FF : Deewana Mujhsa Nahin!!!!(Chap38 ud/pg68) - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi..lovely start yaar..pls continue..i felt sad reading Viren's story, the guy who is so energetic and full of life is being lonely now and talking to Nivi and sharing all his happiness and sorrows...
Awesome story yaar.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome start yaar,, viren is living with nivi even don't about her present,, it s really touching... I like this viren... Continue soon... 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loves it.though it was sad but want nivren to meet soon.and really this we can say as phsyco viren..mad about nivi .wating for next
Edited by jaindeepti9 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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this is lovely please continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 2 part 1: Viren's Briefing

Hey' viren speaking again. Thank u for your lovely comments. I am happy to hear that you all like my story, but little sad also because that story make you all sad. Now Nivi is not with me physically .. that's a fact.. but she s my love n life.. I read some quote which goes like this "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the heart and soul!" which is apt for me. So enjoy my story. 😊


Without mentioning about my family, I can't proceed my story . My dada sahib is the highest authority @ my home. No one even dare to question his actions.. then my dadi ma' she is so cute' short tempered also.. my mum Chanchal Sood.. she loves me a lot' I miss her a lot.. she love call her as modern lady. My dad Jawhar Sood.. he helping Dada sahib and sid in family business.. my lovely vandana tyaji.. she only knows me properly @ home. I love her a lot' then my sweet brother' sid.. he tried to protect me a lot of time.. but fate had another decision' divya bhabhi'. She s very cute' actually she also my childhood friend' and finally we are expecting a new member @ home' sid and divya expecting a baby now''''

Edited by meera_krishna - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 2 part 2 : The Sood Mansion

In the morning everyone in the Sood Mansion are busy with their own daily routines. Dada sahib reading news paper. Dadi maa talking to someone over phone. Sid came to hall with Divya. "Dada Sahib, I am prepared design for our new project, if you can review it???"

"Ok, Beta. I will look into it. Give it to me. Vandana told me now you are spending a lot of time in office itself. You want to take care Divya also, right?"

Sid gave cute to Divya.

"Dada Sahib Wohhh" .

"No' No more arguments. Today onwards you must reach home by 5 pm. Ok."

"But Dada Sahib'"

"But What? We are appointing employs in order to do work. If you do all the work yourself, why we need this much employs?"

"Ok. Dada Sahib. I will reach home by 5 pm. I promise. "

Dadi Ma interfere their conversation and said "Next month Divya ki Godh Bharayi Hena.."

Vandana and Chanchal came there with tea for Dada sahib and Dadi ma..

Vandana said "Haa Maa"

Divya become very excited and said "Maa we want to call everyone. You don't worry about me. Nivi will take care of all. If there is Adithya Bhaiyya and Yash, it will be very funny.. Haa Maa' We want to call Viren Also"

After hearing the name Viren everyone become very sad. Chanchal's eyes filled with tears. Suddenly she left the hall.

Edited by meera_krishna - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Waiting for nivi's intro... Continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wating for next...want viren to come soon in shimla
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Viren why r u away from ur home and nivi? Interesting continue please.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow truly a wonderful ff...was not able to read it b4...
Loved ya way of writting...
Viren living with nivi's memories...omg its really sweet!!
Continue soon...n a kind request too...pls do pm me wen u update...never getting enuf tym to cm online nw a days!!

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