FF : Deewana Mujhsa Nahin!!!!(Chap38 ud/pg68) - Page 5

Originally posted by: preetha_6

lovely update meera, such cute chapters..chotu viren and his naughtiness and nivi kissed and hugged viren, then how would he not fall in love with her.. waiting for next update

Originally posted by: Resh_kinhafan

Enjoyed reading te update dii...
Found viren's childhood luvstory very cute...pls make viren come back soon...waiting to meet nivi too...
Continue soon dii...thanx a lot for te pm...

Voice over: Viren

Some unknown feeling enters into me. Slowly I am attracted towards her. At that age I didn't know what that feeling called. But today I can surely tell, I fell in love with her at that moment itself.

Chapter 6: Veeru ki Basanti

Tyaji and NT Dadi started laughing @ Viren. Viren started blushing. He looked at Nivi. She also smiles innocently. Viren was watching Nivi. She changed a lot. She had beautiful big eyes. Her smile was very cute. She had a bubbly cheek. Can anyone change like this? Viren wondered.

After that Viren need no company to go Sharma's house. Instead of playing with Adithya and Divya, he loves Nivi's company. Kaveri also loves him a lot. Chanchal didn't like this. But she cannot force Viren too. If she refuses Viren to go Sharma's, then the number of plates and flower vase in the Sood house surely reduce further. Now Sood mansion's Servants getting some rest.

The first word Nivi spoke was Maa. Then before calling Papa or Dadi, she called "Veeru". She cannot pronouns "Viren" properly. So she used to call Veeru. Whoever asked her to whom she liked most, she replied without any second thought,"Veeru!"

Viren joined school. His only worry was he could get less time to play with Nivi. Whenever time gets Viren visit Nivi.

Viren was short tempered. So usually he involved in some fighting with other boys. So regularly Dada Sahib got complaints about Viren from School. Viren get punishment from Dada Sahib.

Time passed. Nivi too going to join School. She was very happy because she going to join Viren's School. First day Kesav bring her to school. When she entered class room, she looked for Viren. But she couldn't find him.

She started crying "I want to see Veeru". Teacher asked, "Veeru!! Who is that?" Nivi wondered."U don't know Veeru!!!!!!" she began cry bit louder then.."I want to see 'my Veeru'……" seeing that 10 more kids started crying. The whole class became very noisy. Teacher became worried. She told, "Veeru ki Basanti.. Please don't cry. I will find out ur Veeru."

After questioning Nivi, teacher found out that she mentioning about Viren Sood. She brought him to the Nivi's Class room. He consoled her and promised her that he will visit every interval. That day onwards she got nick name "Basanti!!!!"

Nivi was a lively character. She brings smile at every face. But if she make any attachment with anyone Viren became jealousy. He surely snatched her from them. He didn't allow even Divya to talk too much with Nivi.

When Nivi was 5 years old, Kaveri gave birth to Yash. But some complication was there. So she went to God's place next day leaving behind her two sweet children.

Nivi didn't know meaning of death. But Tyaji told Viren that, "after death all people goes to heaven and they will not come back again". He couldn't see Nivi in that situation.

Nivi don't know why her mother lying on the floor wearing white dress. She wondered why all people around her crying. She could still see a smile at mother's lips. She didn't know why all took her mum away from her home. Her mum never returned to her home after that.

She used to ask NT Dadi where her mum is. At first NT Dadi didn't know what to reply. Finally NT replied she went heaven and never returns from there. "How Maa can live without seeing me? Now here our Chota Yash too. Why she leave us?"

Every day after school, Viren and Nivi used to visit a park. That day too they went that park. Nivi had no mood to play. She told Viren,"Veeru... My Maa will come to see me... right..."

When he reached home, he saw Vandana doing some work in the main hall. Then he thought something in his mind. He threw away his School bag. He forcefully took Vandana to Nivi's room. Then he told Nivi,"Today onwards this is your Maa. Whenever u wants to see your Maa, call Tyaji. Ok." Then he turned towards Vandana. "You will become Nivi's Maa.. Right.." Vandana's eyes filled with tears after seeing that scene. NT too watching them through the tears.

is it possible for a person to fall in love with the same person twice i think u just proved that it can happen love nivi's veeru- eagerly awaiting the next chapters and i have to say they always manage to bring a smile to my face

Originally posted by: edwardcullen19

Meera sorry dear i did not commented on your ff before but i read all the chapters at the time you updated them...i might say one thing dear that your ff is very different very good and awesome...you wrote Viren's character quite well dear...want to know why Viren is away from his family and what happened wrong...continue soon dear...i will be waiting for your updates

one more thing Chota Viren and Nivi are really very very cute dear😳