FF : Deewana Mujhsa Nahin!!!!(Chap38 ud/pg68) - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Voice Over: Viren

@All: Thank you for ur wonderful comments. It encourages me to reveal more about my life.

I know you all waiting for Nivi. I too wait for that moment. It will be greatest moment in my life. Waiting gives pain. If it is for the person you love most, then it will be worst. But now it is the only reason for me to live.

@Butifuleyes(Actually I don't know your real name): I will definitely tell you y I am away from Nivi and my home when right time comes.

Coming back to USA. At office I have one friend. Sonia. She is my junior. Last year we together worked for a project. That time we spend a lot of time together. So we become friends. Some time she remembers me about Nivi. But of course she didn't know anything about Nivi. Hmmm….she is hot too…😉

Nivi… I am not talking about you.. I mean u r hotter than Sonia….. Niviii..

Hey yaar.. Here Nivi becoming jealousy. By the time I console Nivi, you people read my story.

Chapter 3: Office

Viren reached and start doing final preparations for his presentation. Then Sonia's message pop up in his monitor, "Hii". Viren replied "Hii"

"what about your preparation?" "Going fine" "All the best dear!" "Thanks"

A few minutes later Viren's Manager called him and asked to setup presentation. Then he set all the things. As time approaching he become nervous. He closed his eyes and remembered that incident.

It was the anniversary day @ school. Nivi participating for singing. Viren participating for Speech contest. That day too Viren become nervous. He approached Nivi. Nivi told him, " whenever you become nervous, you just think about me. Then you can find me in each person. Tell me what you want to present. Then you will be fine"

Viren did what she said and won the prize too. When prize received Nivi give him a flying kiss which is more valuable than what is in his hand.

A knock wake up Viren from his thought. All entered room and presentation started. Throughout the presentation Sonia looking at Viren. She cannot concentrate on anything. He is such a handsome, and then what help her not falling for him.

All are impressed by viren's presentation. Client appreciated Viren. Now Viren going to lead that project.

That evening Viren about to leave office he got a call from Sonia. "Can we go Cafeteria in order to have icecream? " "Sure" viren replied.

Sonia ordered Chocolate chip ice cream. Viren ordered Strawberry. Sonia asked him, "y u always ordering Strawberry. You can try another." Viren replied." I just love Strawberry". Now a cute smile on his lips.

That day Viren and Nivi on the way back to home after school. When they reached bus stop, Nivi screamed "Strawberry…………….." viren asked "what?" "I need Strawberry now". "but Nivi fruit stall is far away from here." "No …. I need Strawberry Ice cream." "But Nivi I had no money". "I want it now." She is adamant in her decision. "Ok." He asked the shop keeper about prize. It costs Rs. 10.

Viren was in confusion how he will fulfill his Jaan's wish. Suddenly he got an idea. He opened his water color box and stated applying black color all over his body, in order to look like beggar. After completing his makeup, he approached people who are standing in the bus stop. As soon as he collected Rs.10, he bought ice cream and gives that to Nivi. He smiled.

Then happened usual things. Dada sahib happened to know about the incident. Viren got punishment. Then also he had a smile, "Anything for you Jaan". Someone informed Nivi's father. As usual he warned her not to mingle with Viren.

Viren approached his car in order to leave office. Then his phone rang "Home Calling…"

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice one Viren, felt sorry for u dear. My name is Sunayana.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice story viren felt sorry for u.hope that u soon reunite with nivi.hoping to hear more about u and your freinds in us.pls cont soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
Hiii Viren Ji... Nivi is very luckyyy...please continue your story soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice scene..ya who will not fall for our handsome viren😆.wating for next,,,
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely update Virenji...would love to know more about you and Nivi...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wonderful update dear...
Viren is soo sweet...he remembers each n every thing abt his jaan...
Hope he returns back soon n meets his Nivi...
Continue soon...
Thanx for te pm dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Meera..when are you updating next...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Voice Over: Viren

Thank u All for ur wonderful comments😊

After coming to USA, I don't have any contacts with my family. But two years back Sid found me in Face book. Despite of many requests I didn't give him my personal number. But one day he told Tyaji eagerly waiting to talk to me. I can say no to anyone expect Nivi and Tyaji. Now Sid and Tyaji know my number. Tyaji used to call me when there is no one @ home.

