leaving any trace.Durdhara is still same.

"Atleast Durdhara did not change" Chandra felt relieved that Durdhara is not cunning. She is innocent.As pure as a newborn baby.Her words kept ringing in his ears. "even innocent girl can find his yearning for Nandini. But"

Edited by Avantika1115 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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😛cute one Avantika ..just like Nandini style 😉
If Nandini is still the same Pita Maharaj's daughter , pampered girl , childish then this is proper can imagine her saying above things 😆
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Originally posted by: raokrithika

😛cute one Avantika ..just like Nandini style 😉

If Nandini is still the same Pita Maharaj's daughter , pampered girl , childish then this is proper can imagine her saying above things 😆

thnx dear you words motivate me... I always like strong nandini...not lovesick ...cannot tolerate her pain...
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Congrats for your first story!😊
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@ Avantika, lovely story and you have etched it so rightly. Please write more and more and if possible continue this for some more length.
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Thank you friends for your encouragement.Due to some forum restriction on newbies I can only post little. SO THOUGHT of posting in 1 single looong post


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please refer first page
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guys pls do reply after reading else so boring without knowing your reaction. Suggestions are welcome. Anybody reading????? I am waiting for comments... Common guys
Hope REAL CGM AND CHANKYA FORGIVE ME...lol
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Hi Avantika, nice parts and quite interesting also. DO update many more.

Please let Nandini know about her pregnancy and how Amathya is trying to trap her husband by using her unborn child. Whether she loves Chandra or not, but she is woman who doesn't want to hurt her child's future or trade her unborn child to teach her husband a lesson. So if required make her elope from kausambi before chanakya's spy reach her or Amathya plan some other strategy which she doesn't want to indulge.

I don't want her either to take revenge on Chandra by joining hands with Nand & his minister nor want her to return to Pataliputhra meekly just because she is pregnant with Chandra's child. let her go some where, where she can give birth to her child and bring him up on her own by becoming a music teacher or something to that nature.

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