fanfic Nandini banished compiled - Page 2

Originally posted by: deejagi

Hi Avantika, nice parts and quite interesting also. DO update many more.

Please let Nandini know about her pregnancy and how Amathya is trying to trap her husband by using her unborn child. Whether she loves Chandra or not, but she is woman who doesn't want to hurt her child's future or trade her unborn child to teach her husband a lesson. So if required make her elope from kausambi before chanakya's spy reach her or Amathya plan some other strategy which she doesn't want to indulge.

I don't want her either to take revenge on Chandra by joining hands with Nand & his minister nor want her to return to Pataliputhra meekly just because she is pregnant with Chandra's child. let her go some where, where she can give birth to her child and bring him up on her own by becoming a music teacher or something to that nature.

Originally posted by: Avantika1115

Hi friends thanks for all who commented

but stil i am waiting for more comments... some good points so that ff will be intetesting. PLANNING to introduce mk soon in this plot. IT will add some twist

I will continue after your reviews. ..

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Between i see Nandini as a girl who eventually falls for a man. Though a warrior, she cannot resist temptation of human longings...

she is not a devi like in myth but a girl just like us who has her own swt of pros and cons..

so we cannot potray her without these elements. ..

Helena rejoiced that Chandra was accepting her web of lies. She was affirmative that her King is so naive and immature in dealing human emotions. So she took bold steps to bad mouth Nandini. Lie is a thing which when used correctly can outsmart truth. Seeing him entering political chamber she left King's chamber. Chandra could not understand Helena.She is so pocessive,but dare did he imagined that she could even speak lie to make place in her husband's heart.

Chandra thought" I don't understand how can she go on speak lies and never feel bad about it. Is she badly in love with me?No she can't.. she loved Malyakethu just few months back,how can she fall in love with me? because I am a king,? He sighed and again immersed in his thought"Honesty is an expensive gift which we cannot expect from everyone especially from Helena. Trust of innocent is tool for a lier. "

Chandra entered the political chamber and took his throne and started discussing regarding drought and people welfare.By the time when it was noon, he heeded towards chamber of Durdhara for lunch. Durdhara a bubbly fun loving girl was more friend and less queen.Though she is childish, he finds some solace when he is with her.At least DurdhARA does not misuse her position to manipulate him.She will not speak rude. Will speak in such a manner that does not hurt the listener.She is a perfect medium. Even his mother Moora will say important messages through Durdhara. Durdhara was very careful in her words she chose to speak with him. She knows his temperament .She spoke general things and slowly she shifted the topic about Nandini.

Durdhara:"Chandra .. kya tum theek ho..."

Chandra replied" Durdhara , mujhe kya hua... tum meri chod apna kayal rakh lo... imli kathi rehati ho"

Durdhara frowned at him" mujhe imli khana hei. Mein kaoongi Chandra.They had some cute moments.

Durdhara again started "Chandra tum mujse kuch nahi chupa sakte ho.. tumhe Nandini ki yad ati he na. tum ne jo bhi kiya woh theek nahi hei.Us Ghori bhilli kuch chal kar rahi he.

Us se bach rahnna"Saying this Durdhara suddenly vanished from the room without waiting for his answer. Durdhara is always like this. She can come and go anywhere without leaving any trace.Durdhara is still same.

"Atleast Durdhara did not change" Chandra felt relieved that Durdhara is not cunning. She is innocent.As pure as a newborn baby.Her words kept ringing in his ears. "even innocent girl can find his yearning for Nandini. But"

Originally posted by: shailusri1983

Avantika, beautiful update, beautiful words, and beautiful emotions. You really must not blame me, but for some odd reason, right from the point Chandra was speaking to the wilted Parijat flower and his self-confession, I was reminded of the classic love confession scene in Charlotte Bronte's Jane Eyre and the lightening struck, splintered chestnut tree. It just goes on to show love is a universal emotion which transcends boundaries of space and time.