Chapter 4: Tyaji Calling…Back to memories…

"Haan Tyaji, bolo."

"Viren Beta, how are u?"

"I am fine. What about Dadi Maa? Last time when you called me u told she suffering from back pain." "She is fine now."

"What about Maa and Papa?"

"They all fine."

"And what about Divya Bhabhi?" "Haan, beta.. for that I called you. Next month we planned her Godh pharayi. She wished if you also here."

"But Tyaji, you know I can't come there." "Why can't u?"

" Tyaji, you know Dada Sahib still hates me."

"No Beta. He loves u and he told me to call you."

"If he loves me, then why I am here alone? Why he took long 15 years in order to call me? No tyaji he will not understand me. He never ever understands me. I know he called me because he wanted to see Divya Bhabhi Happy this time."

"No Beta. Why you thinking like that?"

"If he understands me he himself calls me. I am sure about that. I know even Sid tried many times to convince him what was happened on that day. But he didn't pay attention to that. For him family status is everything. Sorry tyaji. I will not come. "

After that call Viren become sad. He enters into the Car. He closed his eyes and started thinks about what happened on that day.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Voice Over: Viren

Before going to that day's incident, I will tell you my story. My love story.

You know how much I love Nivi. Then you think that I fell in love with her at first sight itself. No. Not at all. Initially I hate her and even not wanted see her. After that slowly I fell in love with her.

Chapter 5: The Badmash Company: A story of Chota Viren and Choti Nivi too..

This story begins 25 years back. That day Sood Mansion was in festive mood. There born their second Prince Viren.

Total five babies born in that hospital. Four gals and Viren. Viren itna good looking dha itna good looking dha… All gals stopped crying and started to look at him. Nurses also fell in love with Viren and when he went to Sood mansion all hospital staffs started crying.

In early months itself everyone understood that he is very naughty. Every time he wanted some company. When no one around him he definitely start crying. But the instant he saw someone near to him he starts playing with them. Most of the time Sid looking after him. He loves his little brother very much.

When he become one year old and starts walking sabka kam aur bhi muskil ho gaya. He starts to pick each thing and throw it away. Initially whoever saw he start throw something they ask him not to throw. Then he starts think for a second and throws things away. Then they started saying "Ok. Beta. You throw it away." Then he throws that thing that moment itself.

Dada Sahib appointed two more servants in order to look after Viren. Viren was very naughty so that every two months dada sahib wanted to look for new servants. Finally no one even commit to work in the Sood Mansion.

Vandana Tyaji had good relationship with Sharma's Home. She used to go there. She took Viren too along with her. He loved to go there. He can play with Adithya and Divya who are elder to him.

When Viren was about 3 years old he noticed kaveri Chachi (Keshav's Wife) had a big belly. He noticed that it becoming bigger and bigger. He becomes very anxious. He asked Tyaji. She told "Beta, there is a baby inside the Belly". Viren more surprised now. "ehhh.. a baby inside the belly. What is doing inside the belly?" Tyaji told," Beta, you people play Hide and Seek, right. This baby too playing that game. "

From that day onwards Viren used to visit Kaveri in order to check the baby come out or not. One day while they are playing Hide and seek Viren rushed to Chanchal and asked, "Maa, I want to hide into your Belly!!!!!!!"

When kaveri gave birth to Nivi, Viren rushed to Sharma's house in order to see wonder baby. After seeing baby he wondered. He had a teddy even bigger than this. Can we call this creature a baby?

Her eyes are always closed. Her hand look like she is going for a boxing and most surprising thing is she can't even walk!!! She always in deep sleep. Otherwise she starts crying. Viren just hate crying babies.

Time passed. Viren used to ignore Nivi. But that day.. Viren and Tyaji reached Sharma's house. Nayantara Dadi called him to give Gajar ka Halwa. Nivi also with NT Dadi.

When he approached Dadi, suddenly Nivi Jumped towards Viren and tightly hug him and gave him a cute kiss on his Cheek.

Viren's mouth went open. His face became red. Cute smile appear on his lips.

That day… That moment Viren fell in love with Nivi………..

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